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Post by Casper Wise on Apr 21, 2012 20:40:36 GMT -6
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Post by Casper Wise on Apr 22, 2012 18:19:52 GMT -6
Update.
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Post by Spike Kane on Apr 23, 2012 2:59:18 GMT -6
People will leave you feedback dude, it's just a kind of "give some to get some" type mentality. I'd advise you to make a Casper Wise feedback thread, rather than making a new one per roleplay (You can just edit your post and change the title to make it easy) I read your introductory rp and it was pretty good to be honest. I personally don't lean towards old fashioned book style writing, but I think you found a pretty good middle ground between the almost script like nature most roleplays tend to fall under. I would say that I'm not a fan of using pictures in a roleplay unless of course the picture is of something either too hard to describe, or just plain ridiculous (See Kanyon's roleplays ) As far as first impressions go, not bad at all amigo. I can see you having some fun here in nCw, good luck in your first match.
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