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Post by sallymartinez on Jan 5, 2010 2:09:17 GMT -6
A Legend in the making pt1
Any thoughts?
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Post by adm on Jan 5, 2010 11:14:29 GMT -6
It was an interesting rp, and it seems you've used this character before somewhere as you are very comfortable with it. The style is also fairly interesting, but I'll have to get to know the character a bit more from the 2nd rp to really be able to judge on where to go next. P.S. Nice to see you follow ghosts here
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Post by sallymartinez on Jan 9, 2010 0:46:23 GMT -6
Legend in the making pt 2 is up
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Post by adm on Jan 9, 2010 11:10:18 GMT -6
my main bit of feedback is a question more or less. Did you mean to call Emma "Watts" instead of her actual name as a joke/slander or was it just trying to come across as the character not knowing much? That kind of confused me, especially after calling Roxi a pornstar, just wanted to know if my assumption is right or not.
Other than that, some interesting trash-talk stuff going on here. Would like to get to know the character a bit more, but that can always be done over time.
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Post by sallymartinez on Jan 10, 2010 0:38:49 GMT -6
Calling her Emma Watts is a slander type deal. If you recall my first rp talked about the cooch pics and paparazzi. You know me I talk more trash then anything else. Trust me you will get to know Sally more but I am doing the match talk for now and really had nothing to work with but it was fun. lol
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Post by sallymartinez on Jan 15, 2010 23:35:07 GMT -6
Legend in the making pt 3 what'da think?
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Post by adm on Jan 16, 2010 0:58:23 GMT -6
work on the grammar errors and it'll be better, but it really did tell all that needed to be told about the history. And between the two of us we were able to remember about...half each.
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Post by sallymartinez on Jan 16, 2010 1:31:52 GMT -6
Yeah I'll work on my grammar but not gonna go modify it don't want ppl to think I am cheating. I'll work on my grammar next time around Yeah we did remember alot. Man I really hope this fued explodes more. lol
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Post by sallymartinez on Jan 23, 2010 23:28:05 GMT -6
Legend in the Making pt 4 any thoughts.?
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Post by Will Washington on Jan 23, 2010 23:35:25 GMT -6
You had two Part 3's. So really you should be on Part 5.
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Post by Leonard Fox on Jan 24, 2010 11:06:05 GMT -6
It was a good RP, wish I could of counted it, because I really liked it.
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