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Post by tylerjacobs on Dec 11, 2007 16:02:00 GMT -6
Post all your feedback for Ricky Johnson roleplays here.
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Post by Ricky Johnson on Dec 29, 2007 23:27:06 GMT -6
I'm good.
*END SHAMLESS SELF-PLUG*
Just kidding, it's all good. Feedback is always welcome.
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Post by Dante Cross on Dec 29, 2007 23:44:55 GMT -6
It wasn't bad, however there is something I want to address because I do see alot of potential in you, but it seems you kinda been coasting a bit, I'm not saying your work is bad, because I assure you it's good. But something just seems to be missing a bit.
I really think you can be successful and are able to get past being midcard, Maybe try mixing it up a little bit more, every roleplay I reviewed today to get used with everyone, Everything from the past 2 months has almost been the same.
Other then that, It was good.
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Jack Manson
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It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Dec 30, 2007 14:39:29 GMT -6
Ricky, props to you on the first roleplay, the cardboard title thing had me creased up in laughter.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Dec 30, 2007 23:01:21 GMT -6
For some reason my internet wont let me view your rp's. Does anybody else have that problem?
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Post by Adam on Dec 30, 2007 23:37:51 GMT -6
For some reason my internet wont let me view your rp's. Does anybody else have that problem? I had that problem at Work, at home though it worked fine.
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Jack Manson
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It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 12, 2008 10:13:27 GMT -6
Thought your roleplays this week were a nice change from what I've expected to be a Ricky Johnson roleplay.
The last one was intense, reminded me of the feud me and Spike had when we included our familys etc. It was pretty powerful stuff.
Great work dude.
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Post by Ricky Johnson on Jan 19, 2008 23:19:00 GMT -6
Worst......Vacation.....Ever is up for your viewing pleasure.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jan 19, 2008 23:37:29 GMT -6
I thought it was a very entertaining read. I love RPs that are diolouge based, and you hit that with full force.
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Post by Adam on Jan 20, 2008 1:47:42 GMT -6
I've gotta say Ricky is probably one of the best pure dialog RP guys I've ever seen.
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Post by Ricky Johnson on Jan 26, 2008 23:47:28 GMT -6
Male Bonding.......Do Your Homework.
Feedback is welcomed, before and after the results are posted if you wish.
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Post by Ricky Johnson on Feb 3, 2008 0:00:57 GMT -6
PPV rp, along with incredibly ****ty "focus" are up for feedback.
Lack of time made 'Focus" not very good.
You could see where it was going: a longer convo with the parents, Ricky would have gone and talked to his bros too, more Shaun Wilson talk and all that.
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Post by Adam on Feb 3, 2008 0:03:21 GMT -6
Despite it being short and done at the last second I thought it was good. It had a lot of what was going on in Ricky's head and how he was reacting without Roxi. I thought it was good.
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Post by Ricky Johnson on Feb 16, 2008 23:58:56 GMT -6
I can't even say that "One Track Mind" was a roleplay.
But "Back to Normal" is and it....is...UP!
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Post by Steve Awesome on Feb 17, 2008 18:52:31 GMT -6
Your stuff always makes me laugh dude. Keep up the good work.
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Post by Ricky Johnson on Feb 23, 2008 18:25:56 GMT -6
Look who's talking........ IS....UP!
THIS IS DEFCAF! THIS IS SCRUMPIOUS!
I love Robot Chicken
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Post by Ricky Johnson on Mar 21, 2008 23:55:42 GMT -6
"Finding Faith"
is up.
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Post by Angel on Mar 22, 2008 16:08:06 GMT -6
I liked that last one. Made me wish I had wait to post my second rp to today, but I still liked it, it was funny.
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Post by Dante Cross on Apr 6, 2008 0:23:36 GMT -6
I'm a big fan of your stuff, and see alot of similarities between myself and you, I don't know if you should take that as a kind gesture or a insult, but your roleplays are always good when I can't sleep near the deadline and you always post them.
Also while I'm on the subject, I noticed, (at least in your mind) your greatest effort came against me (The same could been said for Ortega) who tends to post roleplays on the same schedule as yourself, how come people always push themselves harder when up against me?
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Post by Ricky Johnson on May 2, 2008 22:28:15 GMT -6
"History" (which in reality should have been developmental) is up.
the second will be up tomorrow.
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Post by Adam on May 2, 2008 22:59:29 GMT -6
Loved it. Well played my good sir...... well played.
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Post by Angel on May 3, 2008 18:26:57 GMT -6
Like the new direction.
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Post by Ricky Johnson on May 3, 2008 19:42:28 GMT -6
"Epithany" is up for your viewing plesure.
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Reckoning
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White Gangsta
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Post by Reckoning on May 3, 2008 19:57:29 GMT -6
Pure awesome man, loved it. Sounds like a movie a bit lol
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Post by Angel on Sept 14, 2008 9:08:16 GMT -6
I don't normally do this, because I usually love your role plays, but you should really read peoples older role plays before you tell them about their life.
"Are you happy, pawn of the people? You have your Bitches, your fans, your career, you have your parents"
Something I've been documenting in my rps over the last month or so is the horrible history Angel has with his mother and how he thought his father was dead, but wasn't, but is now. As well as his struggling to find god in a godless world, and his ever rocky relationship with not only Shelly but members of the Social Enemies as well.
It's not something other people will notice, but I do, and it's something I would use to exploit in another rp if I had another to do. I don't mean any offense, like I said, I usually love your rps, but this week you said a couple of things about Angel, I don't if that's how you meant them to sound, but they didn't really make any sense. Just some advice.
Awesome job this week other wise.
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Post by Keybo Shabaz on Aug 29, 2009 4:22:19 GMT -6
Ninjas > Pirates
All I have to say..
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Post by Maniac on Aug 30, 2009 22:10:22 GMT -6
Dude, JOURNEY OWNS! nuff said
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Post by Ricky Johnson on Jan 7, 2010 5:55:24 GMT -6
"You remind me of someone" is up, and I feel so rusty right now.
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Post by Ricky Johnson on Mar 24, 2010 6:09:56 GMT -6
"For the Record" is up.
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Post by Will Washington on Mar 24, 2010 8:07:54 GMT -6
The trash talk was really good. You ripped some guys and made them look foolish. I said you're the one to watch for a reason. Having said that, I have 2 problems:
1. Too much fluff. It's almost 4,000 words, but if you take out the Press Conference, which has nothing to do with the match, and the stuff to Roxi, then you've got 1,600 words. I understand CD, but that's just too much CD. 2. You completely got my character wrong. Will's not the "I love America it's better than your country" type of patriot. He's the anti-establishment, I love America and hate what it's become patriot. He's anti-government, anti-establishment, but with a liberal edge. You painted him as a gun-toting, pick-up driving, Fox News watching idiot. Completely the opposite of what I go for with him.
Like I said, the stuff in red was awesome. The rest I would have snipped. But damn it you;re a challenge.
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