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Post by Seth Evans on Oct 30, 2011 9:42:03 GMT -6
SPELLING AND GRAMMAR! Nah, just messing. There were a few errors there for both spelling and grammar. During the first RP, I know the AJ brought it up in his RP but it's just something that you should make sure you check on to avoid giving them a little fuel... check the facts. There's times that I find myself going back months, and even years to make sure I get some of my facts straight. I do enjoy how the story behind your first and second RP, where Spike was seeing Aly. However, the second story where it was Spike meeting his dad --- I'll have to see how that pans out, if it ends here, or if it's going to continue? I enjoyed that you did bring up a fair mention of the past, but resorting back to the future. How, back in the "other place", AJ was the star over you. You were the two-time World Champion, sure, but he was the star over you because he played it off more while you stayed more in the back. Definitely bitter tension there from Spike towards former colleagues. In the present, though, Spike is the one that remains the most successful and is really noticed out there... has all these nCw achievements, and in the Hall of Fame, so there's just no denying that Spike Kane is the superior here. I think you and AJ have the making of a great feud, should you choose to expand it over several months. Too much story going on to settle it with just one.
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Post by Spike Kane on Nov 9, 2011 7:52:12 GMT -6
So first rp up for my legandary match with Angel. Man, I felt so awesome and pumped writing that. See! This is what happens when someone gives you something to work with and the two of you have developed something between your characters.
Win or lose, this has already been awesome.
Thoughts?
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Post by Joe Everyman on Nov 10, 2011 1:04:53 GMT -6
I liked the RP, I thought it flowed well and had some spots that were very good. I always love when people face Angel, cause they always bring out their A game, which you did. And I very much enjoyed the "blog posts" or whatever they were, I thought it was a good pause from the more seriousness of the rest of the RP.
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Post by Lionheart on Nov 10, 2011 12:12:23 GMT -6
Just got round to reading this RP, and I definately dig it. Any RP that wants to compete with Angel needs to have something extra about it and I got a sense of the emotion in Spike when reading his promo parts, as a well a sense of how much it means to him to win this week and beat Angel in general. Pretty easy to see that you were obviously well motivated when writing the RP.
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Post by Spike Kane on Nov 11, 2011 10:28:10 GMT -6
Thank you very much guys, Joe, Doc. I really appreciate it, and yes of course I really want to win this week, lol.
Second rp is up, similar style that I'm trying to keep going for a while. A little more thought out than just ranting, lol.
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Post by Nathan Webb on Nov 11, 2011 11:25:22 GMT -6
Very nice RP Spike. Should be a great match between Spike and Angel this week.
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Post by Spike Kane on Dec 10, 2011 8:47:39 GMT -6
This is the end of the "Insight" series I've been doing for a while, building to something nice to happen at Collision. What did you guys think? This rp has a special spot in my mind, for reasons you will all find out on Collision
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Dec 10, 2011 10:22:28 GMT -6
Love the Insight series. Shows a ton of reflection on his career and his future. Love em! Keep kicking ass holmes!
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Post by Spike Kane on Dec 29, 2011 12:58:28 GMT -6
So I just got my second last rp of Spike's career up. I just want you all to know that this isn't an angle, I'm not working anything, this is legit. Spike is retiring. I'm not saying he won't show up in the future for a one off or anything but as far as I can see, Spike is done.
So....
"The Beginning of the End"
and
"I Swear By My Pretty Floral Bonnet...."
are both up and I would really appreciate some feedback before I knock the final rp of Spike's career out there.
Thank you.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 29, 2011 21:39:15 GMT -6
I told you this on AIM, but no harm putting it here either after re-reading.
It was a fantastic RP, the first was good but this one was better. Whatever happens these RPs will guarantee a great send off for Spike and I for one will miss his work. Very well written with a good flow, I look forward to the final RP but yet I am also sad to go into it knowing it will be the end.
Bravo Spike.
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Post by Spike Kane on Dec 30, 2011 11:11:57 GMT -6
Thank you very much Sam, I value your opinion quite a lot so it means a lot, it also means alot that you said you would give me feedback and actually did, unlike OTHER PEOPLE!!!!
Ahem...
I assure you I plan on ending on a good note.
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Post by Spike Kane on Dec 31, 2011 12:41:04 GMT -6
That's it folks, the final Spike Kane roleplay has been posted Hope you enjoyed reading my stuff as much as I enjoyed writing it with you guys
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Post by Deleted on Dec 31, 2011 13:29:07 GMT -6
Fantastic final RP for Spike, it is such a shame that this is the end of Spike as I will miss his RPs. A fitting ending imo.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Dec 31, 2011 14:01:43 GMT -6
I'll be honest Spike, that was the best RP you've ever written. And you know me, I've been reading your stuff religiously since 2005. It was fantastic. Well done, and I sure am going to miss the career of my mentor.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2012 21:22:05 GMT -6
I really enjoyed the roleplay, it was full of emotion and it showed. It was well written and despite being long it did not feel like a chore reading it and was grammatically pretty good.
It flowed well enough to keep a readers attention and the character interaction was very good.
Nice work.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 16, 2012 9:49:38 GMT -6
Hey folks, been a while since I asked for feedback, just got my ppv rp done and was wondering if anybody felt like giving any feedback on the RP itself, and how my rp's/character direction have been recently.
Cheers.
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