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Post by tylerjacobs on Dec 11, 2007 16:00:55 GMT -6
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Dec 15, 2007 6:50:16 GMT -6
New roleplay up, you guys know the drill.
Positive, negative, it's all good.
Cheers
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Christian Kane
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Post by Christian Kane on Dec 15, 2007 7:08:05 GMT -6
I liked your rp man as usual. I see that title coming back home to Manson;)
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 10, 2008 17:28:04 GMT -6
New roleplay up guys, tried something different this time by using a lot of speech. Thanks to Ace for inspiring me.
Let me know if it worked, if it didn't, how I can improve etc.
Cheers Lads.
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Jan 10, 2008 18:06:05 GMT -6
I'd be inclined to say too much speech... but not really. As in the speech came in blocks a little too big. And that is purely personal preference as the roleplay itself was very good.
Keep that up and I'm in trouble.
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Post by msjsn3 on Jan 10, 2008 22:50:06 GMT -6
I thought the role play was good. As usually you turn out some good rp's. Keep up the good work
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Post by Spike Kane on Jan 11, 2008 6:46:52 GMT -6
As I said on msn...
MANSONS BACK BABY!!
I loved the roleplay, it felt like the passion was pouring from Manson and the words were believable. Keept it up dude, because that was....ahema...AWESOME.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 12, 2008 19:06:06 GMT -6
New roleplay up. Just a simple interview roleplay because I'm a bit strapped for time.
Either way, lemme know what you think.
Cheers.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 17, 2008 12:16:57 GMT -6
Roleplay up, feedback if any please.
Cheers people.
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Post by destroyyou555 on Jan 17, 2008 12:23:39 GMT -6
Pretty good, you made me read back over mine to make sure I didn't make the type you pointed out, which I didn't
I was referring to Ortega being in the empire, not yourself...but just a small misread, it's all good.
I'll give it 7/10
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 17, 2008 12:31:06 GMT -6
I didn't misread it.
That's talking about Manson, not Ortega. The whole paragraph is on Manson. Where did I mis-read your roleplay? lol
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Post by destroyyou555 on Jan 17, 2008 12:32:42 GMT -6
Sorry, meant to say No Warning Shots, you got me....
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 17, 2008 12:35:39 GMT -6
Like you said, it's all good
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Post by msjsn3 on Jan 17, 2008 12:38:05 GMT -6
it was interesting to read...good rp
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Post by Bannedingo on Jan 17, 2008 14:07:11 GMT -6
great RP dude. i really liked the doctor thing.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 25, 2008 7:40:05 GMT -6
First PPV RP up, tell me what you think.
Cheers.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 25, 2008 12:56:04 GMT -6
Second PPV RP up, tried involving Jack's gimmick more in this one by going back to my early nCw days of roleplaying lol.
If you don't give feedback for the first one, please do me the honour of giving it for this one, I'd like to know what you all thought about it.
If you give feedback for both then it's greatfully appreciated.
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Christian Kane
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Post by Christian Kane on Jan 25, 2008 13:31:56 GMT -6
I liked both of your rp's man but preferd your second one as it involved jack:p. keep up the good work man
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 1, 2008 8:55:39 GMT -6
New RP up, just a short one for my first, I'll try and get another one up on Saturday.
Feedback and Crits are always welcome.
Thanks in advance.
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Post by Lance "The Icon" Ryan on Feb 1, 2008 13:06:30 GMT -6
Dude, i havent had the chance to talk to you lately, but I love the evolution of your character and of your roleplays, it is just a matter of time until you reach the top here, and this was another great roleplay that I could not find fault in really.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 2, 2008 6:10:03 GMT -6
Thanks Lance, really means a lot
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 2, 2008 19:51:33 GMT -6
Second roleplay up. Tried my best with the little promo's I was given, mainly had to improvise so sorry to AotR if I'm getting the wrong message about their cause lol.
Feedback and Crit always welcome, Thanks in advance.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 15, 2008 11:40:36 GMT -6
First Collision RP up. Not my best work by far, was having a very uncreative day.
Feedback and critique always welcome.
Thanks in advance.
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Post by Spike Kane on Mar 1, 2008 14:15:26 GMT -6
As I promised on msn:
Dude I'm so dissapointed, not in the roleplay-the roleplay itself is amazing. I just know if you'd had a chance to write another one or two like that you'd be the new World Champion.
Sadly, my honest opinion is that it's too little too late, admittedly I'm in the middle of writing my third roleplay now (as I imagine Lance is) I'm sorry that Uni work had to take presidence this week my friend.
One day soon, you will be world champion.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jun 7, 2008 12:22:44 GMT -6
Well, first roleplay up in a long time. Honestly I don't think it's anything special. Found myself being quite RP rusty TBH.
Once I start getting into some storylines and stuff I'm sure it'll pass.
Comments and crit always welcome.
Cheers
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jun 12, 2008 11:05:16 GMT -6
First PPV rp up, almost feel hypocritical for saying my only gripe with Spike's was the length of the development, when mine is about the same lol.
Anyways, you all know the drill.
Cheers.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jun 21, 2008 12:11:59 GMT -6
Collision RP up, feedback if any.
Thanks
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jun 28, 2008 18:43:43 GMT -6
RP up, feedback if any.
Cheers
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jul 12, 2008 11:13:50 GMT -6
Just a quick effort up this week, and I think it showed.
Any feedback welcome.
Cheers
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Post by adm on Jul 12, 2008 11:28:59 GMT -6
It was a cool rp, but yeah, it did seem kinda rushed. At least you got it up, and we all know your usual stuff kicks some serious ass, and you've done better than other people facing off against Lance.
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