Drake Tyson
Junior Member
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Tempestad = An Illegal
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Post by Drake Tyson on Aug 12, 2010 14:52:29 GMT -6
Holy **** holy **** holy ****.
You're a world destroyer man, plain and simple. If I had to RP against you I'd be all excited and ready to beat the Hollands....and then you'd put out an RP like that and I'd fall apart. I think by the end of this year you'll have set a new record for assholes ripped in an alotted amount of time.
Damn you're a beast.
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Post by Steven Luke on Aug 13, 2010 10:48:21 GMT -6
I dont want to be the one to sound like a dick but after reading your rp and then seeing Deez's comments I feel like I need to be brutally honest because it seems like some people are giving you a ton of praise just because your a hall of famer.
We go way back about four maybe five years Sam and I've always been impressed by you, but this RP was way different from what I remember. This RP seemed less to me the Diamond Dave Holland and more of the Ace. I don't want to compare you to him directly because it was still ten times better but it seemed like you were just rambling on and replying straight to everything in Doc's RP and not even caring about anyone else in the match because they hadn't thrown up a promo yet. The Hollands I remembered would never have had an RP that rambled that much on the same topic and were always entertaining but this RP did not keep me entertained in between the long stints or speech and I was a little disappointed. I'm sure it's just a little bit of ring rust and I'm sure with a Gibson RP up and after I RP the second one will be much better.
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Aug 14, 2010 16:41:35 GMT -6
Right, I'm going to feedback myself here.
That last one, 'The Other Brother'... Was average at best. I'm struggling at the moment people, I want to make sure everyone's aware of this. Not for pity, not for offers of help, support or positive comments, it's just so people don't get their hopes up too soon.
I wasn't happy with that one at all. So why post it? Because I know I couldn't do any better between now and deadline. And I don't know, but it feels like something more than ring rust. I can't say for certain because this is the first time I've come back from such a long break. I'm not giving up, but don't be surprised if I really really want to any time soon.
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Post by Steven Luke on Aug 14, 2010 18:07:13 GMT -6
I actually don't think that one was bad. The problem is it was really good in a development way and not a big match trying to win sort of way. If you keep this up and build the characters back up the way you seem to be I'm sure it will all come together.
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Post by Jason Blair on Sept 10, 2010 21:59:03 GMT -6
"Listen Up, Listen Well" was a great RP. It was also, I believe, what you needed to do. It really helped members like me who didn't know the history catch up. I really hope you wouldn't still consider yourself struggling, or in a slump. Loved it.
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Sept 21, 2010 17:42:09 GMT -6
"Despair and Hope" ...
It feels a little different to me... and kinda the good way. I know Mark threw a 'My lord Holland' in the Cbox but yeah.. feedback away would be nice. That one felt really good to write, possibly 'cause after initially reading Maniac's rp I hardly looked back at it. Nice to know I can still do that.
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Post by Steven Luke on Dec 30, 2010 17:25:52 GMT -6
I was slightly disappointed with that last RP. It wasn't bad but wasn't up to par with your World Champion stuff so far. I really think if you put out another one like that it will be a foregone conclusion that Charlie will win. As much as I want him to win I really want you to pull out all the stops and make him work for it in his last RP.
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Jan 7, 2011 17:53:29 GMT -6
Feeding this back would be nice. 'Watching and Waiting'.
I'm going to run with Milo for a while and this is the start of redeveloping him. I've spent so long building up Dave that Milo has been neglected. And I'm not talking months, I mean years. And not even the years of nCw.. even before then it had bene a long time since Milo had any decent attention paid to him by his creator. Sorry Milo.
What did y'all think?
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Post by Steven Luke on Jan 7, 2011 21:21:33 GMT -6
really good. i thought through the whole thing that it was going to twist up and be a dave rp but I was pleasantly surprised when it wasn't Awesome job man
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