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Post by Shane Hunt on Jan 15, 2010 6:34:07 GMT -6
So, what do you think of my Paul James RPs since he came back from his "injury" and decided a name and attitude change was in order? There's a developmental RP, and two Collision RPs.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Jan 18, 2010 19:43:48 GMT -6
Please give me feedback on my latest RP titled An attitude filled shopping trip, and I'd still love some feedback on my other RPs since I came back from my hiatus.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jan 19, 2010 10:43:59 GMT -6
I like your rps because they're different. It seems almost a deliberate tactic. Instead of the "here I am, promo" type rp's you have weird settings where nobody would ever expect to cut a promo.
I liked your little jab at Bates too, I thought it was quite funny and a good use of humour (unlike some people who just don't get it)
I'm looking forward to your next rp dude, keep it up.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Jan 19, 2010 16:01:11 GMT -6
Cheers for the feedback. My latest RP is up. It's called "A particularly busy Sunday". Check it out when you have a fair while to spare, as it's rather lengthly, then please give me feedback.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Jan 26, 2010 12:29:14 GMT -6
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Post by Shane Hunt on Jan 28, 2010 16:18:22 GMT -6
That's RP two posted. It's called Earl Grey with attitude! Check it out, and let me know what you think.
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Post by Jabari Woodhead on Jan 28, 2010 17:30:58 GMT -6
I really enjoyed this rp and like Spike said above its awesome because it takes place somewhere where promos don't take place. The only thing I would say to change is adding color for the different people who are talking. Its only purely from a keeping the people who are talking apart from eachother
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Post by Shane Hunt on Jan 28, 2010 17:34:48 GMT -6
OK, I'll see about adding some pretty colours for ya. Cheers for your feedback.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Jan 30, 2010 19:55:39 GMT -6
Check out my third PPV RP, An evening with the Hunts. I really enjoyed typing it, and hopefully it shows.
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Post by Cyrus Daniels on Jan 31, 2010 8:47:51 GMT -6
very good rps this week, though in your last one I was kind of confused by the 'sblack persons', I assume it was just some weird ass typo or something I missed...
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Post by Shane Hunt on Jan 31, 2010 12:07:53 GMT -6
What the Hell? That isn't in the copy I've got saved to Word...
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 4, 2010 18:54:53 GMT -6
Second RP up. It's called Interesting reading. Check it out and let me know what you think.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 12, 2010 15:10:35 GMT -6
Please give me feedback for my two latest RPs that I posted this week.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 15, 2010 20:40:53 GMT -6
My first RP of this week is up. I've got a huge fatal four way this week, so I'm trying extra hard. The RP is called "A backstage announcement." Check it out and leave me some feedback in here please.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 17, 2010 20:09:01 GMT -6
Check out my second Paul Star RP for the Fatal Four Way, and give me some feedback. The RP is called "No more Mr. Nice Guy."
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 24, 2010 21:05:34 GMT -6
Please read my first and second Crossroads RPs, and give me some feedback on them.
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Post by adm on Feb 24, 2010 21:18:08 GMT -6
I like things you do, but man...you gotta cut your rps in like half...seriously, you had enough material in the 2nd to cover all 3 for the PPV if you wanted. Not joking, here. Also...I dislike your lack of wet boobs
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 24, 2010 21:20:53 GMT -6
I've still got a load planned for RP 3. It's going to be a blast writing it, but no wet boobs... Sorry! Cheers for the feedback.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Mar 1, 2010 21:00:18 GMT -6
Read and feed my first RP of the week. It's called X marks the Star.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Mar 5, 2010 19:58:40 GMT -6
Please leave feedback about my two Fatal Four Way RPs. The second is up now, and it's called "It's plane to see."
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Post by chris on Mar 5, 2010 20:28:33 GMT -6
Awesome job man. A lot of you guys here in nCw are fantastic writers. I'm honored to be here. Also Paul, I can't wait to read your next one. If it's anything as good as this one, your opponents are in danger.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Mar 9, 2010 17:27:13 GMT -6
First RP is up for the Coliseum qualifying match against Xavier Cross. It's titled "Awesome sandwich."
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Post by Shane Hunt on Mar 19, 2010 6:36:57 GMT -6
Only 1 RP this week, which was nice. Check out "I love three ways" and chuck me some feedback. Love ya.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Mar 23, 2010 19:12:12 GMT -6
That's PPV RP 1 up. Check out "A shooting Star gains momentum." and give me some feedback please.
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Post by Steven Luke on Jan 3, 2011 9:58:38 GMT -6
Wow, that's all I can say. It's crazy how much different you are with Paul Star then Shane Hunt and man, it was totally awesome. I really loved it
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Post by Paul Star on Jan 3, 2011 14:29:07 GMT -6
Hooray for my back being fed! NOM NOM NOM! Now, feed it more please.
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Post by Will Washington on Jan 3, 2011 22:52:23 GMT -6
I loved your work months ago when you were around and it's still top notch. Cambridge Coalition forever sir.
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Post by Paul Star on Jan 4, 2011 4:17:01 GMT -6
Feck yeah! Cheers for the feedback. Now, bring Will back!
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Post by Paul Star on Jan 20, 2011 18:18:21 GMT -6
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Post by Freakke on Jan 20, 2011 19:17:28 GMT -6
Tis some good stuff. The DDK jab at the end was pretty funny. The picture is perfect save for the fact you said it was a viagra commercial yet you can clearly read Pfizer on the pills. Thats just a small quirk though.
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