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Post by Kelly Fox on Jan 5, 2010 11:18:52 GMT -6
Yeah.
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Post by adm on Jan 5, 2010 11:28:18 GMT -6
The intro...classic. I'm sorry, but that little family feud just shows exactly what realism is made of, Adam. We're all boned if you keep that part up.
The bulk of the rest of the rp the game references work well, but I wonder how far you can keep going with Zelda references before you have to move on to other things like Mario or Metroid or even Final Fantasy.
Looks like we've got quite a lot of talented men rping as women...and the observations make both men and women in this division a very entertaining 2nd division for this fed to have.
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Post by Kelly Fox on Jan 8, 2010 18:09:01 GMT -6
2nd RP is up, enjoy it or die. Going more into Adam and Zelda's relationship, since I had never mentioned her before as Adam. Trying to lay some groundwork.
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Post by adm on Jan 8, 2010 18:53:12 GMT -6
yeah, good groundwork laying, Adam...now remind me to intentionally lose so I don't have to face you You scare me.
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Post by Kelly Fox on Mar 8, 2010 0:32:40 GMT -6
Developmental RP posted.
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Post by Kelly Fox on Mar 21, 2010 21:04:36 GMT -6
PPV RP #1 posted, trying to get a head start in case I'm not around later in the week.
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Post by adm on Mar 21, 2010 23:15:09 GMT -6
yes...you may not be around later this week...also...NUDE PHOTO TIME! We need to see some nude Zelda...would get publicity
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Post by Kelly Fox on Mar 22, 2010 20:33:39 GMT -6
#2
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Post by Adam Knite on Mar 23, 2010 18:30:11 GMT -6
#3 in the books
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Post by Will Washington on Mar 23, 2010 18:40:18 GMT -6
Can I kiss this RP on the mouth? I'm really glad you did the right thing with Zelda and let her continue as a role model for the little girl nCw fans. You're on such a roll with Zelda right now, you're unstoppable.
Will/Zelda vs. Seph/Cleo next week. Mixed Tag. Book it!
But yeah....I loved the RP.
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Post by adm on Mar 23, 2010 19:08:48 GMT -6
*wishes he could take back his vote*
Yep...you're gonna retain...never gonna drop the belt...everyone else can see my words and get mad at me, but it's the ****ing truth.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Mar 31, 2010 12:02:03 GMT -6
I'm loving the RP's (Zelda and Adam's) this week so far. I'm always a big fan of "real life" rp's, instead of just "I'm ganna kill this bitch" standard RP's. Good stuff, keep it up.
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Post by Zelda Knite on Mar 31, 2010 14:12:27 GMT -6
I'm loving the RP's (Zelda and Adam's) this week so far. I'm always a big fan of "real life" rp's, instead of just "I'm ganna kill this bitch" standard RP's. Good stuff, keep it up. Oh... I'll keep it up alright.....
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Post by Steven Luke on Mar 31, 2010 14:21:50 GMT -6
The most recent Zelda RP seemed really casual but at the same time got a lot of points across towards the match subtly, stayed with the storyline of Kelly/Awesome, and seemed to build well towards her next feud. Very good stuff
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Post by Joe Everyman on Apr 9, 2010 0:36:14 GMT -6
You make me seem like such a jerk in your RP's >.> Even if that is how I act sometimes...most of the time <.< Sad thing is, I know girls who have acted like that towards me before, so it's like your stalking me or something Edit: I do like the way you use the Sam character though, it's alot like me Keep up the good work, and you'll never lose the Women's title. Which seems to be the plan anyway.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Apr 27, 2010 20:36:26 GMT -6
Funny stuff dude. I laugh every time Zelda calls Kelly "booberella".
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Post by Zelda Knite on Jun 2, 2010 0:58:37 GMT -6
I tried something different with this new RP "Please save me". I tried to get into her head more, to show some of her emotions and to show why she feels so strongly about this.
I know trying something a bit different with an established character is asking for a lot of "It didn't feel right" comments, but hey, i've always been about getting deeper into my characters and changing the style up, so I'd still actually like to have some feedback on that one if you have the time.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jun 9, 2010 1:56:01 GMT -6
Your latest one was very good. Proubly one of the best story telling RP's you've done with Zelda ever. But, you bridged too far into the sappy love story one, without keeping Zeldaberg a badass. Therefore, you lose points. Overall though, great RP.
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Post by Drake Tyson on Jun 9, 2010 3:37:40 GMT -6
I hated it for reasons stated in the cbox.
Constructive criticism: Use next week to make that RP a dream sequence.
Haha it was good, but sappy. And you gave away her virginity this week? You save that **** for PPV!
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Post by Zelda Knite on Jun 9, 2010 8:14:25 GMT -6
lolZ
1. I never said they went any further after the scene fades out.
2. I try not and do every major life changing event for just PPV's like some people *looks at Spike*. It's a little non coincidental when every major event for a character happens for a PPV match don't you think? If I win a PPV match I want it to be because I have compelling characters and do good writing with bringing you in to care about my work as a whole, not because I can for one week gut out an awesome story... then do crap for the rest of the month. I want to stay consistently good through the entire time, if that means I don't get a PPV win because I did better work through the week... so be it.
3. I'm honored that you guys feel so strongly about this character. It only proves that the stories I'm telling with her are working, otherwise you wouldn't care what she does with her pretend life.
4. Lastly, thanks for the feedback... jerks.
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Post by Drake Tyson on Jun 9, 2010 12:22:36 GMT -6
Well I always say Zelda as like, the only truly wholesome and good character we have. Now she's off getting nailed by Falcon. She's just like errybody else now.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Jun 9, 2010 14:36:38 GMT -6
It was a good rp, and I understood why Zelda was doing what she was doing...but my thing is....Falcon is old. He just said he was a 14 year veteran so that has to make him like 34 at least, if he started wrestling at twenty. And Zelda is still totally young.....
Falcon = Pedophile?
New investigations may arise.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jul 12, 2010 2:27:31 GMT -6
Time, is going by, so much faster than I, And I'm starting to regret not spending all of it with you. Now I'm, wondering why, I've kept this bottled inside, So I'm starting to regret not telling all of it to you. So if I haven't yet, I've gotta let you know,
You're never gonna be alone from this moment on. If you ever feel like letting go, I won't let you fall. You're never gonna be alone. I'll hold you 'til the hurt is gone. Yeah, there ya go. That's basically what I think of Zelda and Falcon. It's a good thing, don't worry Dawson
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Post by Joe Everyman on Sept 10, 2010 0:45:11 GMT -6
Your latest Zelda one was top notch. I enjoyed the entire thing, it was great. Nothing wrong with it at all. And I got a like smile at the end, and more RPs never do that. Very well done boss man.
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Post by Jason Blair on Sept 10, 2010 0:54:38 GMT -6
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