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Post by Jason Blair on Mar 30, 2010 10:58:25 GMT -6
A place to feedback Jason Blair.
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Post by Zelda Knite on Mar 31, 2010 14:14:37 GMT -6
Wasn't bad for an introduction to the guy going his own way.
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Post by Jason Blair on Apr 15, 2010 17:50:44 GMT -6
So how we feelin' about Blair? Keep em? Scrap em?
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Post by Drake Tyson on Apr 15, 2010 18:02:53 GMT -6
I told you this already, but I really liked the RP. I say keep him for sure. It's a good counter balance to the hilarious hijinks of Machado to have Blair as your super serious character.
You tore Freakke apart. Blair could be a really good cerebral heel.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Aug 16, 2010 23:31:00 GMT -6
I liked what you did man.
Good job.
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Post by doc on Aug 19, 2010 6:27:27 GMT -6
Keep up the good work bud.
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Post by Mason St. Croix on Aug 24, 2010 17:49:50 GMT -6
That was great, I ain't got a chance in hell, lol.
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Post by Jason Blair on Aug 24, 2010 19:50:41 GMT -6
Haha thanks Mason. I know you'll come with something great. Looking for criticism from anyone constructive or not. What can I do better?
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Post by doc on Sept 7, 2010 5:27:56 GMT -6
Enjoyed it. Keep doing what your doing bro
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Post by Jason Blair on Sept 7, 2010 9:58:33 GMT -6
ty sir. Means a lot coming from you.
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Post by Jason Blair on Sept 28, 2010 22:30:25 GMT -6
Anybody that has some spare time and wanted to give me some feedback on "Play My Part," or just the state of Jason Blair in general - I'd give you a hug.
Not really sure what to do with him outside of the ring and trash talk these days. =\
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Post by Kris Titan on Sept 28, 2010 22:49:26 GMT -6
Truth be told, and if you ask anyone that has spoken to me on the subject, I've never been a huge fan of trash talk RPs. I like trash talk to be APART of the RP, but not most of it, or all of it. Don't get me wrong, though, I liked it, very much so. You said your piece well and it read smoothly. The trash talk was coolies. But for my part, and this is ONLY for my part, I'd like to see more character development. Cause that's what I like to read. There are, after all, only so many ways you can tell someone they suck and you rock. Of course, again, that's my point of view. Take it for a grain of salt, but I doubt it's worth even that.
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Post by doc on Sept 29, 2010 9:52:27 GMT -6
Truth be told, and if you ask anyone that has spoken to me on the subject, I've never been a huge fan of trash talk RPs. I like trash talk to be APART of the RP, but not most of it, or all of it. It's interesting. I know people on the board who care "only" about the trashtalk and see the character development as a little addition to what is, in their opinion, the most important part - the promo. It's good that there's a variety of different styles in nCw, it's also good that people have different opinions on RP styles. Look at DDK versus any serious writer and see the contrast. That's good, in my opinion. Writing is, of course, creative, and more deeply, a reflection of self. I love all styles. Personally I would say write whatever you enjoy writing, and win or lose, whether people love it or hate it, you'll enjoy the e-fedding experience much more than RPing to 'win' or to write a 'good rp' (because it's hard to enjoy that when you lose).
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Post by Kris Titan on Sept 29, 2010 15:33:19 GMT -6
I didn't mean anything by it, really. I enjoyed the RP and I hope to see more of it.
It's just personal preference, really.
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Post by Jason Blair on Sept 29, 2010 15:59:16 GMT -6
I enjoy a good balance myself. I agree I need to do more devo, I just have no clue where to go at this point. I really appreciate the feedback, especially any criticism.
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Post by Jason Blair on Oct 12, 2010 21:10:04 GMT -6
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Post by Freakke on Oct 21, 2010 22:46:56 GMT -6
If we don't get match of the week, something is wrong here. Seriously though great stuff man.
One more to go. Make it good.
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Post by Freakke on Oct 24, 2010 9:11:42 GMT -6
Again, great stuff, pal. This should be interesting.
As far as constructive criticism/review goes, You played the heel card extremely well, made a lot of good points, and really emphasized your 'need' to win. The only real problem I saw between the both of us was that we both really relied on each others promos for work but since you hit first you still get the nod there.
Again, great stuff and good luck.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Nov 29, 2010 23:12:16 GMT -6
I thought the first RP for Collision was good. Very informative, plus I'm a fan of him being in the Young Guns, so it gives you alot of good material for the weeks to come.
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Post by Trish Newborn on Nov 30, 2010 9:54:35 GMT -6
Wow, I really liked what you posted for Collision. Good job, dude.
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Post by Hugo Conway on Nov 30, 2010 20:51:19 GMT -6
^ Favorite part.
As a fan of both Shark week and a future marine biologist you should have used the BULL SHARK instead of Great White. Bull's are the most aggressive and most dangerous to humans. ;D
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Post by Louis Leblanc on Nov 30, 2010 20:59:15 GMT -6
lol! Sonofabitch! I should watch more Shark Week I suppose. Great White's get all the credit, though! Thanks for all the feedback guys.
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