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Post by Todd Williams on Mar 5, 2011 15:09:06 GMT -6
Feedback for yours truly lay it on thick, give me constructive criticism and i may just agree or I may ignore it because "drumroll"
IM TODD WILLIAMS!!!!!
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Post by Paul Star on Mar 6, 2011 16:05:49 GMT -6
I'm hooked! Good RP, but it will be because YOU'RE TODD WILLIAMS!
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Post by Todd Williams on Mar 9, 2011 13:20:17 GMT -6
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Post by Paul Star on Mar 10, 2011 1:28:07 GMT -6
Your first RP of the week is great. It's a pleasure to RP against you.
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Post by Todd Williams on Mar 10, 2011 1:43:08 GMT -6
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Post by Paul Star on Mar 10, 2011 5:56:24 GMT -6
Excellent second RP. I agree with what you said in my thread. We've worked well off one another, and this is going to be a great match.
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Post by Todd Williams on Mar 10, 2011 12:20:06 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Mar 10, 2011 12:36:15 GMT -6
I enjoyed your final RP, both you and Paul Star have had some very good banter back and forth and have likewise wrapped up your fued with a steady conclusion that both make perfect sense.
I agree you've worked well together, I look forward to reading your match when the PPV is put up!
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Post by Demetrious Young on Mar 18, 2011 16:23:08 GMT -6
this was a very good RP Todd. The beginning intro was nice as you went back and talked about the past (PPV). The whole RP had a nice past/present/future style to it that I really enjoyed. The video games continue and the Williams household and you can't seem to get Todd's attention while that damn Xbox is in the house. I can't wait til I see Crystal smash it when she reaches a high frustration level. I was surprised to see Todd (maybe) give in the end but I guess it happens. The end segment about me was also very nice, I loved the part about the Reflection of...never mind, that was a nice touch. Good luck at in our match.
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Post by Todd Williams on Mar 23, 2011 0:05:43 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Mar 23, 2011 7:51:09 GMT -6
Enjoyed it Todd, I look forward to seeing how we bounce off of one another between now and Saturday.
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Post by Steven Luke on Mar 23, 2011 12:07:54 GMT -6
Wow, Todd and Crystal have one effed up relationship. Very good job of describing how Todd feels about the whole situation and very good rp in general
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Post by Paul Star on Mar 24, 2011 19:25:43 GMT -6
Great RP! I really enjoyed it. You showed Todd's emotion, and the whole RP was a really good read. Screw the revolution! TODD WILLIAMS is going to put an end to it lol.
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Post by Todd Williams on Mar 26, 2011 2:29:03 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Mar 26, 2011 5:45:50 GMT -6
I enjoyed the rpm personally. It shed a light on Todd which goes a long way to explaining why he is the way he is and that is always a good thing. He also seems to have accepted the purpose of roberto's trash talk and that was to make Todd angry which sets up our match perfectly imo with us both ending on more serious notes. Good work Todd.
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Post by Todd Williams on Apr 5, 2011 14:12:15 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2011 15:59:45 GMT -6
I enjoyed it, shame to see their relationship going to hell!
Oh and I aren't called Roberto Young lol. Minor point, a good RP overall as per usual.
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Post by Todd Williams on Apr 7, 2011 12:54:00 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2011 18:08:47 GMT -6
Good RP as per usual Todd, it is very interesting to see where you go with Todd and Crystal's dissolving marriage and I for one am hooked.
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Post by Todd Williams on Apr 12, 2011 21:11:26 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Apr 13, 2011 7:54:54 GMT -6
Good starting RP, it is interesting watching Todd and Crystal get more and more distant.
As always, it is fun RPing against you and as last time I imagine the margins will be tight!
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Post by Trent Helms on Apr 13, 2011 8:26:25 GMT -6
I think it was one of your most overall best role-plays to date as Todd
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Post by Todd Williams on Apr 15, 2011 12:35:10 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Apr 15, 2011 14:42:21 GMT -6
I thought it was great Todd, Todd clearly has issues with his wife and it slowly unfolding in a really interesting fashion, I can't help but read both Todd's and Crystal's RPs, even when I aren't up against you.
Oh and yes, the bit about being able to fight dirty because you beat Star Wars was top work, showed that the happy go lucky Todd is still laive inside the anguish, well worked.
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Post by Todd Williams on Apr 16, 2011 16:33:30 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Apr 16, 2011 17:10:13 GMT -6
I always seems to be on the recieving end of some pretty dark stuff from Todd lol.
Good RP though, once again it has been really great writing against you etc. Enjoyed it.
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Post by Crystal Williams on Apr 23, 2011 21:56:04 GMT -6
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Post by Todd Williams on May 19, 2011 23:31:41 GMT -6
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Post by Todd Williams on Jun 24, 2011 8:00:39 GMT -6
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Post by Todd Williams on Jun 25, 2011 10:30:48 GMT -6
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