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Post by Kris Titan on Sept 26, 2010 22:50:22 GMT -6
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Post by Jason Blair on Sept 26, 2010 23:23:15 GMT -6
You're an awesome writer. Way better than I am, and that makes it hard to give constructive criticism.
So I'll just give you my impressions and opinions.
I like the character a lot. I think Kris is interesting, and it seems like there's a lot of different ways you can go with her. That's always good. You obviously have a good connection with her, and it reads as if you're already comfortable in her skin.
Like I said before, your writing is very good. I never get confused reading, or need to reread anything to make sure I understood everything correctly.
I'm honestly not a fan of the supporting cast. I don't mean the characters themselves, but the idea of them. It just seems like a lot to digest for me. It's hard for me to care about them. Not because you don't do a good job introducing them, not because they're boring, just because to me they have nothing to do with nCw.
But this is all subjective. This whole thing is. I'm sure there are others (maybe more important others) that feel differently. I just feel the need to express my opinion whenever someone asks.
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Post by Kris Titan on Sept 28, 2010 15:05:01 GMT -6
Thanks!! It means a lot to me, really, to hear anything about my RPs, especially since it's a new character and all. And all the other characters are there to help develop Kris, really. Having no formal training into the wrestling world she needs guidance as jumping in head first would prolly get her hospitalized. Realistically, anyways. So, yeah. Plus, I like writing them. They're fun for me. Also, new roleplay was posted up mere seconds ago. Or maybe minutes, I dunno.
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