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Post by Diego Davies on Nov 16, 2009 12:27:04 GMT -6
First roleplay is up... I am a little rusty, but hoping for some feedback to improve and get better.
Thanks,
Diego
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Post by Will Washington on Nov 16, 2009 19:51:44 GMT -6
I've got a little feedback for you.
Establish location and movement. You didn't really describe the setting and surroundings at all. It's a pretty big part of an RP. Also, try to come up with names for the RPs instead of going with RP #1. That's not a big thing, but it's just a thing we do.
Good luck.
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