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Post by Pooler on Jun 10, 2011 16:37:01 GMT -6
Looking for some feedback ;D
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Post by adm on Jun 10, 2011 17:04:12 GMT -6
I didn't get the references to the other fed, mostly because I wasn't in it. However, it does give your character a bit of meaning to possibly want to be great here.
As far as the rest of your rp went, it was pretty standard, but there was something about it that reminds me of AJ (Alex Jones) and Diamond as far as how you handle things. I like the insults to me (yes, I can appreciate that) and there may be a future battle between us, win or lose this match, because you seem to be a guy that might be good to work with.
Good job, keep it up.
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Post by Trent Helms on Jun 11, 2011 4:42:28 GMT -6
I think it was a good read.
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Post by Pooler on Jun 17, 2011 18:15:06 GMT -6
Rage Quit is up and ready for reading! It's more in line with how I normally work so hopefully it's a step in the right direction.
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Post by Jason Evans on Jun 17, 2011 18:30:58 GMT -6
Nice rp. Good points that you brought out. Feels like old times.....lol.
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Post by adm on Jun 17, 2011 21:45:20 GMT -6
You, my comrade, are damn good. You said everythong and more about Jason that needed saying.
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Post by doc on Jun 18, 2011 1:22:18 GMT -6
you've got a great writing style.. this is the only rp of yours i've read so far, but if you smoothed some things out and 'perfected' what you do then I think you have a huge potential for succes in ncw
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Post by adm on Jun 21, 2011 19:41:19 GMT -6
I like the focus of your ppv rp. One at a time mau work well for you.
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Post by Pooler on Jun 24, 2011 20:42:05 GMT -6
Newest PPV RP is up!
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Post by Pooler on Jun 25, 2011 15:58:19 GMT -6
Last roleplay for the PPV is up and ready for viewing!
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jun 25, 2011 16:25:53 GMT -6
As you fed my back, I shall feed yours. I did enjoy your stuff this week. I have no idea how long you've been RPing, but you defiantly are good. Your RPs tended to flow nicely, and you didn't repeat yourself too much either. I knew you'd be a good opponent this week.
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Post by doc on Jul 9, 2011 2:35:40 GMT -6
3 stellar rps from your team this week but I have to say I'm probably looking forward to working with you the most in a longer term rivalry. I can tell by the way you rp there would be a chemistry there to hopefully do something good in the future. Keep it up bro.
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Post by adm on Jul 9, 2011 9:49:19 GMT -6
Good job Pooler, I always enjoy rping with or against you. You're one of the few guys who ups their game as I try to up mine. Good job.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 10, 2011 10:45:36 GMT -6
Good roleplay this week Pooler, I try to remember to read your stuff when I can as I think you're RPs are always very well written, flow well and have a good rythm to them.
Top work this week, was good working with you and the rest of the guys.
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Post by Pooler on Jul 15, 2011 13:45:13 GMT -6
newest is up and my back is hungry!
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Post by Nathan Webb on Jul 15, 2011 14:29:32 GMT -6
Once again great rp. They are truly a joy to read.
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Post by adm on Jul 30, 2011 9:20:29 GMT -6
I'm glad you caught that we don't have much new to say to each other. Although, I don't know how the whole schtick with the old man in a candy store all Gremilins/Karate Kid like fits, but it was a nice bit of humor. Good job,
Edit: Sorry to hear you can't do more than one this week. Hopefully you're not pissed I finished my third. I just couldn't help it, the idea was there and it was itching to get out. Hopefully you can get back into rping like normal next week. Your stuff is pretty cool.
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