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Post by msjsn3 on Mar 11, 2009 15:13:18 GMT -6
Nice rp. Liked it a lot.
Is the Ace back....or is it a dream?
LOL
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Post by adm on Mar 11, 2009 16:15:39 GMT -6
I don't know but holy ****ing christ was that one epic rp. I dunno the word count but...that was just one giant story that drew upon the past, present and hopefully the future.
Best Ace Rp of 2009, possibly since I started in nCw. I think I'm gonna keep that banner in my sig...till you win that belt.
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Post by Rob Diamond on Mar 11, 2009 16:55:36 GMT -6
Pav, honestly, great role play man, and you know I mean that, because I don't give you allot of feedback, something I'd like to say I'm sorry about while I am here.
Can't wait to see what you got in store for part 2.
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Post by Xavier Williams on Mar 12, 2009 22:44:17 GMT -6
U can haz title now...
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Post by The Ace on Mar 14, 2009 10:04:50 GMT -6
thanks for the positive feedback guys, now your desires for part 2 are fulfilled...on a side note, I apologise if it offends but it does get rather dark towards the end, probably darker than I've ever written Ace before...but on a lighter note, I would publicly like to thank Jason for trusting me with his character and giving me the background I needed to tell the story...so thanks, buddy, and I hope you all enjoy it...
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Post by msjsn3 on Mar 14, 2009 10:39:53 GMT -6
another awesome rp. Glad to see the rps I used to see. Anything to help a friend out...I mean you/Damien helped get Sexy Jason back on track. Keep up the good work. Nice to see Ace back even at my expense.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Mar 14, 2009 10:40:46 GMT -6
*Holds up sign* Ace for World Champ
Seriously, that RP was one of the best I've ever read. Not from just here, not from just you, but from everyone, ever. It was amazing, nothing was wrong with it. It was all great.
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Post by adm on Mar 14, 2009 10:47:16 GMT -6
Another good one, but this time the only thing I can say is SHORTEN THE DAMN THING!
That could have been 2 rps, to be honest. And it's hard to deal with 10 plus page rps that span almost 6k words. It didn't get boring, just...a lot to read in one sitting. But as far as anything else goes, there's nothing I can say besides the fact that it was as good as the first, just that the length could be adjusted. I can see the PPV rps combined that long, stretching the one out over two or three.
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Post by The Ace on Mar 18, 2009 13:24:23 GMT -6
First Sovereign PPV is up...Enjoy...
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Post by adm on Mar 18, 2009 13:59:59 GMT -6
YOU MADE FUN OF BATES! Nah, jk, it was a good nudge. The only thing I have to say, like I did in MSN is that it still runs a little long. Great rp but there's about a page of stuff like when you talk about Diamond, that could be cut. The real threat was Jason with his...whatever about the teen girl thing...that's it. And I super marked for the batman/superman thing. I think Angel will notice and mark, probably not as much being the Marvel guy, but he'll mark a little. I like where you're going, keep goin there
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Post by Kevin Kruger on Mar 18, 2009 16:13:12 GMT -6
Yeah great stuff man and brilliant work on the CD stuff about Kevin Kruger and the Kruger family lol.
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Post by The Ace on Mar 21, 2009 17:42:25 GMT -6
RPs 2 and 3 are up so I'm done for this PPV week. Wish me luck.
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Post by adm on Mar 21, 2009 17:55:24 GMT -6
Good luck...And Hammy, your number may indeed be up. Sorry, but you've got a shot at the 2x club eventually
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Post by Maniac on Mar 21, 2009 20:34:02 GMT -6
Ace, you have improved by leaps and bounds in a matter of two weeks. I am highly impressed because I honestly didn't think you had the ability to write really good role plays.
The third one was simply the best rp you've ever done in my opinion, the length was good, teh talking was good, everything was good in that one.
I agree with Bates on the first two, they could have been a little shorter, but all in all they were also very well done.
Keep this up Pav, I love it.
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Post by Cyrus Daniels on Mar 28, 2009 12:59:39 GMT -6
my two rps are up...the 2nd rp was vastily different to what i usually write, hopefully it worked, it was just an experiment...
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Post by Joe Everyman on Mar 28, 2009 19:10:01 GMT -6
I thought both RPs this week were good, and it's good you're proving every week why you should be world champ.
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Post by The Ace on Apr 4, 2009 12:16:25 GMT -6
Okay thanks Joe, and my two for this week are done. Feedback as always is much appreciated.
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Post by Gib on Apr 4, 2009 12:29:58 GMT -6
great work this week, it was fun going against another of the best NCW has to offer. thanks
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Post by Cyrus Daniels on Apr 4, 2009 12:41:44 GMT -6
Thank you Harold, it means alot...
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Post by Maniac on Apr 4, 2009 18:52:37 GMT -6
Your first rp was absolutely pure gold, the second one ran on a little long imo, but it still had a point. Amazing work over all this week man.
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Post by The Ace on Apr 10, 2009 15:39:04 GMT -6
Right, thanks Angel, my first Kathy rp for this week is up. Feedback appreciated.
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Post by The Ace on Apr 11, 2009 12:29:02 GMT -6
Right Kathy's second rp is up, tried the song style for this one....
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Post by adm on Apr 11, 2009 12:53:38 GMT -6
...thanks for being part of my latest essay with the first one and your two damien rps This was ****ing sweet. Had I waited a little bit longer maybe I might have included it in my essay as an example alongside mine and Joe's, as it is another form of song rp, different than the other two. Great stuff, I loved the subtle ressurection of Kat near the end. just...a little bit of psycho goes a long way sometimes...and I'm sure you're going to get...CAT SCRATCH FEVER! this week in bed
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Post by The Ace on Apr 16, 2009 10:31:15 GMT -6
Right, first RP for this week is up...hopefully you guys enjoy it...
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Post by adm on Apr 16, 2009 10:36:26 GMT -6
you ruined my 2nd rp...thanks It was pretty funny...now go team up with Awesome and re-form the Smoking Aces so you can be the tag team of our dreams again.
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Post by Maniac on Apr 17, 2009 14:44:57 GMT -6
As a fan of QL, I am saving all feedback for part 2. Do not pull an Everyman and give us a fantastic beginning then no ending.
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Post by The Ace on Apr 18, 2009 16:37:58 GMT -6
Especially for you, the concluding part is up...enjoy, and I used Rob purely for effect, hope you didn't mind too much...
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Post by Mike Honcho on Apr 18, 2009 16:43:20 GMT -6
You sir... Are down right great. *claps* I would say you're my best friend but I'm going to bury my best friend. So in other words... good work. *slaps Ace's butt*
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Post by Maniac on Apr 18, 2009 18:44:41 GMT -6
I believe feedback should be honest and not taken personally... On that note, part 2 was absolutely, perhaps the single greatest rp I've ever read of yours. If not the greatest, it's in the top five. Way to conclude the QL storyline, I loved it.
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Post by The Ace on Apr 22, 2009 15:04:53 GMT -6
First ANTR rp is up. It is lengthy, don't say I didn't warn you....
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