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Post by Adam Knite on Apr 19, 2008 22:10:11 GMT -6
Yeah I don't normally ask for feedback, because I hate to hear "you suck so hard" responses. However I'll go ahead and see what everybody thinks. How did I do this week?
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 16, 2008 11:18:09 GMT -6
Your rp against The Ace is probably the best roleplay I've ever seen you write...which, ok isn't much.
But still, kudos!
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Post by Adam on Jul 16, 2008 12:20:46 GMT -6
Your rp against The Ace is probably the best roleplay I've ever seen you write...which, ok isn't much. But still, kudos! **Yawn** You're mad at my comment (we get the point)... leave the personal attacks in my PM box if you have a problem.
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Post by adm on Apr 23, 2009 16:22:38 GMT -6
It's been forever since you got feedback so I'll feeds you some backs on ANTR rp #1
A little long...I popped it into word and it's 3200 or so words, which, actually helps it not drag so much.
Other than that, nothing bad to say, and we all know you don't get feedback I'm just proving I don't pick on a single person.
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Post by Adam Knite on Apr 23, 2009 16:34:00 GMT -6
Thanks a lot KLB.. I was trying to go a whole year without feedback... and you screwed it up.
Well... unless you don't count Spike's douchbaggery comment... then I guess I did go a year. Nice.
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Post by adm on Apr 23, 2009 16:38:19 GMT -6
I never count anything Spike says in douchebaggery...ever.
And sorry for screwing up the year-long thing...I was just going through the rps and feeding some backs...**** forgot bout Dirty Deal
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Post by Adam Knite on Apr 23, 2009 17:04:12 GMT -6
well there's another one in case you feel like jizzing some more feedback.
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Post by adm on Apr 23, 2009 17:21:00 GMT -6
*jizzes* that was cuz of the rp...not all over the feedback...wow...WOW...
though you did repeat yourself a few times with talking bout how Ace is pathetic...it fits Adam. And was pretty accurate to boot. Very good stuff. This title match is going to kick ass.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Apr 23, 2009 17:49:08 GMT -6
Same with the first RP, it is the same thing here...
Oh...
****!
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Post by Adam Knite on Apr 25, 2009 14:20:33 GMT -6
Well... there's the last one.
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Post by adm on Apr 25, 2009 14:31:54 GMT -6
Interesting to go the route of the interview this time, nice way to cap off the ppv. And yes...we are pulling for you, big guy
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Post by adm on May 29, 2009 21:46:24 GMT -6
Nobody gives you feedback but I should do it for this latest rp... I HATE when you are right...about just about everything. The rp was great. Now it'll be great to see where this goes
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Post by Xavier Williams on Jun 4, 2009 15:52:01 GMT -6
Everytime u RP u almost make me regret the fact that I'm stealing your wallet... almost.
But srsly, I dig your work, since your one of the few who can do quality work without having your rp drag on for ages, which I think is pretty epic especially around PPV, because I do look forward in reading your work.
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Post by Adam Knite on Jun 4, 2009 16:41:11 GMT -6
Thanks X, means a lot man.
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Post by Maniac on Jun 4, 2009 20:34:06 GMT -6
I wish I could say something that wasn't already said, but your easily one of the best all around rpers I've ever seen. Theres like no style you can't do, and all of them seem to fit perfectly. So kudos on another great week.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jul 25, 2009 22:41:50 GMT -6
In regards to both "Training" rps, they were both very funny. If to steal a line from you...lolZ ;D
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Daredevil
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The Death Defying Daredevil!!!
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Post by Daredevil on Aug 3, 2009 10:20:49 GMT -6
Excellent work on your latest RP man....your a F'N machine that no one can stop. lol
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Post by adm on Aug 3, 2009 10:24:15 GMT -6
Great rp...gives me good things...and *puts on Grammar Nazi Costume* Let's just leave it at that part shall we?
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 3, 2009 11:10:50 GMT -6
your latest RP made me tingly in my shorts!
