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Post by Justin Reynolds on Aug 5, 2010 17:13:20 GMT -6
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Post by Zelda Knite on Aug 10, 2010 7:42:26 GMT -6
I love the balls it took to call yourself "Mr. NCW" and I like the egomaniac part of it. My only complaint would be the stats and bragging came off as comically over the top. I don't know of that was intentional or not, but it just seemed overblown and came off as comedic.
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Post by Justin Reynolds on Aug 14, 2010 8:58:35 GMT -6
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Post by Steven Luke on Aug 15, 2010 10:20:34 GMT -6
Not sure if you seen this in the chat but I found your rp to be quite lacking. You overplay the gimmick to where it seems like your purposly trying to make fun of yourself. Your rp also spent to much time showing off how 'cool' he is and not enough time building the match in my opinion.
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Post by Justin Reynolds on Aug 15, 2010 16:45:00 GMT -6
The whole point of the Justin Reynolds gimmick IS to overplay everything. He's a goofy, comedy heel to the effect of Kurt Angle in the fact that they always remind everyone of their achievements. To your point of not talking about the match: 1. The promo started off with Justin and Faarquan talking about the match. It ended w/ Justin going off on Mason and Dragon. I tried to make the RP as long as a could w/o any pointless filler 2. I was introducing the two side characters that will be in my promos, that was another point reason for the promo. Any other criticism? Good or Bad? This is the first time I'm playing as this character, so I could use a few tips/points!
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Drake Tyson
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Post by Drake Tyson on Aug 15, 2010 16:55:09 GMT -6
I liked it sir. The character is pretty hilarious. You may be using Alex Riley's exact gimmick, but you're doing it really well. I look forward to seeing a lot more from you kiddo.
My only criticism (And it's pretty stupid, I know) is the font choice. I just don't like looking at it. Hahaha. But that's just my personal preference. You do your own thing buddy.
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Post by Justin Reynolds on Aug 15, 2010 16:57:17 GMT -6
Why thank you! When I take over the world, I'll kill you last
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