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Post by JackHammer on Feb 15, 2008 15:21:43 GMT -6
What do you guys think of my rp for my second match?
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Post by Angel on May 16, 2008 5:29:26 GMT -6
Nice rp man, pretty damn funny.
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Post by msjsn3 on Aug 27, 2008 18:08:10 GMT -6
Out of town rp was awesome. I have never been to Scotland...and after reading you rp....I would love to go one of these days.
Awesome rp!
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Post by adm on Apr 18, 2009 21:29:09 GMT -6
*bump*
That rp...sudden heel-turn and confusing no-care attitude of Hammer aside...best rp you have EVER done...EVER. And how long have I known you?
Yeah...keep it up...please?
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Post by adm on Apr 23, 2009 16:44:34 GMT -6
Ok, the PPV rp confused me...as you really didn't make much sense...
Also...where did you get the record from cuz I don't think you've gone 5-0 since coming back a month ago...it's very confusing and I'm wondering if you even read our rps
Hopefully your 2nd will be better because...though the descriptions are better, it's really confusing whether or not Hammer even...realizes where the hell he is or who his opponents are.
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Post by Maniac on May 16, 2009 8:38:39 GMT -6
WOW...
Thats all I can really say man.
I feel like everytime I read an rp of yours, its the best one you've ever done, and this week was no exception. Phenominal job.
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Post by msjsn3 on May 16, 2009 12:14:54 GMT -6
Nice Job partner.
I really enjoyed this one just like I did the last one.
Keep it up
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Post by Maniac on Jul 4, 2009 21:48:25 GMT -6
Allright, I gotta say something man, because I'm sort of confused.
Your role plays are extremely well written and give a great deal of insight to the character, but what I don't understand is how more often than not it has nothing to do with whats going on, or atleast it has very little to do with whats going on.
Your obviously a talented writer but there comes a point when you hit overkill as far as character development goes, and I think you've gone past overkill to the point your beating a dead horse with yet another dead horse while devouring a very dead horse.
Your second rp, the last third of it when Hammer finally got around to adressing the match was fanatastic, but everything leading up to it, could have easily been split up over two or even three role plays, it didn't need to be all crammed in there like that.
I like what you do, I like the indepth thought you put into Jackhammer, I like that he's very three dimensional, but I think if you spread the CD out a little more, focused a little less on CD in each role play and a little more on what we'll call "classic" trash talk I think you'd win allot more, and it might even make writing the role plays easier and less time consuming.
Thats just my opinion and I felt like I needed to get it out there. I meant no offense my friend.
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Post by JackHammer on Jul 7, 2009 23:48:22 GMT -6
No offense taken Chris. Yea have been thinking and probably need to do some re working on my rps.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Aug 5, 2009 23:38:22 GMT -6
Hammer man, great work lately on your rps. I'm really enjoying them, although, and this is just a personal preference, I'd like to see a little coding in your rps. By no means does it effect the overall judging or anything like that, I'd just like to see some coding so it seems a bit more organized. That and I like to look at pretty colors on my computer screen Other than that, great work. You and Sexy Jason make for a quality feud.
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Post by adm on Aug 6, 2009 8:49:47 GMT -6
It was a good one, same with last week, you really stepped up vs SJ, don't stop, it might hurt you in the long run. And this is coming from the guy you used to fed with...4 years ago? lol yup...
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Post by JackHammer on Aug 6, 2011 9:13:46 GMT -6
Was just wondering what you guys thought about my rps since have come back?
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Post by Jason Evans on Aug 24, 2011 21:55:07 GMT -6
Your first rp for Nothing to Lose was good. It was in a setting that I have not seen from JackHammer.
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Post by JackHammer on Aug 25, 2011 0:15:50 GMT -6
Thanks man
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