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Post by doc on May 9, 2010 6:15:22 GMT -6
If you haven't caught up on him yet, just take 15 minutes and read the guys rps for this past week. No question that the guy is talented.
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Post by Drake Tyson on May 9, 2010 13:23:46 GMT -6
I liked his stuff this week a lot. For a second I was like "I want to tag with this kid."
But Styles and Allister Black should form a team. Black Styles.
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Post by doc on May 17, 2010 15:35:11 GMT -6
I know that there's alot of people who don't like RPs which don't touch, at least a little, on the match at hand. Maybe you could try and fit in promo sections here and there along side the background stuff, if I'm to reccomend any type of change to your RPs.
But despite that, your writing style is incredible and your latest RP was, yet again, top notch. To be honest, I'm not sure I even really have superlatives for it, but believe me, it was nice work. Keep it up man.
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Post by Leonard Fox on May 18, 2010 14:19:23 GMT -6
I haven't read the RP fully yet, however, I'd like to make note (judging from Doc's feedback)... that we have a rule where you have to at least mention the match in the RP.
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Post by Shawn Styles on May 18, 2010 15:08:03 GMT -6
Thank you for your comments, Doc. And as well for the warning about the mentioning of the match in the RP's. As for Leonard, I do apologize as I should've read the rules more clearly before I posted that. It was planned to be a two parter so in my second one I think I'll be able to edit around my idea before I get to writing it so it will include a good part about my character's thoughts on his upcoming match. If the one I previously posted is considered void since it didn't mention the match, then just move it to the Developmental thread I guess and I'll work around it. *crosses fingers*
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Post by Destructor! on May 21, 2010 14:24:19 GMT -6
I want Shawn Styles to write RPs for me.
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Post by Drake Tyson on May 21, 2010 15:50:16 GMT -6
Alright sir, I'm going to be frank. I don't think you even know who your opponents are this week. Not once in either RP did you even mention their names, and that's not a good thing. You're a great writer, but I can't get behind an RP where if I didn't know the card, I wouldn't have a clue who you were facing.
I know you want to tell a story and get the character over, but you've got to talk trash too. Then you'll be one of our best guys.
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Post by Shawn Styles on May 21, 2010 16:34:19 GMT -6
I'll work harder at it. Thanks for the advise.
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