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Post by Alex Jones on Apr 28, 2010 5:13:10 GMT -6
Just finished "pretty on the inside" what ya think?
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Post by doc on Apr 28, 2010 6:20:00 GMT -6
Nice work, maybe I'd just leave things like:
“See what I’ve done there is apply calm reasoning to destroy what you’ve said in a counter point."
Out of promos. I mean, AJ2 will obviously already know what you've done, and pointing it out makes you seem more like a lawyer in a courtroom than a wrestler cutting a promo. Nothing wrong with countering what an opponent says, not at all, but it's about the way which you do it. After all, we're supposed to be acting like it's not our words and debate that makes us good, but what we do inside the ring. But it was solid work all in all.
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Post by Alex Jones on Apr 28, 2010 16:38:42 GMT -6
Thanks Doc...I see what you mean I was trying to make it seem like AJ was being really condesending but instead I put off a perry mason vibe hahahaha
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