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Post by Xavier Williams on Dec 31, 2007 11:58:43 GMT -6
You know the game. I havent done a lot, 1 dev, and 1 actual match RP, but I want some thoughts and opinions, and possibly some credit card PIN numbers.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Jan 11, 2008 0:45:13 GMT -6
RP UP! RP UP! RP UP! (pun on Man Up!, for those not in the know)
So...feedback?
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The Fox
Rookie
Never Outfox The Fox!
Posts: 63
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Post by The Fox on Jan 11, 2008 3:12:50 GMT -6
Enjoyed it dude! Glad it wasn't some small ass piece of work as its been for my past opponents. I'll more than likely have a final one up tomorrow after I get off work!
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Post by Spike Kane on Jan 11, 2008 11:52:11 GMT -6
Nice roleplay dude, I can see you doing well here.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Jan 17, 2008 20:28:39 GMT -6
Liek ZOMG!! New RP...Liek Feed back is ttly welcomed...
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Post by tylerjacobs on Jan 18, 2008 6:16:21 GMT -6
I'm so looking forward to this match, i honestly think it has a chance of stealing the show (maybe because i'm writig it, mwuahahah)
Very nice dude, keep it up.
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Jack Manson
Senior Member
It's the one that kills, not me!
Posts: 914
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 18, 2008 6:58:16 GMT -6
Nice roleplay bud, keep it up.
Only crit is to re-read your roleplays so you can catch out annoying typo's or if your HTML codes are messed up a bit, which it was towards the end.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Jan 19, 2008 21:37:52 GMT -6
New RP up, titled, "You Make Me Laugh Inside"
I went a little bit more sarcastic and littl emore asswholish, so thoughts?
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Post by Xavier Williams on Jan 25, 2008 0:55:40 GMT -6
First PPV Rp Up, enjoy the sounds of Kenny G, as you read...
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Post by Adam on Jan 25, 2008 22:44:33 GMT -6
First PPV Rp Up, enjoy the sounds of Kenny G, as you read... I enjoyed it, short but had some good content.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Jan 31, 2008 20:59:15 GMT -6
Enjoy the first Post AotR Rp, "It Begins... Again"
Now Playing: Brian McKnight
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Post by tylerjacobs on Feb 1, 2008 5:09:14 GMT -6
dude...that roleplay was brilliant.
I loved the build up, a nice little bit of character development, explaining why he's straight edge and ****. then bam the roleplay kicks in.
Nice work dude, keep it up.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Feb 2, 2008 22:33:08 GMT -6
Ummmm....enjoy Bitches?
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Post by Xavier Williams on Feb 9, 2008 22:54:29 GMT -6
NEW RP Up
Title: "The Seed" (Part 2)
Enjoy Bishes
Now Playing: AMy Winehouse
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Post by adm on Feb 10, 2008 0:36:03 GMT -6
Nice rp. Only thing I gotta say is try and make sure to double-check whether or not you coded it right. having extra tags that show up in your rp can get distracting and kill the illusion.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Feb 15, 2008 0:59:03 GMT -6
New RP, ZOMMFGZGHBBQBAHGAWD!!!!
Title: Sleepwalking
Now Listening to: Barry White
enjoy!
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Jack Manson
Senior Member
It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 15, 2008 7:01:10 GMT -6
Man, that was a great roleplay, one of your best I reckon.
Nothing to crit mate, just keep up the good work.
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JFK
Senior Member
Sucks to be you.
Posts: 950
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Post by JFK on Feb 15, 2008 8:42:08 GMT -6
Very nice dude if I wasnt retireing Price (and didnt also use the cide look for him) I could see these two geting along just fine lol.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Feb 15, 2008 14:46:09 GMT -6
Agreed. Good stuff dude.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Feb 27, 2008 23:12:33 GMT -6
New RP Up
Title: Silence Just Silence
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Post by Xavier Williams on Mar 1, 2008 19:55:36 GMT -6
New PPV RP Up, showing a little more sadistic side of Xavier this time around.
But I think it fits together nicely.
Title" Your Halo is Hanging Low"
And of course feedback is still open on the last RP as well.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Mar 22, 2008 22:56:26 GMT -6
New RP
Title: The Battle Lines Are Drawn
Feedback pleaz...Mudkipz to anyone who does so?
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Post by Xavier Williams on Apr 4, 2008 13:29:01 GMT -6
"The Art of Storytelling" RP Up
If you dont leave feedback... I will post VD RPs..EVERYWHERE.. ask yourself
Can you handle it?
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Post by Dante Cross on Apr 6, 2008 0:05:03 GMT -6
Oh I can handle it, the question is, could you survive a marathon of Trent Helms roleplays with your sanity intact?
But seriously, you are growing quite well, I told Craig how you are making great strides, and are better then what your record says.
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Post by Xavier Williams on May 6, 2008 21:15:00 GMT -6
Ummmmmmmmmmm
feedback... meh?
Do it for Steiner... HAH?!?
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Post by Davey Ortega on May 7, 2008 11:31:35 GMT -6
I'll do it for Xavier.
Awesome rp man. You guys might steal the show with this match
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Post by Xavier Williams on May 9, 2008 21:55:52 GMT -6
Nobody ever does it for Steiner... New RP up... Off to Liberty City I Go! *runs down a hooker*
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Post by Angel on May 10, 2008 11:17:37 GMT -6
Seriously, nice rp. I thought Davey Ortega was going to be tough, but your really pushing me. I'm having fun, we should definitely rematch one way or the other down the road.
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Post by Spike Kane on May 17, 2008 6:06:13 GMT -6
Nice rp my friend, you've kept them coming for quite a while now As you probably aimed for the ending brought a smile to my face, I liked it and it also let me know that you read my roleplay too. So, kudos amigo
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Post by Xavier Williams on May 24, 2008 21:39:34 GMT -6
There ya go.. guess what game i played before RPing...
Thats right, GTA IV
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