Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Aug 2, 2008 19:28:25 GMT -6
Two RP's up this week, although the second probs won't be counted because it's a bit late.
I tried hard to come up with an interesting setting and scenario but in the end it just alluded me so I got straight to the point and left out any character development.
Good, bad, so-so, say it here.
Cheers.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 6, 2009 20:26:08 GMT -6
Feedback if any guys, Thanks
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Post by msjsn3 on Jan 6, 2009 20:37:21 GMT -6
good rp as always. Glad you are back.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jan 6, 2009 20:46:45 GMT -6
It's time like these where I REALLY hate facing you in matches. God...dammit... Otherwise, great job
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 10, 2009 7:40:53 GMT -6
Thanks guys.
Second RP up, you know the drill.
Good, bad, average?
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Post by Maniac on Jan 10, 2009 9:51:16 GMT -6
Jack I wana give you my honest opinion and I want you to know it's nothing personal or anything, I just felt it was needlessly long, like you made it long for the sake of being long, you know? I don't want you to take it the wrong way, because parts of it were amazing.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 10, 2009 9:54:57 GMT -6
Thanks dude I appreciate the honesty I did feel it was long in some parts, I just get bored of doing an all talking roleplay lol.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 11, 2009 8:54:24 GMT -6
Third and final roleplay up, you know the drill.
Thanks in advance.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 4, 2009 19:57:41 GMT -6
First Collision RP up, short but... you finish the sentance with some feedback lol.
Cheers peeps
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Frostbyte
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Post by Frostbyte on Feb 4, 2009 20:23:47 GMT -6
hmmmm........... a second read is necessary from my point of view as your opponent this week.... (prepare to be crushed by the way, i'm gonna make notes as i go then throw your world upside down lol)
but yeah nothing wrong with the length of it if you ask me... not really as short as you think cos you got everything across nicely.. good work in all (and if i'm honest i haven't really been following you til recently when i started out on the TTT trail but you're definitely where you are for a reason)
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Post by Maniac on Feb 5, 2009 8:31:45 GMT -6
"Because if there is one thing Angel can do it’s manipulate. We’ve all seen it, and most of them fall for it. He’s the master of manipulation, he’s a ****ing Jedi in disguise, using the mind trick technique to get everything he wants."
I think I'm in love. Great job Jack, if I had any doubt in my mind about you being as good as you used to be it was just destroyed by your death star.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 5, 2009 16:14:23 GMT -6
Thanks for the feedback guys, much appreciated
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Frostbyte
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Post by Frostbyte on Feb 6, 2009 8:14:47 GMT -6
I want a death star! how come I don't get one!? Do I need a certain ammount of posts?
I DEMAND A DEATH STAR!
Frosty has responded jack... if that IS your real name
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Jack Manson
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It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 7, 2009 12:17:58 GMT -6
Hey I'm just a rebel, I don't have any battle station the Empire might own lol.
Anyways, second roleplay up, you know the drill guys.
Cheers.
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Post by Maniac on Feb 8, 2009 16:54:01 GMT -6
You sir have given me a great deal of inspiration for next week, good show.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Nov 13, 2010 6:39:25 GMT -6
It's that time when I ask for some feedback.
All appreciated.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 27, 2011 17:46:37 GMT -6
Feedback if any please.
Cheers.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Mar 5, 2011 12:42:45 GMT -6
Feedback anyone?
Not just on this week, which I personally felt was lacking as I didn't have time to do much character development, but also any of my recent stuff etc.
Thanks in advance.
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