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Post by Philip Burns on Sept 16, 2008 5:42:34 GMT -6
I guess if i ever want to hold any gold I need one of these threads...
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Post by Mike Honcho on Sept 16, 2008 13:28:50 GMT -6
After you beat me up, who am I going to build ramps for now!? Your keys are on the hook by the door.
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Post by Philip Burns on Sept 24, 2008 13:27:59 GMT -6
got my first ppv rp up. if any of the facts are incorrect please pm me so i can correct. i stayed up quite late for that one.
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Post by Red Cobra on Sept 25, 2008 5:27:54 GMT -6
The opening scene in the hospital was great! I loved reading the dialog and I really wanted to see who this Julia character was. Using the dates was cool, I'm not gonna fact check em for ya, though Just so you know, not everything in your RP needs to be presented to the public. For instance, my last RP wasn't in front of cameras. I don't see why the hospital scene needed to be. Other then that, the end dialog was good. A very, very good roleplay, sir
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Post by Leonard Fox on Sept 25, 2008 10:40:08 GMT -6
The opening scene in the hospital was great! I loved reading the dialog and I really wanted to see who this Julia character was. Using the dates was cool, I'm not gonna fact check em for ya, though Just so you know, not everything in your RP needs to be presented to the public. For instance, my last RP wasn't in front of cameras. I don't see why the hospital scene needed to be. Other then that, the end dialog was good. A very, very good roleplay, sir Because nCw has a rule. If you do it in an RP, then it was on camera and open for public viewing. That way nobody can say "When I stabbed the guy in the eye with my penis, it wasn't on camera..... so you can't mention it in your RP"
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Post by Red Cobra on Sept 25, 2008 12:36:07 GMT -6
Because nCw has a rule. If you do it in an RP, then it was on camera and open for public viewing. That way nobody can say "When I stabbed the guy in the eye with my penis, it wasn't on camera..... so you can't mention it in your RP" I'm not sure I agree with that rule. Sometimes, there are things that happen to a wrestler that shouldn't get shown on camera. For instance, waking up in a hospital in a year before, flashback. It's not like his opponent can use that to roleplay, anyways.
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Post by Philip Burns on Sept 25, 2008 13:22:26 GMT -6
Pretty much everything I do is in front of a camera. I look at it like a movie. Every physical thing is caught on camera. Of course the camera were in the hospital, I was injured in a match and Im sure my condition was of importance to the fans and company.
but as far as dreams and stuff go I look at it like a movie. It should be presented in text, but your opponant really should respond to it, it should be as though they cant see it.
I try to stay away from dreams and hallucinations as much as possible
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Post by Red Cobra on Sept 25, 2008 13:26:59 GMT -6
Pretty much everything I do is in front of a camera. I look at it like a movie. Every physical thing is caught on camera. Of course the camera were in the hospital, I was injured in a match and Im sure my condition was of importance to the fans and company. but as far as dreams and stuff go I look at it like a movie. It should be presented in text, but your opponant really should respond to it, it should be as though they cant see it. I try to stay away from dreams and hallucinations as much as possible It's funny, i use to RP a character who had a voice in his head. it took other RP'ers quite some time to get used to the fact they they couldn't hear that part of him because they would mention things the voice in his head said specifically. I suppose you have a point. There shouldn't be too many situations that are left out of the camera's eye. And the movie reference is a good analogy. I usually have 1 rp a show that is strictly a character building rp that isn't intended for public view. Either way, you didn't need to mention to the camera in your rp, that the hospital part was filmed
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Post by Leonard Fox on Sept 25, 2008 13:28:52 GMT -6
Because nCw has a rule. If you do it in an RP, then it was on camera and open for public viewing. That way nobody can say "When I stabbed the guy in the eye with my penis, it wasn't on camera..... so you can't mention it in your RP" I'm not sure I agree with that rule. Sometimes, there are things that happen to a wrestler that shouldn't get shown on camera. For instance, waking up in a hospital in a year before, flashback. It's not like his opponent can use that to roleplay, anyways. Promos are skits, meaning they are produced, camera's don't randomly appear places and guys start cutting promos. As soon as it hits the boards, it's "on camera". If I allowed people to say "this part of my promo doesn't count, it's private and not viewable" then what's stopping people from murder, or rape in their promos, nobody can see it right? So nobody knows right? Well i don't play that way, sorry. If you put it in a promo, it's on camera and everybody can see it. That's the official nCw rule. All feds do things differently, that's why you should read a feds rules in depth upon joining. 2. Appropriate Behavior: Pretend that the second you start an RP there is a camera there, somehow, someway recording the events. These events will be displayed on television therefore the rules of real life television apply. Do not kill somebody in your roleplay, if you did there would be video proof and your character would go to jail. To not have explicit sex in your Roleplay, again, that would not get shown on TV. You can imply things have happened, but no descriptive nudity or the like. This is efedding therefore it's about wrestling, try to remember that in a roleplay.
