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Post by Chris Gardner on Jan 21, 2011 15:41:21 GMT -6
Pwetty pwease?
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Post by Paul Star on Jan 21, 2011 16:18:29 GMT -6
Your RPing style is very good, and flows quite well. The RP you posted could have done with more focus on your match, and less focus on other things. The majority of the RP was developmental stuff, and after that's stripped out, very little of the RP was about your match.
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Post by Chris Gardner on Jan 21, 2011 16:47:26 GMT -6
Thanks for the input, Paul, I'm sure to keep an eye at this. Everything I learned about e-wrestling was in RP-focused feds, and I'm an awful promo writer. Also, it's tough when you've got absolutely nothing to say, which is my case. Being a rookie and playing a new character sucks.
I'm going to try uploading a second RP for my match against Hexx to make up for that.
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Post by Paul Star on Jan 21, 2011 16:53:59 GMT -6
One of the hardest things to do in E-fedding is to establish a new character in an E-fed you've just joined. You seem to have good RPing skill and know what you're doing, so you'll do fine.
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Post by Chris Gardner on Feb 11, 2011 18:25:36 GMT -6
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Post by Chris Gardner on Mar 23, 2011 10:18:40 GMT -6
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Post by Todd Williams on Mar 23, 2011 10:28:32 GMT -6
Not to sure about it? What do you mean not so sure about it? For starters the scene in the rp was really good. Just seeing it makes me bring a smile to my face. Alysson hasn't completely lost it. Somehow deep in her soul we can see that she sort of regrets what she did, and when Christian was able to get Alysson one on one alone. IT gave us the insight that you know Aly is still all there, she has feelings and isnt the cold hearted bitch that we thought she was. It leads me to believe ok will we see her apologize back to her brother sometime soon, and the mention of Gabby Solidifies that.
As far as the promo goes, Promoing is like your strongest part of your rps. Sure you may think the rp is short and doesn't seem like you have much to say but what you say is powerful. You really have me being empathetic with Chris having me become him. He's not going to back down. He was down and out but he still managed to come off two title defenses and he's still going to fight. No matter what rises against him because that's just how he is.
Again very powerful with the promo, in this rp your scene was just as powerful as your promo which really gets your character over as a great face character. Sure he may be upset with his sister but he still senses good in her despite how she has been acting. Kinda like Chris is Obi Wan and Alysson is anakin from star wars episode 3. No matter what people say chris smiles knowing his sister is seeing the light.
All in all excellent chracter building, great establishing of your characters, and i anticipate every week whats going to happen next in the Kane/Gardner story.
Keep it up.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 2, 2011 19:44:02 GMT -6
Yep, good RP I enjoyed it. Flowed well, had a logical sense of order to it and made some good counter arguments. It has been good RPing with you this week, much more enjoyable past two weeks when I have opponents who have a bit to say in return.
As for the Christian thing, declare me suitable "Doh'ed" on that one.
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Post by adm on Jun 19, 2011 9:34:36 GMT -6
Damn you!!! You rp an rp well at 30 mins to midnight. *** damn. Good Job CJ.
P.S. Good luck vs Spike once again.
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