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Post by adm on Jan 12, 2009 16:29:41 GMT -6
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jan 12, 2009 16:32:23 GMT -6
*Claps* That was ****ing awesome! That's exactly how I thought the character should go.
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Post by adm on Jan 12, 2009 16:38:28 GMT -6
Why thank you Joe, thanks to you and Angel the character exists and I'm back so I'm happy it turned out well.
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JFK
Senior Member
Sucks to be you.
Posts: 950
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Post by JFK on Jan 12, 2009 17:43:21 GMT -6
Dude if this is going where I think it's going it could very well be the best character you've created.
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Post by adm on Jan 12, 2009 17:58:49 GMT -6
so, generally good feeling so far bout this, that's pretty freakin sweet lol
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Post by Bannedingo on Jan 12, 2009 20:27:53 GMT -6
dude, if all your RPs are that great... i think you just created my new favorite character.
sorry Joe, i hope you understand.
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Post by Maniac on Jan 12, 2009 20:42:50 GMT -6
I... am.. a little creeped out... I knew you could do this man. Awesome job. I hope I can give you something at least equally as awesome.
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Post by adm on Jan 17, 2009 15:26:11 GMT -6
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Post by Maniac on Jan 17, 2009 20:44:54 GMT -6
Way to kick my ass.
Now lets keep the ball rolling.
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Post by adm on Jan 17, 2009 20:54:12 GMT -6
Way to kick my ass. Now lets keep the ball rolling. Yes, let's keep the ball rolling till the ball rolls into the river and kills a ****load of fish! THEN TO THE OCEAN TO CHOKE A SHARK!
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Post by adm on Feb 6, 2009 16:23:39 GMT -6
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Jack Manson
Senior Member
It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 7, 2009 12:30:20 GMT -6
I don't really know dude. I wasn't really feeling the character at first. I felt your previous roleplays had way too much character development in them and then maybe only a small paragraph of relevant text towards the match. This one was better though, I seem to be figuring out your character now but nothing has really caught my attention just yet. I think maybe focus more on the match instead of your characters past in your roleplays because personally I find myself skipping those parts and wishing you would get to the point sooner. I don't mean to offend and I don't think you'll know who I'm talking about but others will, your roleplays remind me a lot of Dr. Peppers roleplays. I'm sure many will disagree but that's how I see it. Hope this constructive crit rubs you up in the right way and doesn't piss you off
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Post by adm on Feb 7, 2009 13:34:54 GMT -6
I'll see about lightening the character development but I won't eliminate it...as this isn't a character that's easily deveolped by just talking about matches.
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Post by Maniac on Feb 8, 2009 16:58:10 GMT -6
You and I have discussed this a little bit before, about going a little over board with the char development. Overall I liked it, but like we talked about before, just cutting standard promos isn't a bad thing.
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Post by adm on Feb 12, 2009 17:00:31 GMT -6
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Post by Gib on Feb 12, 2009 21:19:01 GMT -6
It is so fun RP'ing against you, I am having a great time. The give and take is amazing and I thoroughly appreciate it. Thanks for making this week one of the most fun I have had in a long time.
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Post by adm on Feb 12, 2009 21:23:41 GMT -6
It is so fun RP'ing against you, I am having a great time. The give and take is amazing and I thoroughly appreciate it. Thanks for making this week one of the most fun I have had in a long time. Don't worry, the feeling is mutual. we can both thank Angel/Diamond for booking the match later.
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Post by adm on Feb 15, 2009 14:38:45 GMT -6
Ok, the PPV is over, and results are waiting to be written. I loved facing off against Harold, now...I want feedback on the week as a whole...where did I go wrong, where did I go right...did Bates come off as he should have or did he go out of character a bit too much in sake of the match?
Just a question. Reply...if you feel like it, if not...I'll wait till results to see how well I did
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Post by Joe Everyman on Feb 15, 2009 14:49:44 GMT -6
*Hands you the title* There ya go ;D
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Post by Maniac on Feb 15, 2009 20:37:24 GMT -6
A W E S O M E
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Post by Gib on Feb 15, 2009 20:55:59 GMT -6
I think you did an excellent job this week. I loved RP'ing with you in the match and feel we had a certain connection that isn't made often. I know I have said it many times this week, but I want to once again express my thanks for the excellent week. I had a great time.
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Lord Dominicus
Junior Member
Resident Loser
More Evil than Rob Diamond Could Ever Hope to Be
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Feb 17, 2009 23:20:56 GMT -6
My god, how a man can be so violently crazy, and yet so normal scares me. I hope I never meet anyone like this in real life.
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Post by Maniac on Feb 19, 2009 21:58:29 GMT -6
I liked the way Bates sort of broke character because of his pain meds. Keep it up and you'll hold onto that title for a long time.
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Post by adm on Feb 23, 2009 17:38:03 GMT -6
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MGK
Rookie
Go-Go-Gadget Flow!
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Post by MGK on Feb 24, 2009 11:11:28 GMT -6
I just finished your last RP, and I dig it man. I'm not as familiar with all the storylines going on at the moment, but I didn't feel like I was missing anything based on how you wrote, so props! this crazy mF'r Bates completely OWNS based on what I'm reading.
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Post by adm on Mar 4, 2009 21:58:37 GMT -6
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Post by Maniac on Mar 7, 2009 1:28:34 GMT -6
Two absolutely fantastic rps,but expecially the second one. I liked where you went with it, showing Bates slipping slowly into FREAK behavior.
EDIT: Gonna be a tough one to follow too, the second one was really good imo.
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Post by adm on Mar 11, 2009 18:14:45 GMT -6
ncw2k7rp.proboards82.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=trauma&thread=7612 - Battle Not With Freaks, Lest Become One Yeah, new rp is up. I tried a style similar to the Watchmaker Chapter of Watchmen Graphic Novel this time. I will probably not be doing this style often, but I just felt like I needed to try it out just once. This is sort of the end of one major character arc dealing with Harold, the end of the want to destroy him, and a very late want to save him. We'll see where this goes this week and beyond. Feedback appreciated but not required.
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Post by Maniac on Mar 11, 2009 21:51:52 GMT -6
One, you got to it before me you bastage.
Two, you did it way better than I ever could.
Three, that may or may not of been your best rp as Bates thus far, seriously.
Four, no one ever gets to four, you ever notice that?
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Post by Gib on Mar 13, 2009 20:33:51 GMT -6
I really enjoyed your RP this week, I am glad that we can keep it fresh despite the fact that we have been opposite one another 3 times in less than a month. This storyline is among the best I have ever been involved in, and like I have said countless times, 13 years is a long time.
Thanks for the great stuff to play off, I am glad you enjoy my stuff and think that we steal the show consistently.
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