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Post by Red Cobra on Sept 25, 2008 13:53:45 GMT -6
For sure. There shouldn't be too much sexuality description in a roleplay, anyways. I wasn't talking about improper content being shown *off camera*. I was simply making a case for some privacy
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Post by Leonard Fox on Sept 25, 2008 16:54:18 GMT -6
For sure. There shouldn't be too much sexuality description in a roleplay, anyways. I wasn't talking about improper content being shown *off camera*. I was simply making a case for some privacy Give a guy an inch, and he'll take a mile.
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Post by Philip Burns on Sept 25, 2008 17:15:41 GMT -6
Pretty much everything I do is in front of a camera. I look at it like a movie. Every physical thing is caught on camera. Of course the camera were in the hospital, I was injured in a match and Im sure my condition was of importance to the fans and company. but as far as dreams and stuff go I look at it like a movie. It should be presented in text, but your opponant really should respond to it, it should be as though they cant see it. I try to stay away from dreams and hallucinations as much as possible i dont really mean they dont know about them at all, but like they couldnt have seen it. like what is being presented in the RP is more of a recollection than an actual event. this way its still "on camera" but isnt physically "seen". i think we are splitting hairs anyway. I JUST WANT TO HAVE FUN! AHHH!!!
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Post by Mike Honcho on Sept 27, 2008 16:29:42 GMT -6
So, is this a feed back thread or a debate on the rules? Very nice Mr. Bruns. Now send in the hounds! lolololololololololololololololololololololololololol!
Go to hell, Powers! Ps, Don't kill me Adam...
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Post by Angel on Sept 27, 2008 23:31:07 GMT -6
Your Colbert rp was pretty bad ass man, keep it up.
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Post by Philip Burns on Sept 28, 2008 0:28:17 GMT -6
thanks. i know theone after that was crap. i can only post one on the day of deadline so i was trying to hit midnight. next one will be better.
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Post by Philip Burns on Sept 28, 2008 7:12:20 GMT -6
Maverick is up.
it doesnt look as long as it really is because its all one man dialogue. behold the wall of text
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Post by Angel on Dec 5, 2008 5:45:24 GMT -6
I hope you can get something else up, but even if you don't that one rp was pretty awesome.
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Post by Philip Burns on Dec 5, 2008 14:04:52 GMT -6
got two more on the way
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Post by Angel on Dec 7, 2008 13:45:22 GMT -6
Burns: NO! I'm not scared of clowns; I am enraged by them! Theres a huge difference. But it doesn't matter because he quit doing that when his retardation healed. Didn't you hear that part?
I nominate you for World Champion sir.
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Post by Angel on Dec 7, 2008 13:56:39 GMT -6
Just finished your third rp, pure gold this week man, keep it going.
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Post by Maniac on Apr 17, 2009 4:50:21 GMT -6
I can't beleive how long it took me to find this page.
Now, you told me what you were going to do before you wrote it, and i'll be honest, I was skeptical whether or not it'd be any good, but man, that was way above my expectations. I'm glad to see your back and not missing a beat.
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Post by Philip Burns on Apr 17, 2009 5:11:30 GMT -6
it sets the stage for part two very nicely. i like this thing weve begun.
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Post by Maniac on Apr 17, 2009 14:43:20 GMT -6
We? I can't take any credit for you genius kind sir.
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Post by Philip Burns on Apr 24, 2010 13:43:12 GMT -6
consider this thread resurrected.
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