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Post by Alex Jones on Feb 2, 2010 3:42:52 GMT -6
yeah..feed my back
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Post by Cyrus Daniels on Feb 2, 2010 16:00:08 GMT -6
solid first suspense rp at just the right length, so yeah looking forward to see more of the character develop as time goes by...
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Post by adm on Feb 4, 2010 0:08:07 GMT -6
I MISSED YOU AJ!
Your first was good, but the 2nd was so ****ing hilarious. Seriously, I loved it more than the first.
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Feb 9, 2010 7:55:44 GMT -6
I think you are incapable of being a face. I dunno, whenever I read your promos (these or the early face days of AJ) I always sense a sort of "douchebag" tone that comes through. Not only that, but this rp against Happy just isn't really attacking properly. You focus too much on things that don't really help your cause. For example, talking about Randy lying to Mr. Happy, of course he's gonna lie, what you should have said instead of complimenting Mrs. Happy was to accuse Randy of having to make up things because he doesn't know anything about Jason. Then, focus on that, Jason is new and it gives him an advantage because nobody has seen what he really can do yet. Instead you decided to refer to a face's (Well, extremely soft tweener's) brother as "less annoying" than said face- that's a heel tactic man.
If you wanna Jason to be a DX-style face you gotta have him make a name for himself first. Probably as a heel who just gets too cool for bad-guys school.
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Feb 9, 2010 20:51:34 GMT -6
The second RP was muuuuuuch better at treating Jason like a face. You should use this one as a model for your future rps
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Post by Alex Jones on Feb 9, 2010 23:30:46 GMT -6
I took your advice and changed the style accordingly I was still in "AJ mode" I think
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Feb 10, 2010 1:18:11 GMT -6
Yeah, that's what I was getting from reading it- this is much more to the face side
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Post by Maniac on Feb 10, 2010 6:26:11 GMT -6
I love him either way.
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Post by Mike Machado on Feb 27, 2010 21:39:53 GMT -6
Really enjoyed your work this week. Great job man.
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Post by adm on Feb 27, 2010 22:01:21 GMT -6
Why bring back AJ Phoenix so soon? I like Evans by himself...
But that's beside the point, all your rps were entertaining and good this week. Nice job.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Mar 13, 2010 7:32:45 GMT -6
Hey man, just wanted to give you some feedback on your latest RP "I feel sick". It was well written, but Jason seemed more heel than face this week in the way he spoke about his opponent.
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Post by disdonn on Mar 13, 2010 10:06:34 GMT -6
*agrees with Star* depending on how the staff views it, going out of alignment too much can cost you points and maybe the match, just a fair warning from someone who knows that line a bit too well cuz I sometimes disobey that stuff.
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