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Post by Angel on Jan 6, 2009 22:46:33 GMT -6
Final rp is up. As I'm sure some of you have noticed my rps were heavily inspired by the graphic novel "Watchmen" which thanks to Kole, I am now reading.
Some feedback would be awesome.
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Jack Manson
Senior Member
It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 7, 2009 6:55:14 GMT -6
Fantastic as always mate, well done.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jan 12, 2009 0:40:41 GMT -6
You never cease to amaze me, sir.
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Post by Maniac on Jan 12, 2009 0:52:09 GMT -6
Stupid vid won't work, reposted it 3 times.
Thanks Davey.
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Post by Angel on Jan 13, 2009 20:35:03 GMT -6
Did Angel just raid Honcho's apartment? Looks like.
"This is not a Disney movie" tried not to make it some giant pile of boredom, hope you like it.
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Post by Mike Honcho on Jan 13, 2009 20:53:38 GMT -6
I hope you know that
1. The doors have no locks
2. I steal cable
3. Subway gives you free subs if you drop your pants and say you're tea-baggin the meatballs
Me casa es su casa! Love ya!
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Post by Maniac on Jan 13, 2009 21:41:13 GMT -6
lol
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Post by Philip Burns on Jan 14, 2009 1:30:29 GMT -6
wherever you got that idea is awesome
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Frostbyte
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Post by Frostbyte on Jan 14, 2009 3:45:45 GMT -6
TWIZTID!!
that is all.
(really not helpful i know but i was excited about something to do with your RP lol)
Good work though man. I like how you always have a mysterious opening statement... it's not a scene-setter or speach, it's just there and it works
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Post by Maniac on Jan 14, 2009 11:06:54 GMT -6
Thanks for the idea Josh.
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Post by adm on Jan 14, 2009 11:58:38 GMT -6
I love your rps. The rp really draws from the PPV like your stuff should be.
Only thing I can say is that you gotta get a match vs me.
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Post by Maniac on Jan 15, 2009 5:08:07 GMT -6
Oh, and now Diamond isn't good enough? Jeez.
Soon my friend, there are many people I still have to face... Davey.
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Post by Angel on Jan 19, 2009 23:37:54 GMT -6
All Hope is Gone.
First rp for the week is up. Good? Bad? Bitterly awesome?
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jan 20, 2009 7:09:43 GMT -6
This is why I love going against you, because you instantly bring so many ideas to my head that I can just rp right after I read it.
Good show sir.
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Post by Maniac on Jan 29, 2009 21:34:29 GMT -6
This is why I love going against you, because you instantly bring so many ideas to my head that I can just rp right after I read it. Good show sir. this is what we call irony.... Feedback for "PULL UP YOUR PANTS" would be awesome.
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Post by Angel on Feb 2, 2009 18:13:53 GMT -6
"Everyone" is up for your viewing pleasure, feedback is welcomed.
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Post by adm on Feb 2, 2009 18:54:14 GMT -6
My big complaint is that it's a Trauma rp posted in the Collision boards Yeah, the rp kicked ass. Kinda makes me realize...the resistance does look a LOT like Empire 4.0. Ace, Ortega, omg...IT IS HAPPENING AGAIN!!! AotR vs Empire...one more time...good god...WHY! WHY!!! 4 stars
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Post by Maniac on Feb 2, 2009 18:57:33 GMT -6
oops, fixed it, thanks.
And thanks for the feedback.
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Post by Maniac on Feb 3, 2009 0:45:17 GMT -6
"This is the end"
Whoever gives me feedback gets a special surprise.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Feb 3, 2009 1:06:04 GMT -6
*checks pants*
Yup, I came.
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Post by Maniac on Feb 3, 2009 5:05:35 GMT -6
I told you it'd be special.
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Post by adm on Feb 3, 2009 18:53:56 GMT -6
I came too...Sorry AJ you just got Pwned!
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Post by Angel on Feb 8, 2009 22:44:02 GMT -6
"A long time ago" is my first ppv rp, hope you enjoyed it.
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Post by adm on Feb 8, 2009 22:58:52 GMT -6
Darth Angel Vader...you rule
Long but very much important stuff to say. Just hoping to see the whole match's rps like this, not just you but Ortega, etc etc.
Nice way to start off the PPV
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Post by Angel on Feb 12, 2009 10:18:00 GMT -6
I can' believe Davey kills kittens and Jack eats babies...
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Post by adm on Feb 12, 2009 15:13:06 GMT -6
Those pics were so badly photoshopped it's not even funny...but somehow they added to your rp...though not in the way you wanted.
The pictures made it seem like...Angel was going the kid way of dealing with this. Instead of taking a high road he went and photoshopped some crappy images, or had his kids/relatives' kids do it for him. Something a kid would do...very teenager...and kinda distracted from the point you were making.
The rp in and of itself was really good, as usual, but...the images just distracted more than added to it. It was funny at first then I thought and it's sad to see Angel stoop that low...he's like a 16 year old boy who'd probably go from those two images to photoshopping boobs on his face or on someone's body. ANd I was HALF-expecting after those two to see Davey and Jack with tits...but this board probably wouldn't allow it unless there was a bra on the boobs.
Sorry, but I think it kinda ruins some of the credibility you had, man. Said some great stuff but the images give the way wrong impression bout Angel's maturity level.
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Post by Maniac on Feb 12, 2009 21:41:50 GMT -6
You look like poopy.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Feb 19, 2009 11:38:18 GMT -6
I just read your RP...it's time's like these where I REALLY REALLY REALLY hate you...but it's also times like these there I get to show off and beat you hopefully. It was fantabulous, no flaws, nothing wrong...which is the bad part for me
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Post by Maniac on Feb 19, 2009 20:01:55 GMT -6
Be my Valentine Joe?
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Post by Maniac on Feb 22, 2009 1:53:27 GMT -6
"I Hate Them" is up.
A little slap stick, a little old rp refrencing, a little bad assery. Feedback is welcomed.
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