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Post by Shelly Taylor-Jones on Aug 24, 2011 1:09:58 GMT -6
1st ppv rp is really solid man. Good length makes sense and it's aggressive i like it
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Post by Jason Evans on Aug 25, 2011 8:58:25 GMT -6
Read both of your Nothing to Lose rps so far. Like both of them.
Like how Seth is following Alex Jones.
Keep up the good work
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Post by Seth Evans on Sept 7, 2011 9:52:20 GMT -6
Feedback on the latest, please.
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Post by Seth Evans on Sept 24, 2011 17:04:37 GMT -6
Feedback for the week, please.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2011 8:45:11 GMT -6
A solid set of RPs this week for the PPV, good break up of smacktalk and character development. A good showing for Seth this week.
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Post by Mercedes Vargas on Sept 25, 2011 11:26:54 GMT -6
In a match that should be hotly contested for the second most prestigious prize in NCW, you, sir, have definitely made this an even playing field wih your solid RPs. Character development and proming made for a good week for Seth Evans in a match where the stakes can't get any higher, especially for the current champion.
That being said, the best of luck to you in Assault X, Graff.
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Post by Freakke on Oct 8, 2011 15:01:24 GMT -6
Damned good promos. Very strong, very well written. Its gonna be a bumpy week for Freakke I'll tell you that.
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Post by Seth Evans on Oct 11, 2011 11:14:22 GMT -6
Thanks for all the feedback so far, guys. I put my first RP for this week up last night, and wondering if I might be able to get feedback for that one too.
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Post by Seth Evans on Oct 14, 2011 21:08:32 GMT -6
Feedback for this week.
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Post by Seth Evans on Oct 21, 2011 19:52:13 GMT -6
Feedback for the week, please.
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Post by Seth Evans on Oct 29, 2011 20:52:52 GMT -6
Feedback, please.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Oct 29, 2011 23:14:47 GMT -6
Seriously, bro... since you came back its like you really got a handle on your character and the development of that character. Your roleplays just keep getting better man. Only advice I can give is try not to be so wordy. Sometimes less is more. Every RP doesn't have to be 3000 words. Other than that, top shelf bro.
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