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Post by Trish Newborn on Oct 19, 2010 2:06:27 GMT -6
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Post by Trish Newborn on Oct 24, 2010 6:22:13 GMT -6
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Post by Leonard Fox on Oct 24, 2010 8:52:03 GMT -6
I enjoy your stuff...
That's all I got right now.
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Post by Trish Newborn on Oct 30, 2010 22:02:24 GMT -6
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Post by Trish Newborn on Nov 18, 2010 0:08:25 GMT -6
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Post by Trish Newborn on Nov 24, 2010 18:46:56 GMT -6
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Post by Trish Newborn on Nov 26, 2010 16:15:18 GMT -6
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Post by Trish Newborn on Nov 28, 2010 6:10:23 GMT -6
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Post by Steven Luke on Feb 23, 2011 16:47:23 GMT -6
Great freaking promo. You put over your character and attitude with the beginning while still focusing on your opponent and then went on to do some great promoting about the match. I still say Zelda vs Newborn will be Woman's Championship match history and no matter what other people say I don't think there is a clear cut winner.
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Post by Trish Newborn on Mar 4, 2011 16:54:07 GMT -6
You can give feedback on the latest rp I just posted and I'll return the favor.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 4, 2011 20:29:34 GMT -6
I enjoyed the sort of bitter, twisted mini-breakdown. It is an interesting response to a title loss rather than moping about or simple plain revenge, I liked the way the title is represented as such a prized possession the loss of it could lead to a mental breakdown and consequent bout of madness that leads to a potential severe drubbing of an opponent.
Enjoyed it, but maybe its because I like the spurned in stories who brood and plan bitter revenge.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 6, 2011 16:49:46 GMT -6
I enjoyed The Queen Part II, partly because I am a history geek and I enjoyed the Greek mythology references, although there was the odd spelling mistake there but nothing that made it unreadable, got across quite well what you were intending to convey regardless!
Enjoyed the "stealing candy from a kid" part, it is so quintessentially a trait of the "bad guy/girl" it was a nice throwback to the phrase by actually having her steal from a kid! This total disdain at sharing a locker room with "others" was also a good inclusion!
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Post by Trish Newborn on Mar 12, 2011 8:14:07 GMT -6
Posted my first rp for the pay-per-view. Expect more soon. Thanks in advance for left feedback.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 13, 2011 13:41:24 GMT -6
Enjoyed them both, the latter was on the short side but the content was decent, just direct and to the point as I don't think it needed to do any character building for this event, just about getting down to business for you two.
Good as always from what I have seen from you since joining.
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Post by Paul Star on Mar 17, 2011 11:54:22 GMT -6
Your first RP this week is a good one. Well written, and some nice emotion throughout. I feel sorry for Jennifer.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2011 21:29:20 GMT -6
Just to say WOW, your second RP this week was incredibly impressive Trish, I really enjoyed it and it was fantastic at revealing a little bit more about Trish. She's Italian? Fantastic!
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Post by Steven Luke on Mar 20, 2011 19:14:12 GMT -6
You verbally ripped apart your opponent. Very well done
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Post by Trish Newborn on Apr 15, 2011 22:52:45 GMT -6
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Post by Trent Helms on Apr 16, 2011 0:50:48 GMT -6
It was good....CHIEF!
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Post by Trish Newborn on Apr 16, 2011 21:18:13 GMT -6
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Post by Trish Newborn on Apr 17, 2011 7:38:20 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Apr 17, 2011 11:31:21 GMT -6
Good solid set of RPs for the PPV, I always enjoy how you and Roxxxie work with one another it has been a good feud all around.
Good work.
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Post by Trent Helms on Apr 17, 2011 19:01:52 GMT -6
Once again, great rp this week.
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Post by Trish Newborn on Apr 22, 2011 21:19:00 GMT -6
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Post by Trish Newborn on Apr 26, 2011 22:54:55 GMT -6
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Post by Leonard Fox on Apr 26, 2011 23:36:48 GMT -6
Those belts just prove my point. You call yourselves a champion but neglect to get worthy opponents take on and battle to show why you were champion in the first place.
It's nice that you call yourself an unworthy opponent there.
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Post by Trish Newborn on Apr 26, 2011 23:43:25 GMT -6
Those belts just prove my point. You call yourselves a champion but neglect to get worthy opponents take on and battle to show why you were champion in the first place.It's nice that you call yourself an unworthy opponent there. Wasn't for the belts
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Post by Amy Marshall on Apr 27, 2011 4:20:35 GMT -6
Nice work on your latest rp... i enjoyed reading it and tearing into Crystal.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 27, 2011 17:33:37 GMT -6
Good solid first RP of the week there for Trish, again gets the smack talk across whilst also getting some backstory in there. Good stuff.
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Post by Trish Newborn on Apr 30, 2011 1:08:54 GMT -6
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