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Post by johnnycraven on Aug 10, 2007 2:06:51 GMT -6
Well, let's have it
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Post by John Anthony on Aug 10, 2007 3:44:08 GMT -6
Going one on One: Ok I liked the concept to a point. Good structure organzied well but Your Texas Red Johnny Craven act like an adult a little. Your Manager wow out there a little childish also. If you live in the country I think thats what you said why not get satelite and have your internet work through there. Your a professional wrestler and your looking things up in a library? Name one wrestler that does that? I am just saying your supposed to be a bad ass I think and things are not adding up. If you stay more to your character your rp's could be better. You have great talent you just have to put it all together and we could see some great rp's out of you.
Now The Search: Better I applaud you. You made your character sound how he is supposed to sound. It was funny but not chilidish. Very well written. You got your point across and it came out very good. Keep up the good work you have great talent just fine tune it now and we could see some good things.
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Post by Adam on Aug 10, 2007 10:20:26 GMT -6
I had a match with a wrestler by the name of Big Bad Wolf one time. He like a lof of wrestlers with long names for the most part went by just BBW. So I did a roleplay were I'm online trying to find "information" about him and start freaking out when I find nothing but fat naked chick sites. Just figured I'd throw that in there so you could laugh at my expense. Also, both good roleplays JC. You too JA, even though you didn't ask....
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