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Post by Angel on Mar 17, 2008 5:42:41 GMT -6
Just wanted to know what you guys think of my new character?
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Falcon
Full Member
You haven't seen anything yet.
Posts: 636
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Post by Falcon on Mar 18, 2008 15:58:26 GMT -6
Wait.. hold on.. I'm still laughing about all that...
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Post by Angel on Mar 29, 2008 5:22:54 GMT -6
The King of Diamonds is awesome, anyone else agree?
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Post by Angel on Mar 29, 2008 15:58:11 GMT -6
New Diamond rp up
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Rob Diamond
Junior Member
I'm not a born leader... I'm a tough act to follow...
Posts: 340
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Post by Rob Diamond on Apr 9, 2008 20:26:12 GMT -6
Another Diamond rp, tried to be slightly more serious with it, let me know what you think.
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Post by Justin Marsham on Apr 9, 2008 21:24:11 GMT -6
I like how you made him seem like the underdog. The dialogue carried the scene and made the audience, or at least me, want to see this match. It's got that "he's young and hungry" feel to it that'll draw the reader in.
Overall, I liked the RP. The only point I will suggest is, at times, I had a hard time following who was saying what even though the dialogue was colored coded. Every once in a while, throw in a Bob says, Roy replies, etc.
But, really, it was great!
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Post by Angel on Apr 10, 2008 10:10:50 GMT -6
Thanks
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