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Post by Nathan Webb on Aug 3, 2011 11:28:53 GMT -6
Very nice Rp man...Should be a good match this week
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 6, 2011 9:02:14 GMT -6
Last Trauma RP of the week is posted! Enjoy! Backfeeding is always fun!
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Post by Crystal Williams on Aug 6, 2011 9:15:52 GMT -6
alrighty the rp was pretty funny. I think Lex was the mvp of the roleplay and he is like a kid at that candy store. And I mean Lex was pretty into it, not only was he passionate about his icecream but the big dude got punked out by the fat kid. I can picture the flinch and Lex probably jumped a good couple of feet backwards. The promo in itself was pretty good. I loved how you tried to turn around the joke on AJ, the same way zane gets mocked back on him. Keep up the good work buddy
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 10, 2011 12:24:06 GMT -6
Trying something new this week with my RP style.
Any input, ideas, suggestions, would be appreciated.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 11, 2011 7:25:48 GMT -6
Think it work this week for Jimmy, the style flowed well and was well written and engaging which is what you want from a RP.
Perhaps a little bit more could be dedicated to smack talk, but when you develop the style over time you'll probably find the right balance.
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Post by Lucas Young on Aug 13, 2011 11:40:33 GMT -6
Both RP's were awesome man but my favourite had to be the second, you didn't beat around the bush and got straight to the point I would hate to be Joe Everyman right now.
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Post by adm on Aug 13, 2011 12:19:44 GMT -6
Brutal, that's all I have to say about the 2nd one. BRUTAL. If Joe had a throat, it be cut and bleeding out right now because of how brutal you be slashin with those words.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 19, 2011 18:07:32 GMT -6
2nd and last RP of the week is up!
Thoughts would be great!
Enjoy!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Oct 25, 2011 10:56:53 GMT -6
The Experiment - Episode 1 is posted...
Any thoughts, suggestions, comments are always welcome!
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Post by Xander Famularo on Oct 26, 2011 7:16:35 GMT -6
I liked the comical portions with Babaloo, thought they were a happy change for your recent angst filled promos. Good change of pace.
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Post by Angel on Oct 27, 2011 7:23:15 GMT -6
It was as awesome as you said. Nice fIrst rp keep em coming.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Oct 28, 2011 11:18:27 GMT -6
2nd RP Posted!! Hoping everyone is enjoying these!
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Post by Angel on Oct 28, 2011 15:41:25 GMT -6
Keep being awesome.
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Post by Seth Evans on Oct 30, 2011 8:33:49 GMT -6
My main concern was about the wrong words being used in certain situations. Every once and a while, just look over it and give it a little proofread to make sure that it all goes through making sense, with the flow. The story was entertaining, I did like how it followed a chain, and it was something different to read rather than what everyone else (myself included) will typically do for a story.
They were good reads, easy reads. Just the minor grammar flaws I noticed.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Nov 7, 2011 13:19:36 GMT -6
Latest RP "SHOP TILL YOU DROP" is up...
Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments?
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Nov 12, 2011 10:50:45 GMT -6
Some feedback on my RPs this week would be appreciated.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Nov 30, 2011 10:59:47 GMT -6
first RP of the week "Big Boy Pants" is up....thoughts?
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Post by Jason Evans on Nov 30, 2011 18:05:44 GMT -6
I find it intetesting to read. Some of your rps I just scan through to see what catche my attention...this one I read the whole thing.
Good job
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Dec 9, 2011 10:05:16 GMT -6
latest RP "Cloaked in Failure" is posted!
Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments?
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Post by Riley Griffiths on Dec 9, 2011 11:08:26 GMT -6
Nice work Wil, you've been writing at a very good level for a while know and it seems to be paying off.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Dec 10, 2011 10:19:21 GMT -6
Thanks Spikey!
2nd Rp Of the Week "Liar, Liar, Pants on Fire" is up!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Dec 14, 2011 10:51:31 GMT -6
first RP of the week "Man v Legend" is posted
Thoughts/Suggestions/Comments are welcome
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Dec 14, 2011 15:09:43 GMT -6
I lol'd.
good rp man, got my work cut out for me this week.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Dec 21, 2011 17:29:51 GMT -6
3rd Riot RP is up... "The Visitors Three: Part II"...
As always, comments, suggestions, etc..blah blah blah...are welcome!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 29, 2011 21:41:00 GMT -6
I've been really enjoying the Riot RPs for Jimmy, looking forward to the final parts of the puzzle as the Christmas Carol set up has been utilised well thus far!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Dec 30, 2011 14:27:22 GMT -6
Final 2 Riot RPs posted! Enjoy!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 31, 2011 11:16:25 GMT -6
I enjoyed the series, it was something different and in en environment like the Riot is always refreshing to see something a bit different to the rest of the pack.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jan 20, 2012 13:52:57 GMT -6
Feed It!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jan 24, 2012 10:59:24 GMT -6
Feeding the back would be great!
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Post by Nathan Webb on Jan 24, 2012 12:00:49 GMT -6
Nice stuff as always bro....
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