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Post by adm on Feb 9, 2008 0:37:44 GMT -6
Yeah, I figured I needs me one of these fun feedback threads. I'll try and take any of those comments you got and use em best I can.
Anyway...you can start with my latest rp: Mysterious Nightmare
Thanks for any feedback peoples. Tis much appreciated.
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Post by adm on Feb 18, 2008 16:11:35 GMT -6
New Rp posted. The Nightmare Continues; give feedback on it please. And try to give me any feedback on whether or not this alternate reality thing is working.
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Post by Angel on Feb 18, 2008 22:20:26 GMT -6
I liked your rps, just seems they run a little long sometimes. No offense, I do it too.
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Post by adm on Mar 7, 2008 0:30:12 GMT -6
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Post by Lance "The Icon" Ryan on Mar 7, 2008 10:52:10 GMT -6
I know that we have had differences in the past, so I will start with the positive. I do like reading your roleplays man, I tend to like the storytelling type of roleplays more, because its not mundane like a straight up trash talkng with nothing more. In that sense, I like where you are going, and see a lot of potential.
On the downside, when you did do trash talking on Spike, you mentioned that Lance had two matches, when if you had read through the pay per view, you would have seen that there was no first match at all. It was a swerve done to end a storyline that had been going on for months. If you are going to relate to other stories, it does look tacky to not do your homework.
Overall a good roleplay though man, like I said, I like where this is going.
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Post by adm on Mar 7, 2008 16:44:17 GMT -6
Such is what happens when I use the images on the card to see what matches there were...When I read it when it was first posted I read that part, just that I forgot to read beyond the banner of the match. It's a small thing, but I'll take that to mind next time.
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Post by adm on Apr 1, 2008 21:56:20 GMT -6
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Apr 27, 2008 2:29:59 GMT -6
Yeah the latest one...
Way to tear me a new one... if you'd done that one first I probably would've no showed just to make sure something like that actually won a match.
I liked it enough that I hope I never face you again. It's a compliment, trust me. Keep that stuff up.
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Post by adm on May 19, 2008 21:27:19 GMT -6
Well, New Rp up in "Backed into a Corner with No Escape" plus what I did last week...and for the PPV...been a while since I asked for feedback in here.
Oh, and please comment on the headline for Prophet's Six Year Anniversary (it's an interview about his six years in the bus, and is about a month late to tell you the truth).
Thanks guys, and thanks Dave for your comment, and the great match we had. And thanks to Hammond for another great match, though 1rp each was pretty damn good. Hammer, you know it's always good facing you.
Thanks, and comment as freely as you want.
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Post by tylerjacobs on Jul 1, 2008 6:18:46 GMT -6
Well wow, that was one hell of a roleplay. Kinda annoyed that Fate did all the talking, but it makes sense and adds to DP's mental state going into the match. Also not a fan of Tarot, but i liked the touch to it.
It was a pretty decent roleplay dude, and I'm glad we're finally facing off, win or lose you're helping me notch my game up again and I thank you.
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Post by Angel on Jul 12, 2008 7:31:03 GMT -6
That last rp was sick. Sick I tell you.
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Post by adm on Jul 12, 2008 10:06:22 GMT -6
That last rp was sick. Sick I tell you. Nice to see going back to "Old School" DP actually worked. Though...to do those kinda rps it takes twice as long to write, so I don't like doing them that much, you'd be surprised how hard it is to rhyme stuff that doesn't usually rhyme just to make it work.
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JFK
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The dominant gene.
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Post by JFK on Jul 19, 2008 22:04:19 GMT -6
Holy ****ing crap *awe struck*
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Post by adm on Jul 19, 2008 22:38:12 GMT -6
What'd I do? Um...thanks I guess. You forced me to keep stepping up, and up...and up...and I needed a lot of thought to actually rhyme all that stuff...takes forf*ckingever, and hopefully you'll enjoy the match I wrote, as well.
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Post by disdonn on Jul 6, 2009 21:35:50 GMT -6
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Post by disdonn on Jul 9, 2009 14:43:34 GMT -6
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Post by Maniac on Jul 9, 2009 21:08:47 GMT -6
terrible.
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Post by Maniac on Jul 9, 2009 21:12:02 GMT -6
No seriously. The first one came off a little slow, a little like you weren't sure what to do as far as the narration went.
The second one was allot better than the first as far as narration goes, the whole watchmen thing, I feel, works for you, especially with this character. My only real advice would be to shorten them up just a little tiny bit, not too much, just a little.
As for the rhyming, I like it, it's creepy, it's weird, but it has a point.
Now go listen to Cage and get inspried.
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Post by disdonn on Jul 13, 2009 15:17:46 GMT -6
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Post by disdonn on Jul 17, 2009 21:41:05 GMT -6
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Post by disdonn on Jul 22, 2009 20:38:24 GMT -6
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Post by disdonn on Jul 24, 2009 10:39:01 GMT -6
ncw2k7rp.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=trauma&thread=8903 - Valknot 2 Ok, if you wanna know what helped give me an inspiration for this rp it's right here: Thanks Ed...you were right, it would help. And THIS TIME, I did something different, I wrote the poem FIRST and the scene description AFTER...tell me how you think it flowed this time...verse and scene. If you can...I keep trying to improve and feedback is what I need to get this as refined as possible before Falcon at Fallout.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jul 24, 2009 11:06:52 GMT -6
It gave me wood.....you are hardcore mister....hardcore I say!
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Post by disdonn on Aug 11, 2009 14:19:12 GMT -6
ncw2k7rp.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=collision&thread=9146 - Altered States Part 1 I lost the PPV, but I am beginning to enjoy this "The Prophecy" character showing up in the rps...either blurry, invisible, or whatever...I feel it acting as a "spiritual guide" of sorts. This rp was inspired by an ep of taboo from Nat Geo channel...one where spiritual leaders "see beyond time and space using hallucinogens" in tribal South America.
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Post by disdonn on Aug 14, 2009 15:11:42 GMT -6
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 14, 2009 15:20:25 GMT -6
Love it.... I like DP more and more each week!!
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Post by disdonn on Aug 19, 2009 20:05:14 GMT -6
ncw2k7rp.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=trauma&thread=9254 - Altered States Part 3 This time, no poems, but...something equally disjointed and insane. I am enjoying the way these altered States rps somehow fit in with the overall "feeling" of how Prophet is evolving...less a wrestler...more a shaman/prophet using his own pain and psychosis as a means of meditation. Hopefully Ed doesn't kill me for this one.
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Post by disdonn on Aug 26, 2009 15:42:29 GMT -6
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Post by disdonn on Sept 7, 2009 16:21:48 GMT -6
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