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Post by Steve Awesome on Apr 30, 2010 17:17:00 GMT -6
First of all....how is this not a thread already?
Second of all.....great stuff this week bro. You as well as Venom really came hard this week.
I'm really excited to see who comes out on top.
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Post by Leonard Fox on Apr 30, 2010 17:29:53 GMT -6
I will equally concur with everything Steve said.
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Post by Malcolm Reed on May 5, 2010 11:49:58 GMT -6
I liked this new rp, especially the small reference to coffee shop friends...I know all to well about this. Really had little to do with the overall rp (which was good) but enjoyed it for personal memories.
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Post by Shawn Styles on May 25, 2010 13:07:42 GMT -6
Really well done RP this week. The entire scene to go along with the title "Who We Die With", and to bring that all together with the Young Guns, extraordinary job. I especially enjoyed the disecting of Adam Knite because your character did bring up some very valid points about his current situation as well as teaming with his arch nemesis. Shows how much Velez and Venom are prepared for this, but Knite and Awesome are more then likely the total opposite of that. But what really sold me on this RP is the emotion put forth into it from your character, it made me trully believe by Charlie's words alone that he, as well as the rest of the Young Guns, trully should be in the top teir of nCw and will find that spot very soon. Kudo's on the ending as well.... Leaving the reader waiting anxiously to see Collision to see what the other thing Charlie was talking about... Great work.
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Post by Charlie Velez on Jun 2, 2010 13:25:55 GMT -6
Um, new RP up. Shower me with compliments (or critiques! all good in the neighborhood
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Post by Tara Fenix on Jun 5, 2010 1:15:28 GMT -6
Great RP, as always. There are a few errors with the grammar, spelling, and choice of words. Nothing that wouldn't be fixed with a quick proofread of it.
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Post by Steven Luke on Jun 5, 2010 9:08:57 GMT -6
Some of your best work and it seems even better since so far your challenger is no showing. Great job bud.
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Post by doc on Jul 7, 2010 3:19:03 GMT -6
nice work charles
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Post by doc on Jul 13, 2010 11:43:08 GMT -6
great work, showing your character's weaknesses gives them so much more depth, its a shame most people neglect it in favour of looking tough
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Post by Jason Blair on Aug 18, 2010 12:05:05 GMT -6
Wow. Velez as a character has come a long way in the few months I've been gone. Awesome stuff.
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Post by Hugo Conway on Sept 7, 2010 23:52:56 GMT -6
Dude just read that rp about Courage and it was really awesome...You set a standard I hope to one day match
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Post by doc on Sept 15, 2010 10:18:05 GMT -6
that is all
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Post by Steven Luke on Sept 17, 2010 12:19:22 GMT -6
If the Front Office loses this week at Battle Grounds it will not be because of Charlie Velez. You did an amazing job not just this week but with this whole storyline and I can't wait to see what comes up next
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Nov 28, 2010 2:36:18 GMT -6
Not feedback on any one roleplay in particular (though oddysey part 3... damn!) I just felt you deserved some kind of response.
You sir are an absolute monster. One of the toughest matches I've had in ages if not ever and if it turns out you take my title off me, I won't be disappointed at all. You deserve it. And if by some miracle I retain... it won't be far away. I'm certain of that.
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Post by Alex Jones on Dec 3, 2010 20:02:11 GMT -6
As always you lay the arrogant rich heel with a renewing sense of ownership. If Charlie Velez was a real person in a major wrestling organisation he'd be the franchise player and the man everyone loves to hate...great job good sir and I top my hat to you<endasskissing>
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Post by Steven Luke on Dec 30, 2010 13:39:35 GMT -6
I really enjoyed how well you tied the Destructor storyline in with that charlie rp while laying out some background history for charlie at the same time and it didn't feel like it should have been in a destructor rp. You're promoing as always was insane as always. If you don't beat Holly this time I don't know who will
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