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Post by adm on Apr 16, 2009 9:33:53 GMT -6
That's more like it you jackass. That's the Joe Everyman I love. That's the Joe that'll win the Xtreme title. That's the Joe that'll kick my ass. Good job, we're very proud of you sir.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Apr 25, 2009 13:07:52 GMT -6
That's more like it you jackass. That's the Joe Everyman I love. That's the Joe that'll win the Xtreme title. That's the Joe that'll kick my ass. Good job, we're very proud of you sir. Thanks Bates and Adam. Part five of the Xtreme Ascension "saga" is up. Go enjoy it
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Post by msjsn3 on Apr 25, 2009 14:08:08 GMT -6
Nice rp Joe...the only question is why wait so long to post it? your rps have gotten better.
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Post by adm on Apr 25, 2009 14:16:52 GMT -6
Exactly...the time it took for that one, you could have done two...and be tied with Jason and I for "who wins the match" you've just backed yourself into the deadlining corner now.
But it was a great rp, only criticism I have is for more descriptions when you're doing the song part.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Apr 25, 2009 16:12:23 GMT -6
Yeah I know it took me a long time, I've just had a really stressful week, and this is really first the first amount of time I've had. I'll defiantly have at least one more up by the deadline though. Thanks for the help, I'll be sure to do that Bates.
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Post by Joe Everyman on May 9, 2009 10:45:58 GMT -6
Finally my RP is up. I'm sorry it's so late, but I had to get something up. Some feedback would be greatly, greatly appreciated. Thanks ahead of time
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Post by Maniac on May 9, 2009 11:09:17 GMT -6
Above Average.
Which in turn makes it pretty goddam awesome.
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Post by Joe Everyman on May 9, 2009 11:10:29 GMT -6
Above Average. Which in turn makes it pretty goddam awesome. Thanks...I think >.>
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Post by adm on May 9, 2009 11:27:45 GMT -6
You put it out a couple days earlier you could have done a second...prick... but that's ok, my 2nd I had planned will just own the guy I face next week...tourney or not Edit: It was actually pretty good...for a deadline rp...no hamsters
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Post by Maniac on May 9, 2009 13:28:34 GMT -6
I liked it Joe, its something you should go for every week, that sort of quality.
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Post by adm on May 9, 2009 13:35:30 GMT -6
yes, had he pulled two of these I'd really have been in trouble...but he only did this one...
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Post by Joe Everyman on May 9, 2009 18:11:54 GMT -6
yes, had he pulled two of these I'd really have been in trouble...but he only did this one... Thanks Angel, and Bates...I pulled one of those out and you should be afraid, cause honestly, I think it's a toss up on who wins
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Post by adm on May 9, 2009 18:13:01 GMT -6
Salad toss-up?
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Post by Joe Everyman on May 9, 2009 18:15:10 GMT -6
I was thinking more of a basketball tip off, but yes
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Post by Joe Everyman on May 15, 2009 22:18:54 GMT -6
New RP up. It's kind of on the long side, but I wanted to do something like that. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated ;D
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Post by Maniac on May 15, 2009 23:30:45 GMT -6
You could have shortened it just a little bit, but regardles it's still top notch quality wise, and definitely right on track with what I think your capable of every week. Your right there man, don't let that brass ring slip away now.
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Post by adm on May 16, 2009 1:49:24 GMT -6
If you **** up with these great rps...wtf is wrong with you?
Seriously...****ing awesome, good job. Keep it up, you'll finally get the brass ring.
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Post by adm on May 22, 2009 14:59:19 GMT -6
Ok, now do another tomorrow and you'll have it won...
Seriously...you HAVE to max out this week or you'll lose to Diamond cuz I know he's gonna do another...I mean, it's ****ing Ed, he's gonna make you EARN this.
Awesome, though...you beat me for a chance...and you've been proving you earned it every week...don't disappoint.
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Post by Maniac on Jun 4, 2009 20:46:33 GMT -6
I'm gonna be honest with you Joe, not to be harsh, to be helpful, you repeated yourself alot in that rp. There were quite a few instances where you said something like "Jack and I will win because we aren't enemies" then the following sentence was like "You two hate each other thats why we'll win" and as you can tell thats nearly the same thing.
The potential was there for an amzing role play, but you just gotta watch yourself, especially pushing for the kind of length you had, that you don't repeat yourself.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jun 30, 2009 20:35:00 GMT -6
New RP is up, feedback would be greatly appreciated
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Post by Maniac on Jun 30, 2009 21:16:41 GMT -6
It was perfect Joe. I really don't have a single complaint about it.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jun 30, 2009 21:17:40 GMT -6
It was perfect Joe. I really don't have a single complaint about it. *Hugs*
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Post by adm on Jun 30, 2009 22:19:09 GMT -6
...Same as Ed. Finally...an rp without a ****TY SONG.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jun 30, 2009 22:33:05 GMT -6
...Same as Ed. Finally...an rp without a ****TY SONG. *Hugs...into a shanking*
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Post by adm on Jun 30, 2009 23:15:53 GMT -6
I knew I forgot something *hands a bottle of booze* that'll disinfect the shank wound...and *hugs* if you want it.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jul 11, 2009 12:45:55 GMT -6
New RP up. New Joe, so I need new feedback pl0x.
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Post by Maniac on Jul 11, 2009 14:05:30 GMT -6
Pretty damn good Heel Joe. That last block of talking before your little send off could of been a little bit better. You sort of repeated yourself as far as X not mattering and what not, but all in all heel Joe seems to be a nice turn around for you.
I think you should try some scenes next week, like Heel Joe at an autograph signing or an interview or something like that, where he can be dickish to people he wouldn't normally be dickish to.
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Post by Maniac on Jul 11, 2009 22:15:04 GMT -6
Your 2nd rp was a home run man, right out of the ball park. RPs like that are some of my favorites where you don't waste a whole lot of time just trash talking and you pulled this one off to perfection.
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Post by adm on Jul 12, 2009 11:47:25 GMT -6
WHERE WERE THESE MONTHS AGO YOU PRICK! YOU WOULD BE WORLD CHAMP BY NOW IF YOU ACTUALLY PUT THIS EFFORT FORWARD BEFORE!
Yeah...they are really ****ing good...good job...now if you flake on this...I will lose all remaining respect for your awesomeness.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jul 18, 2009 13:58:55 GMT -6
Thanks for the feedback guys, it really helped. Also, a new RP is up for this week. It's not my best work ever, because it was something I've never done before (The creepy, dark RP kinda thingy), so bear with me. Feedback would be great ;D
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