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Post by Philip Burns on Jul 20, 2008 2:31:13 GMT -6
im glad that you decided to put something forth. you have won in my opinion.
hopefully this will spawn into something and we can both find the inspiration we are looking for. maybe an angle can come out of this. pm me with anything you might be thinking.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Aug 2, 2008 19:35:43 GMT -6
I know it's relatively short to what I usually do, just didn't have much to work with *Looks at Joe*
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Post by jlhfan69 on Aug 2, 2008 19:41:05 GMT -6
When I read your RP... I could think of a single phrase running through my head. I can't remember who said it but it was along the lines of "All your heroes are dead, I killed them!"
Seriously, could you make Brad wanna cry more? God, you and Lance are gonna turn him emo by running down his family and his heroes.
<3 it.
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Post by msjsn3 on Aug 2, 2008 20:31:37 GMT -6
No offense...but I thought Davey had grown some balls! I like this one.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Aug 4, 2008 19:18:05 GMT -6
Isn't much, but the second one should be better sometime this week
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 8, 2009 18:35:33 GMT -6
Dude, that roleplay was awesome, I know I told you on MSN but you deserved to be told again in your feedback thread!
Great work!
Only criticism? Few spelling mistakes.... Thats all I got, seriously. And a few spelling mistakes are nothing when they are included in something that good.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jan 8, 2009 20:12:33 GMT -6
I ****ing hate you...damn your superior RPing skills >.<
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Post by Maniac on Jan 10, 2009 9:53:29 GMT -6
Davey, the beginning and the end of it were great, but the middle section really dragged it down, Davey getting off a plane, Davey waiting for a limo, Davey driving to his casino, Davey going up an elevator, you see what I mean? I liked it, I just felt it could have been way better had it just been the beginning and the end parts.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jan 11, 2009 18:18:16 GMT -6
Hey..I have not done this in awhile. give me a few weeks to shake off the ring rust
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Post by Maniac on Jan 11, 2009 18:27:32 GMT -6
I liked the second one more, for someone who hasn't been around in a while you did great. I'm looking forward to finally having a straight up match with you. What are we 2 me and 1 you? My first one is a DQ and then a count out, your win came after a run in, we gotta settle this bro man.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jan 11, 2009 18:31:49 GMT -6
Yeah I think thats the count. We do need to sir, hence my challenge to you in my first one
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Post by Maniac on Jan 11, 2009 20:28:03 GMT -6
Soon my old master.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jan 15, 2009 10:27:54 GMT -6
I Believe in Davey Ortega is up Feed back would be nice...you will receive a cookie
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Post by adm on Jan 15, 2009 15:12:42 GMT -6
I believe in Davey Ortega!
Good rp, the only thing I really can say is maybe to have Davey do more during the rp. It's really shoot, but the way Davey is, he might strike a few interesting thoughful poses amid his speaking. Stuff that would sell his genius.
BUT that's the only thing, spacing out the talking with a few actions. Because you did that REALLY well, I don't think I could promo on a match like you man
Now where's my cookie?
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jan 15, 2009 22:23:55 GMT -6
Ah thank you say.
*Hands him a chocolate chip cookie*
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Post by Falcon on Jan 18, 2009 11:47:17 GMT -6
I believe in Davey Ortega...
I reiterate
I don't care what anyone says...
Davey Ortega = The man
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jan 31, 2009 23:35:21 GMT -6
Just under the wire...
if it seems kind of rushed thats because it was, but I think it turned out nicely for the time constraint.
Feed back me bitches.
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Post by adm on Feb 8, 2009 12:51:22 GMT -6
Your latest was short but sweet. Hit some key details, and tried to distill the rumors Angel brought up bout the "Empire" Resistance. Only thing I wish I saw more of in this one was more about why the Revolution will fail, and why Resistance will put out the fire...I kinda missed the peak of the "You're all running, and you'll all fail". Still, very good rp, and nice to see you made it EDIT: I believe in Davey Ortega
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Post by Maniac on Feb 8, 2009 17:00:41 GMT -6
You make me ansy for next week.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Feb 9, 2009 0:16:26 GMT -6
Dude, dude dude you have no idea how unbelievable messed up I was before, during, and after that rp. Which I rushed and put together in under 45 minutes...yeah it was bad lol. That's alright though, because I'm actually going to rp this week and not wait until 3 hours before the deadline
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Post by Frostbyte on Feb 9, 2009 6:08:25 GMT -6
A loss to joe everyman could inspire anyone to step up their game... lol... irony is: i beat him (as scotty), he beat you.. but yet i couldn't beat manson.. *** damn nutsacks (yes plural)
enjoyed your RP though i didn't read it til after the show.. cos of the obvious time constraints.. i agree that it lagged slightly in the middle but was still generally a good read
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Post by adm on Feb 16, 2009 17:04:44 GMT -6
I don't know whether to be happy or sad about this new rp...it's good but...you really can feel a bit of your frustration with the PPV and other stuff in this. It's just...wow...so deep.
Decisive Decision...just...I still believe in Davey Ortega, now maybe someone will see why I do.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jun 17, 2009 13:59:41 GMT -6
First RP I have done in over four months is up
Kinda short I know, but all negative and positive feedback welcome.
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Post by adm on Jun 17, 2009 14:14:29 GMT -6
Biggest negative feedback from me: Please god use on-bright color font cuz those of us who use the default bg for the boards can't read parts without highlighting it...and that's not cool. Other than that...I actually LIKE the new ortega...you seem to be revitalized a bit. Like you don't care if you win, or lose...but that you just want to be out there, and doing what you do best. Kicking ass, even if you get your ass kicked more one week, the next could be better, get the rust off...we miss you man. We love you Davey...don't you EVER forget that. I believe in Davey Ortega
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jun 17, 2009 14:19:05 GMT -6
I will never use fonts that help other people!!! Never I say. But thank you. I'm trying to get the rust off, just as long as I make AJ think for a bit on his rps Im happy
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Post by Chris Brock on Jun 17, 2009 15:58:37 GMT -6
Having only read this one Rp from you, I have to say that it is very good..
I am assuming that you are a heel that is returning as a face after a sting in Rehab, which you play off very well. I love the tagline "what do you believe in?" It's great for this situation. Overall good job man. I am definatly looking forward to your next work.
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Post by adm on Jul 2, 2009 20:42:15 GMT -6
Short...sweet, very few if any grammar mistakes and it says only what needs to be said. I hope you put out two more good ones and win.
GO DAVEY!
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Post by Keybo Shabaz on Jul 3, 2009 4:25:43 GMT -6
Clear, Concise, To the Point, Powerful and Moving..
This is the Davey Ortega that wins the nCw World Heavyweight Title.
I Still[/i] believe in Davey Ortega.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Dec 4, 2009 4:51:07 GMT -6
first ''role play'' since I left the last time.
Not much, though constructive criticism would be nice.
and...GO!
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Post by Keybo Shabaz on Dec 4, 2009 5:49:33 GMT -6
My only criticism is you keep coming and going like the wind...
And it breaks my heart everytime.
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