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Post by adm on Jul 30, 2008 20:17:22 GMT -6
Always a good interesting variation of things in your rps, man. I read both the rps, and you got a lot of talk, a lot of CD, and even blogging; you definitely don't stick to much of a pattern if you feel you need to do something. Good stuff, as usual. Seems like being in a million feds has helped you expand what your rps are like beyond what they once were, which says a lot coming from a guy who's been seein your work getting better over the last three years, mostly the last year it's been nuts. Solid A work
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Post by Spike Kane on Oct 21, 2008 9:10:03 GMT -6
So glad your back here. Your style, story and smack talk just seem to work better here, maybe it's just me.
But a great roleplay to return with man, lookingforward to this angle developing and hope it actually happens.
Props.
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Oct 28, 2008 23:17:41 GMT -6
The first part of your rp covered the situation that everything that happens in a rp theoretically gets broadcast very well. Back in the XHF I would always have Bongo break the 4th wall and talk to the narrator about things, which would confuse the holy heck out of everyone else.
The second part, well.....I'm gonna have some fun with audio, ooooh yeah.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Aug 8, 2009 10:49:43 GMT -6
Wooo.......
I really liked the rp. There was alot of funny stuff but more importantly....BRAD KANE is coming back!
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Post by Kevin Hardaway on Aug 10, 2009 18:00:40 GMT -6
Nice RP, asswipe.
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Post by adm on Aug 10, 2009 19:55:44 GMT -6
I have one complaint as to why I did not like this rp, Craig...the ONLY thing I could find wrong: LENGTH. You went a lot too long. Repeated a lot of things, and it was based mostly in what you did...when nCw opened. You could have really summarized your past and shaved a large chunk off of it and kept it from seeming like all you ever did was 2 years ago.
There was good points made in the promo section, but I just felt there was a good deal of filler there to pad the rp to make it seem so huge when really you said a few main points. Length is not what is judged, but quality is. Remember that, trim the rps down a bit, and you can actually probably get further than you did the last couple times you were here.
I'm so gonna get killed by the staffers for critiquing you...and probably by you...oh well.
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Post by Maniac on Aug 22, 2009 22:53:15 GMT -6
Not a bad rp at all. It feels like you got a little rust on you, but from what you tell me you've been out of action for a while. If anything, I'd say shorten the Character Development up just a tad.
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Post by Evan Andrews on Oct 12, 2009 17:21:56 GMT -6
I really liked Chapter Four a lot. The story was amazing, you could feel the emotion coming out of the characters, and the promo was really really good.
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Post by Maniac on Oct 18, 2009 10:28:57 GMT -6
You and Spike are going to have match of the week and possibly feud of the year after this last week. Great work.
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Post by Lance "The Icon" Ryan on Nov 30, 2009 19:33:35 GMT -6
I loved the last roleplay. Based on what the staff have wrote, I think that it measures up very well to what they are looking for as well. Storyline wasn't too much, left me hanging wondering what will happen next, much like a soap is supposed to do. The promo was quality, brad pointed out his flaws, his strengths, and those of his opponent. Well done, glad to have you back.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Dec 11, 2009 15:22:30 GMT -6
You don't spit in the wind,
You don't tug on Supermans Cape,
and you don't badmouth Brad Kane's family.
These are all valuable lessons to be learned in a life I feel.
Cool rp dude.
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Dec 29, 2009 19:27:10 GMT -6
Damnit! That was the kind of promo I was waiting to see! Too bad you got distracted before posting it, lol
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Post by Lance "The Icon" Ryan on Feb 6, 2010 14:48:25 GMT -6
As always I loved your stuff this week. I love the way that you can mix the hating heel BK with the family man that defends his family. I always enjoy the clash and loved the promo this week.
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Post by Brad Kane on Mar 7, 2010 22:35:48 GMT -6
I hate bumping my own thread but just letting people know that if they want to feedback Megan, do so in this thread as well.
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Post by adm on Mar 11, 2010 21:51:51 GMT -6
Megan should have a different style from Brad, just saying. Because, though they have the same goal, it differentiates the characters not only on the page, but in your mind a bit better. I liked her rp, but it was definitely in need of a different way to be told, if only to change up things for you.
Also, you're a tough ****er to face...research is my friend to fill the gaps. Good luck and don't kill me with your psychic powers, I rather enjoy life.
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Post by adm on Mar 12, 2010 21:29:21 GMT -6
Your 2nd rp as Megan really helps give her a bit more life, more individuality. It's pretty awesome man, hopefully you kick those three other chicks in this one.
Also, NO EYE HURTING COLORS!!!!
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Post by Jayson Matthews on Apr 19, 2010 15:31:15 GMT -6
That was a good rp man. Definately worth the Grilled Cheese I owe you.
Angel has his work cut out for him.
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Post by Shawn Styles on May 25, 2010 17:37:28 GMT -6
After reading your latest, I had one question buzzing through my head... Why don't the arguments I ever have with my girlfriend, which sometimes resemble the one you wrote, ever end in me spanking her? Although, the kick to the shins makes sense.
Besides that, what you did here was a great counter-RP to Angel's. In fact, I don't think you could've countered it any better then you did. The whole "I'm done in a year and a half" thing through me a little off, but it went perfectly after I read the rest of the RP. The whole "Angel needs to win but I don't because I'll just keep getting back up and trying again" thing was great. And the emotional part at the end about Kane's deceased daughter really put a great touch on the whole thing. It will definately be interesting come Sunday to see if Kane can make it two in a row against the champ. Good work.
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Post by Zelda Knite on Jun 2, 2010 23:45:22 GMT -6
I really liked your second one, it played off what has been said so far for this match very well and showed a lot of depth to Brad Kane.
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Post by Charlie Velez on Jun 8, 2010 23:42:58 GMT -6
Two thumbs up my main broseph. Looking like a true champ with this stuff
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Post by Brad Kane on Feb 26, 2011 2:04:32 GMT -6
Yanno wut. Have at me.
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Post by Steven Luke on Feb 26, 2011 7:11:56 GMT -6
Brad Kane sucks (Didn't read your RPs at all)
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Post by doc on Jul 2, 2011 2:39:51 GMT -6
Woo dangerous j went in
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Post by Brad Kane on Jul 28, 2011 18:56:01 GMT -6
Anything?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2011 19:27:18 GMT -6
Good work this week Brad, your RPs have been very good since your return. the build to your match with Adam has so much potential to go so mahy ways and your RP does a very good job of building the conflict up. Top work.
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