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Post by msjsn3 on Oct 15, 2007 18:39:04 GMT -6
I try this for the first time....If you want give me feedback on The Journey...Thanks in advance
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Post by Spike Kane on Oct 16, 2007 3:00:56 GMT -6
erm...the white writing, has to go.
I was reading your roleplay and was like "wtf!? who's he talking to?" then I highlighted the huge gaps and realised it's actually text, so maybe edit that into another colour?
Other than that damn good roleplay, looks like the X-Division is hotting up.
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Post by Christian Kane on Oct 16, 2007 4:32:03 GMT -6
I liked your rp very much but like Spike says change the white as you told me to change yellow. The only thing is you always do your rp in the gym try and think out of the box man. But was a good rp and we will see i my dream means more then your journey. ![;)](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/wink.png)
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Post by The Ace on Oct 16, 2007 6:53:17 GMT -6
Err yes, apart from the typo in the title I only have a gripe with not being able to see the white text aswell...
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