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Post by Shane Hunt on Dec 11, 2009 18:25:32 GMT -6
Hiya all, would you read my Shane Hunt RPs so far and tell me what you think? It'd be much appreciated.
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Post by Jake Keeton on Dec 12, 2009 11:50:55 GMT -6
I like them better than your Paul James stuff, not saying James is bad I just prefer Hunt from what I've read so far. My biggest thing is both your guys are just so... nice. I know you lean towards face with them but they're like unrealistically nice.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Dec 12, 2009 12:26:29 GMT -6
Shane isn't that nice. He's insulted all his opponents in my RPs, and he's told them he's taking them down. He even told Tempestad that he'd bleed at the hands of Shane. Is that how you speak to people when you're being nice?
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Post by Maniac on Dec 12, 2009 16:57:21 GMT -6
I'll give you real feedback after I'm done reading all the rps, but please do me a favor and label which rps belong to which character.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Dec 12, 2009 17:01:40 GMT -6
OK, shall do in future.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Nov 29, 2010 12:42:35 GMT -6
I found this! You know what to do. Be brutal, but know that I already think I need to improve. I'm just not back up to speed yet.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Dec 6, 2010 12:26:19 GMT -6
Please feedback my recent RPs. I put a small flashback in my second Riot RP, which is something I've never tried before.
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Post by Steven Luke on Dec 7, 2010 16:38:24 GMT -6
I really liked the Collision RP. I like how you ripped apart his gimmick and background because of the lack of material from him. Really good RP overall
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Post by Shane Hunt on Dec 18, 2010 8:19:35 GMT -6
What's that I hear you all say? You want to feedback my RPs from this week? Well, don't let me stop you!
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Post by Steven Luke on Dec 30, 2010 17:08:51 GMT -6
You fed my back and I always return the favor.
I really enjoyed your RP but I'm going to try and explain why I didn't put you in my top five even though you were the first one to do every single RP available for the Riot.
When I read your latest RP, which I thought was your best so far, it seemed like there was more description and action then actual focus on the match. You had a lot of good things to say about your opponents and you did a great job at saying them but even though the RP was long the promoing about your opponents felt short and choppy.
Overall it was a really good RP but not yet on par with the top contenders of the Riot
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 8, 2011 14:04:01 GMT -6
Feed the back please.
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Post by Lex Sense on Feb 8, 2011 20:31:28 GMT -6
I really liked what you wrote this week, so far. That bit between Star and Hunt made me feel so sorry for Star that, I just had to point and laugh at him. Great work bro.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 8, 2011 20:35:45 GMT -6
I was trying to get people to point and laugh at Paul, so I achieved my goal... No wait, I was trying to get them to feel sorry for him! Meh, same difference. Thanks a lot for the feedback.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 11, 2011 15:43:42 GMT -6
Second RP of the week is up, with more Joe bashing. Have a read, and give me some feedback please.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Mar 24, 2013 4:46:05 GMT -6
It's been so long since I last RPed competitively, that I feel I need some feedback on what I wrote for my match this week. How do you think I did? How could I improve?
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