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Post by Mike Machado on Feb 12, 2010 0:37:14 GMT -6
Be harsh. Thanks.
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Post by Keybo Shabaz on Feb 16, 2010 1:06:28 GMT -6
"The tie goes on the other side of the door."
If there's such a thing as comedy gold, that was platinum.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 16, 2010 4:06:33 GMT -6
I thought it was a good first RP. I laughed out loud at one point, and my girlfriend gave me a really funny look. I said in the chat box that I was looking forward to more Machado RPs, and you didn't disappoint.
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Post by Mike Machado on Feb 18, 2010 16:15:56 GMT -6
Thanks for the kind words, guys! Second one is up! Let me know what you think.. and any specific areas you think I could improve.
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Post by Jack Wilde on Feb 18, 2010 16:44:02 GMT -6
Even tough I'm your opponent , I personally liked it . Principally the ''Average Package'' part.
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Post by Mike Machado on Feb 27, 2010 21:38:13 GMT -6
3rd and final up for Crossroads. Let me know what you think.
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Post by Mike Machado on Mar 18, 2010 20:49:17 GMT -6
Bumping my own thread again. Big whoop, wannafightaboutit?
Seriously though. Tried some new things this week. In particular I'm wanting to know if my 2nd was too long, and if the serious and determined Machado is a welcome change of pace.
I have thick skin, I promise. Just looking to improve, and it's incredibly hard to critique your own work. Be as mean as you want.
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Post by Steven Luke on Mar 18, 2010 21:12:31 GMT -6
I really enjoyed both sides. There was enough light dorkiness in the serious side of Mike that made it seem realistic enough that he was the same idiot who made me smile just a few minutes before by jumping out of a window. Very well done.
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