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Post by defunctlies on Feb 6, 2008 8:49:34 GMT -6
First couple of RP's up (one in Developmental)
You may notice I waffle on about a car for a bit, but unfortunately I don't have anyone to really feud with yet. Sorry.
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Feb 6, 2008 10:53:14 GMT -6
I loved it... but that's probably because it felt like I was watching a Top Gear segment.
It's a great start though, I love the style of the character. Some development and you could be on to a winner there.
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Mar 16, 2008 6:18:01 GMT -6
Wooo! Now we have clarkson in the mix... just captain slow left to go.
But on a serious feedback note, you might want to try adding colour or a name before the speech parts to help us understand who's talking. Otherwise, I'm still marking out.
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Post by defunctlies on Mar 29, 2008 14:23:17 GMT -6
Added possibly the longest post I've ever done.
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Post by Angel on Mar 31, 2008 10:15:04 GMT -6
Your latest rp was awesome. I firmly believe had you gotten out a second one you would have won. I mean Falcon's good, but compared to you, he's ****. But seriously, that last rp was fanatstic. I really enjoyed it.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Mar 31, 2008 13:57:44 GMT -6
Yeah Hammy, that rp was too good. ;D
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Post by defunctlies on Apr 2, 2008 13:43:03 GMT -6
Aww, you guys are making me blush.
New RP for the PPV pre-show up.
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Post by Spike Kane on Apr 3, 2008 9:41:29 GMT -6
the Hamster kicks it again!
Nice roleplay dude, I'm enjoying your stuff here in nCw, keept at it!
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Post by defunctlies on Apr 7, 2008 17:53:26 GMT -6
New RP up.
I was supposed to post this up on Friday/Saturday, but then I managed to (somehow) delete it just before I posted it.
So, I decided to make it my Monday RP.
...don't judge me.
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Christian Kane
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Well Personally I'd like to slay the dragon
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Post by Christian Kane on Apr 9, 2008 10:57:20 GMT -6
I liked your rp dude and looks like I have to pull my finger out to get the win this week lmao.
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Falcon
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You haven't seen anything yet.
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Post by Falcon on Apr 13, 2008 8:32:46 GMT -6
Ok I HAD MY TEETH WHITENED...
omg dude..
too damn funny..
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Post by defunctlies on May 11, 2008 5:01:45 GMT -6
Reborn RP's all done and dusted...only managed to get two done instead of the three I wanted...
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Falcon
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You haven't seen anything yet.
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Post by Falcon on May 11, 2008 6:20:22 GMT -6
I always make it a point to read a Hammy rp, and yet again, you do not disapoint.
Viva la Hamster
(or.. Hammond.. whatever you prefer).
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Post by defunctlies on May 17, 2008 22:48:47 GMT -6
Talk about the 11th hour...
New RP up.
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Post by The Brothers Holland on May 18, 2008 15:48:44 GMT -6
Dude... Kittens....
That's inspired! I loved it! You might not think you can do the humour I did in mine... but I swear you're selling yourself short. Seriously... inspired.
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Post by adm on May 19, 2008 21:30:21 GMT -6
11th hour is right, and you put out a nasty rp that left my sides splitting the next day. Kittens...that's a first. Good stuff, good stuff.
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Post by defunctlies on May 24, 2008 3:32:13 GMT -6
Both RP's up for this week.
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Post by defunctlies on May 28, 2008 20:44:50 GMT -6
Okay, if it's not too much to ask, could I get some feedback for my last two RP's? Need to know what was wrong with them so I don't fall into that kind of style.
[Edit] Well, new RP up. Tried not to get hung up on how much I could write this time, or how much inane babble I could make.
Better/same/worse than last week?
...come on guys, you're not helping my crippling paranoia.
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Post by Angel on Jun 6, 2008 5:37:32 GMT -6
Classic. That's all I have to say about your latest rp, classic.
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Post by Jack Ryan on Jun 6, 2008 8:00:08 GMT -6
Ahhh Hamsters.. good for cuteness, adorability and gay sex play..
but THE Hamster good for laughs, fun and all around ass kicking..
good job as always
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Post by defunctlies on Jun 14, 2008 18:35:33 GMT -6
Okay, so my compy broke early on in the week. I had to borrow my dad's today to get all three RP's done in one go. Not fun.
I hate my 1st RP, just so you know.
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Post by defunctlies on Jun 20, 2008 17:37:20 GMT -6
New RP up.
And just for the record, the image of Ace flying through the air covered in barbed wire going 'Whee!' is something that shall not quickly leave my mind.
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Post by Angel on Jun 20, 2008 19:50:07 GMT -6
I liked it. Just don't change your style up too much because people mock it, if they mock it, it's because their pissed that their not doing it, and if they did, they'd be ripping you off. Oh, and the "whee" made the whole damn rp for me.
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Post by defunctlies on Jul 25, 2008 9:56:36 GMT -6
New RP up.
Enjoy...AT YOUR PERIL.
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Post by defunctlies on Jul 30, 2008 10:18:45 GMT -6
'Back On Track' up.
Tried to tone down the gay innuendo this time...don't know if it worked.
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Post by msjsn3 on Jul 30, 2008 10:27:25 GMT -6
Nice rp
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Post by adm on Jul 30, 2008 19:09:03 GMT -6
Pretty nice rp, lots of talk, but you show why you deserve this match and why you shouldn't be overlooked. You've come a long way from when you started.
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Post by defunctlies on Aug 8, 2008 13:42:40 GMT -6
Posted 'Coming Home'.
Tried something...'different'.
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Post by defunctlies on Aug 9, 2008 17:37:53 GMT -6
Posted 'Waking Up'.
Tried something even more...'different'.
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Post by adm on Aug 10, 2008 13:11:25 GMT -6
two great rps from you man. I really look forward to facing off against you again in the near future. You've kicked some serious ass lately, and I don't see that changing.
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