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Post by Jason Evans on Jun 4, 2011 17:30:25 GMT -6
Was going to wait but there are two developmental rps. Thanks in advance for the comments
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Post by Jason Evans on Jun 8, 2011 22:57:11 GMT -6
Setting the record straight.....and Choices are up....Comments if you please.
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Post by Jason Evans on Jun 17, 2011 12:45:29 GMT -6
Hard work is the price we must pay
Is posted. Any comments?
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Post by Kathleen Conway on Jun 17, 2011 15:42:05 GMT -6
any rp with ric flair references is an instant hit with me...good job dude...
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Post by Pooler on Jun 17, 2011 18:13:38 GMT -6
well done buddy. I think you've gotten better since our last go round! It was very to the point and had a good flow!
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Post by adm on Jun 17, 2011 21:47:41 GMT -6
The good: your sj as vain is still funny to me. The bad: not sure where the call was going, seemed to interrupt the flow. The ugly: spelling and grammar.
In the end only spelling needs work for a good, humorous sj rp
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Post by doc on Jun 30, 2011 2:42:05 GMT -6
I liked how you told us about Jason's past in the police force. I felt like it definately added another dimension to a character who generally follows his gimmick and doesn't allow us to see his "other" side too often.
Stay motivated and keep up the improvement.
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Post by Jason Evans on Jul 19, 2011 11:01:23 GMT -6
Believe everything you hear? is posted. Any comments would be appreciated.
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Post by Jason Evans on Jul 25, 2011 20:40:42 GMT -6
First rp for Picture Perfect...Jason you are in no position to make threats.
Trying something different so any comments whether good or bad would be appreciated.
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Post by JackHammer on Aug 24, 2011 15:14:37 GMT -6
Good job with your rps man, like where your charcter is going.
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Post by JackHammer on Aug 31, 2011 23:54:44 GMT -6
Nice job with your latest rp, was intersting
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Post by Jason Evans on Sept 1, 2011 0:02:54 GMT -6
Thank you.
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Post by JackHammer on Sept 10, 2011 21:49:38 GMT -6
good job with your rps man.
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Post by Jason Evans on Feb 2, 2012 10:30:16 GMT -6
I don't usually ask for feedback. But I would like to know what you think of Speaking from the heart....which is my 2nd rp for the PPV. Thanks in advance.
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