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Post by Adam Knite on Aug 8, 2009 2:05:20 GMT -6
By special request I finished mine early, and got two devo's up. 1 of the devos ties into the third RP, and I kinda like it.
So there we have it.
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Post by adm on Aug 8, 2009 8:40:40 GMT -6
You rule...this week has been nothing but fun rping against you, and though you've been talking bout "Ace-ish" reply stuff...let's just say you keep giving me fuel I can't help but use. Your rps are just...full of material May the best man win. This week = Best match I've had in a very long time.
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Falcon
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You haven't seen anything yet.
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Post by Falcon on Sept 13, 2009 2:05:33 GMT -6
You have no idea how hard it is to hate you. You steal my dignity, my self respect, and my virginity. And then you rp.. and it's awesome.. and I love you all over again.
*cries and screams for Jesus*
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Post by Joe Everyman on Apr 6, 2010 14:00:47 GMT -6
I want to make love to your last RP, 'Revenge'
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Post by Shawn Styles on May 25, 2010 19:05:32 GMT -6
Well...... I thought Velez's RP was really well done against you and Steve. Mainly you, since that's who he targeted the most. However, I'll say the same thing here as I did in Brad Kane's RP about Angel...... Your latest was an excellent counter-RP to the one Velez did. Not only did you call him on every single last thing, but you did so in a way that if you would look at it in the sense of two wrestler's on screen cutting promos, he stole all the momentum he had with his away from him. Kudo's to that as I will admit after reading his, it was really well done and it would've been a hard task to accomplish. The italic dialogue between what I assume is Adam and Kelly added a great touch to the whole feel of the RP and the point you were getting across alongside of bashing the hell out of the Young Guns. But what seriously topped it off for me.... Was the spelling of "kelly". That's what really sold the emotion Adam is going through. You're doing a ****ing fantastic job with this storyline. And I'm not saying that because your the admin and I'm trying to suck up. I'm ****ing serious, good work.
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Post by Steven Luke on May 26, 2010 6:41:43 GMT -6
I just wanted to point out one thing I was a little upset about with your work this week because I'm not sure yet if I'm going to go after it in my RP or not this week. I we upset that you spent most of the RP about the Young Guns shooting down that we're living in the past and living off of old exploits and saying no one cares because we've done nothing since joining, just like everyone else here... Personally between me and Charlie we've mentioned past exploits as little as possible in the last two weeks and have been working on nothing in our rps except to gain merit here and maybe it's just me expecting to much of you but I expected you to take a higher road with it then that and actually see what we're talking about and not take the easy route that everyone else is taking and bash the group just based on the "old" name.
On the other hand the RP was solid as always and you did an excellent job trying it in with the feud and I loved the Kelly and Adam back and forth. Was a bit different from how you normally RP and I think it came out well
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Post by Adam Knite on May 26, 2010 7:16:21 GMT -6
In his/my defense, this is the group of wrestlers who a couple of weeks ago were threatening to break his little sister's neck, he likely wasn't going to play nice. I wasn't going to mention that because in another RP he had said Zelda had handled it.
The parts about the Young Guns not accomplishing much yet was based off the Velez rp where he said Adam hadn't done anything to be in the Reborn match, so Adam was basically saying "what have you done?". That's why towards the end he said "when you do go out and accomplish something, then you can talk" (paraphrasing).
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Post by Steven Luke on May 26, 2010 11:06:55 GMT -6
makes sense, just rubbed me kind of wrong the way I read it. No matter, it was an excellent RP
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Jul 7, 2010 11:08:21 GMT -6
Dude...... How am I supposed to beat you if you post rps like that? COME ON! Friggen think for yourselfer.
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Post by Charlie Velez on Jul 7, 2010 11:45:01 GMT -6
"You won that battle, you took control of the chess board and took my queen." That's such a great line.
Epic stuff broham.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jul 21, 2010 0:47:31 GMT -6
I loved "My Sister". Excellent RP, and the beginning was the best beginning I've seen come from an RP...well...ever.
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