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Post by Alex Jones on May 28, 2008 20:45:56 GMT -6
I'm insecure and need reassurance....
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Post by defunctlies on May 30, 2008 1:14:39 GMT -6
Dude, unless I manage to pull something out of my arse that equals Shakespeare, I'm pretty sure that Hamster's going have another bad week.
I think I'm going to put a loss onto my record right now, just incase.
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Post by Alex Jones on Jun 9, 2008 18:35:37 GMT -6
Feedback on my "can you feel it" rp if you please?
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Post by Alex Jones on Jun 24, 2008 19:36:41 GMT -6
just finished my "A better day rp...what'd you think?
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Post by Davey Ortega on Jun 24, 2008 19:40:50 GMT -6
I liked it.
I liked it better then any thing else you have done here. Keep it up broseph
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Post by Angel on Jun 25, 2008 10:16:37 GMT -6
Both your role plays were real solid this week man, keep this up and you won't stay title less for long.
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Post by Angel on Jul 21, 2008 19:19:32 GMT -6
Sup... Nice rp...
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Post by Alex Jones on Jul 22, 2008 17:30:09 GMT -6
The nature of the beast is up....RATE ME GRADE ME.....
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Post by Angel on Jul 22, 2008 19:12:31 GMT -6
I'll give it a solid eight.
Over all very good, very impressed. Should be a tough decision for the judges.
Now I feedbacked you... You feedback me.
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Post by Alex Jones on Jul 22, 2008 19:14:53 GMT -6
I already did hahahahaha
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Post by Angel on Jul 22, 2008 19:16:02 GMT -6
I mean for my next master piece....
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Post by Angel on Jul 28, 2008 22:42:04 GMT -6
Bored much?
Both awesome role plays though. Way to set the bar high for your opponents this week.
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Post by adm on Jul 28, 2008 23:28:34 GMT -6
Yes, you set the bar high. The only thing that sucks is that you've gotta work later this week, so you had to put up both your rps early. But they both kicked some serious ass, so you go man.
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Post by Alex Jones on Jul 30, 2008 17:18:16 GMT -6
...and I found out I had todasy off so I didn't need to rp twice in one day...BLEH
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Post by Alex Jones on Aug 6, 2008 22:30:33 GMT -6
"It's personal angel" is up..enjoy....
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Post by adm on Aug 6, 2008 22:33:54 GMT -6
You showed me a lot of that when you were writing it, definitely gonna love seeing where this match goes. Great insults all around...and thank god you're on my team cuz I'd HATE to have to face you if you keep this up.
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Post by Angel on Sept 1, 2008 19:29:22 GMT -6
Did I ever tell you I love facing you?
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Post by Alex Jones on Sept 2, 2008 17:20:46 GMT -6
yes yes you have and it's mutual sweet cheeks
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Post by Alex Jones on Sept 2, 2008 21:43:52 GMT -6
Emo's steroid freaks, losers and playboy bunnys? is up
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Post by Angel on Sept 3, 2008 19:40:28 GMT -6
Well my man, once again, I think we killed it. Awesome job.
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Post by Alex Jones on Sept 15, 2008 23:05:05 GMT -6
I never claimed to be a saint is up in development
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Lord Dominicus
Junior Member
Resident Loser
More Evil than Rob Diamond Could Ever Hope to Be
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Sept 15, 2008 23:11:16 GMT -6
BOOOO! YOUR RPS SUCK! GO HOME LOSER!
Your last two rps (the tag and developmental one) were actually two of the better ones I've seen you put out in a while. The tag one was nice because you focused more on the opponents at hand, which is smart, also, you didn't bog it down with details, which makes me fall asleep.
The developmental one was...interesting to say the least, I always cringe when somone lashes out at a woman, but it happens I suppose. But I'm damn glad to see somone who's close to AJ finally stick it to him.
Not bad at all
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Lord Dominicus
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Sept 23, 2008 21:10:33 GMT -6
*Nelly is watching the promo on TV*
Nelly: Ah! That couch just talked! ......I must interview it!
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Post by doc on Sept 25, 2008 1:05:37 GMT -6
liked your second rp for the ppv
edit: didnt realize that was your third I was reffering to
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Red Cobra
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Post by Red Cobra on Sept 25, 2008 5:13:40 GMT -6
Geez, you cranked out those three RP's for the PPV, in a hurry!
1st RP: Could have been much more descriptive as to where you were and what you were doing or thinking. The dialog, for all being from one person, was good. Your character had a lot to say from the previous Collision and upcoming PPV. All in all, good rp, just needs more description.
2nd RP: I actually didn't like this one as much. for one, I think you made Carly too intelligent. She's more of a ditz, as I've read in her description. The interview itself was essentially what you had been talking about in your 1st rp. The ending was cool though. It created a solid conflict but I wish you had been more descriptive. Again, what is AJ thinking? What is he doing? Why did JFK leave so suddenly? The very last sentence you say AJ is thinking to himself but don't elaborate. It's those details that make rp's better!
3rd RP: Much better description in the beginning. I like knowing what AJ is doing when he is talking. More similar rants. I like the Napoleon reference. Brownie points! Basically, was really similar to the first RP, just used different words and references. I wish you would have stuck with the JFK angle. You had conflict, run with it. If you didn't describe what AJ was thinking in the last RP when JFK left, I would at least like to know what he's thinking in the next rp, ya know?
So yeah, that's about it. Be more descriptive and try to play to a storyline more then just simply ranting against opponents. That's OK to do in 1 rp a match, but you gotta find an angle somewhere else, I think.
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Post by Alex Jones on Oct 17, 2008 1:05:09 GMT -6
"Split personality" is up
there's a future change I'm trying to get through if you get it great if you don't it'll become clear over the coming weeks
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Post by doc on Oct 17, 2008 2:34:19 GMT -6
reminded me of the "inside my head" rps I done running up to my last match with mgk where in character I had nothing but hate and determination to win but in Doc's head he was feeling insecure and anxious about the whole situation
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Post by adm on Oct 17, 2008 22:07:25 GMT -6
Reminded me of a lotta things, man, Pretty good stuff. As per usual, you make me wanna face you and hopefully put up a good showing.
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Post by Alex Jones on Oct 27, 2008 19:21:01 GMT -6
first one for the ppv is up
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Post by adm on Oct 27, 2008 19:24:08 GMT -6
NOO!!!
Wait, YES!!!!
Great rp, a definite good pace for this match. Gonna be VERY tough to beat you, but fun.
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