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Post by adm on Feb 14, 2009 0:53:47 GMT -6
Day five...wow...better than Day 1 by far. Kinda delves into what X used to be and how he isn't...it's interesting to see where that could go.
Now between the latest ME matches you showed us why you are there. Now...lets bring this match up and over!
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Post by Xavier Williams on Feb 15, 2009 7:37:01 GMT -6
Day... Seven... up... the italics are his thoughts... yeah...
*dies*
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Post by defunctlies on Feb 15, 2009 8:05:43 GMT -6
...dude.
Dude.
DUDE.
DUDE!
I'm so boned.
Very good work this week, pull up an OBE and have a Knighthood.
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Post by Maniac on Feb 15, 2009 10:11:04 GMT -6
Your third rp was probably the best rp I've seen from you since the last time you kicked my ass for the X title.
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Post by adm on Feb 15, 2009 14:49:54 GMT -6
Last rp good as #2, though I still have a few irks bout #1 cuz of that shirt thing. I dunno...it just...left me confused.
But this one, no confusion. Straight-on badass rp. Now who will win, let's wait to find out !!
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Post by Xavier Williams on Mar 19, 2009 19:59:58 GMT -6
"Last of a Dying Breed" up
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Post by adm on Mar 19, 2009 20:33:18 GMT -6
You are the last of a dying breed. And...for getting your rp up before the last day, here's a cookie *gives a cookie* Also, here's your money *gives money* now...don't pimp slap me...I said nice things
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Post by Xavier Williams on Mar 22, 2009 2:22:24 GMT -6
*barrel roll*
Feedback plz?
*pimp slaps KLB*
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Post by Xavier Williams on Jul 25, 2009 14:03:16 GMT -6
*cough* So Im pretty muc dusting this thread off b/c I want to try a new style, and my last promo (not descripitive enough to be an rp) was basically a taste.
It basically comes from love for Eddie Kingston and his promo style, a muc more in your face, I'll say what I have to say and say nothing more type of thing.
The reason why... time. I used to be able to take like 2 or 3 days to write out a rp, but now I have like a day... or just hours due to me working a night shift. So do you think I should keep working the "shoot" style or try something else.
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Post by adm on Jul 25, 2009 18:30:54 GMT -6
Grammar...errors...EVERYWHERE...I really don't know if there's enough not with errors on it to say whether or not the style works or not...the errors were just so distracting man...they literally glared at me "No punctuation, mis-spelled words, why is this number randomly here?"
I have a feeling this rp was rushed...and if you took a little bit of time to assemble something like it next week every day...and revised it before posting...you might do a lot better with the style. but for now that's the BIGGEST problem...the errors.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Jul 25, 2009 20:06:37 GMT -6
I know you're trying to be constructive... but it just comes off as, "OH EM GEEE SP33L1NG ERR0rZ ON TEH INT3RWEBZ~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ONEONEONEONEONE1111"
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Post by Maniac on Jul 25, 2009 22:48:18 GMT -6
I know he's trying to help, but it does come off a little over bearing, out side of the errors, it was a solid rp X.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Jan 27, 2010 9:47:08 GMT -6
Good **** X! You just reminded me why you used to be the man!
Keep up the good work bro!
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Post by Xavier Williams on Jan 27, 2010 13:49:26 GMT -6
5 MONTHS SINCE LAST COMMENT... I think I broke the record for longest gap between feedbacks...
*cries*
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Post by Xavier Williams on Jul 10, 2010 21:58:24 GMT -6
7 Months... I win again!
Umm... Feedback, and maybe I'll return the favor, unless your name is Sam.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Sept 30, 2010 18:48:23 GMT -6
9 Months... w00t!
But srsly, I'd like some feedback to see if you guys are feeling the RPs so far, have you been digging the content or some of the Character Dev, have the punchlines been hit or miss, just something to see if you guys are enjoying them
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Oct 31, 2010 5:19:40 GMT -6
Just wanted to say I liked your rp this week bro.
I like the idea of X being a trainer. It just seems to fit him.
But yeah, solid job this week man. Devo was great.
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