Jack Manson
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It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Sept 2, 2007 18:20:34 GMT -6
Thought I would give you guys some feedback for the PPV. Overall I felt it was a good show but could have been great with abit more content. The storylines are developing well and I must admit i'm really looking forward to the culprit, who keeps attacking people backstage, to be revealed. And what happened with Manson's and Burnings match? Wasn't there supposed to be an enforcer at ring side? lol. Yet no mention of it from anyone. I also feel there should have been abit more emphasis on the champions at the end of the matches. Maybe having a bit more than just "Takes his title and walks back stage". What about the fans chanting the stars name? Or the champion holding his title proudly in the air for all to see? I just felt that, other than the World title, the other champs didn't get the celebrations they could have gotten. I'll give this show 7/10: Good show but could have been better. I'm not saying you guys did a bad job or nothing, far from it. This is just my own opinion. Other than that well done and I can't WAIT for next Sundays Collision
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Post by Spike Kane on Sept 2, 2007 18:33:31 GMT -6
I thought the show was very well done.
I think characters are starting to be established, and now we have championships to play with, my only grievance, was how my character was used for comedy in the Xtreme Title match. Especially given my characters gimmick, background etc...it kinda annoyed me.
Other than that, great ppv guys, way to kickstart, and Dr. Pepper...I'm comin' for you!
EDIT: Why was my segment not used?
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Post by Adam on Sept 2, 2007 20:13:53 GMT -6
Well the reason there wasn't more celebration for Ryan is because I was trying to portray that he had nothing left, he couldn't even get up after such a hard match... and the crowd was giving them a standing ovation, it may have come off wrong but that was my intent. About Manson... that was probably just me Fing up and getting in a hurry, my bad. I'll try and work on that next time. Thanks for the feedback.
Spike.. I thought I got everybody's segments on the show... If I missed yours it was by mistake, I'm sorry if it's not on there because I had every intention of putting it on the show. I'm sorry.
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Post by Ruston Bourne on Sept 2, 2007 20:36:54 GMT -6
manson and burnings match not having the enforcer would be my fault i guess. i was unavailable today to go over the details of what should go down and name the enforcer.
i would be willing to do a rewrite/revision if anyone would want me to. Sorry for dropping the ball on that.
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Post by Adam on Sept 2, 2007 20:44:07 GMT -6
manson and burnings match not having the enforcer would be my fault i guess. i was unavailable today to go over the details of what should go down and name the enforcer. i would be willing to do a rewrite/revision if anyone would want me to. Sorry for dropping the ball on that. Yeah I had completely forgot you had mentioned having an eforcer during your weekly show.... geez... I'm a bum......
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Post by Ruston Bourne on Sept 2, 2007 20:48:10 GMT -6
if i wrote some new stuff to add to the show could we post a revised version? i think our first ppv should be the bomb-digity
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Post by Banny McBannedpants on Sept 2, 2007 20:54:34 GMT -6
Nah, it is good as is...and the reason Dr. Pepper didn't celebrate as much as expected...dude gives a guillotine leg drop off the top turnbuckle through a table...and was almost crushed by Reckoning on the announce table..he barely had enough in him at the end to finish it....I'll do better next time.
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Post by Ruston Bourne on Sept 2, 2007 21:04:21 GMT -6
i didnt know "good" was acceptable for the first ppv
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Post by Banny McBannedpants on Sept 2, 2007 23:55:42 GMT -6
There really is no need in going back and correcting it, and I think it is great as it is. Nobody is perfect and we admit our mistakes and work our tails off to do better next time. No big deal, it is all..dare I say..."Golden" I even admit I could have had several more spots in the Xtreme Championship match...my next chance at it will be even better..like...this week.
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Jack Manson
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It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Sept 3, 2007 4:16:20 GMT -6
Somebody who is exhausted after a long fought match still can have emotions on show. He doesn't have to be jumping around for joy after doing a high flying move through a table and getting the win etc. But abit more interaction from the ref and the champ, the crowd, and maybe just the wrestler himself etc helps to make it more rewarding. Like if you had something like:
{Dr. pepper has done it. The first Xtreme champion. He groggily stands up an stumbles into the turnbuckle after that gruelling match. The ref walks over to him and raises his arm in the air as the fans cheer loudly. His arm drops back down as the ref let's go and reaches for the title. Dr. Pepper's eyes light up and his toothless grin emerges as he snatches the title and holds it proudly into the air.}
See, gives it a bit more emotion and more rewarding for the champion who won it.
I don't think there is any need to re-write any of the show now, as it happened Kelly Fox or nobody else decided to interfere so the enforcer wasn't needed lol.
Keep up the good work guys!
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