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Post by Seth Evans on Aug 12, 2009 2:32:40 GMT -6
I guess I might as well ask for feedback.
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Post by adm on Aug 12, 2009 11:03:25 GMT -6
It was a pretty Solid rp...I don't think I'm going to uh...say what I'm thinking about Freakke's chances right here and now...but you might not even need a 2nd is all.
Good length, very few errors...find a way to keep the errors on grammar down and make your character interesting when the rps get longer and all shall be well and good from my end.
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Post by Seth Evans on Aug 12, 2009 13:20:19 GMT -6
If you don't mind me asking, what errors did you notice? I always read through my RPs before posting them and I don't notice any errors. However, I'm not an English major so I know for a fact that they're there... I usually come across them like three days later when I'm randomly reading them.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 12, 2009 14:18:59 GMT -6
I liked it, man. Looking forward to see how your character develops and turns out. Jeff is our resident Grammar Nazi...
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Post by adm on Aug 12, 2009 18:35:58 GMT -6
If you don't mind me asking, what errors did you notice? I always read through my RPs before posting them and I don't notice any errors. However, I'm not an English major so I know for a fact that they're there... I usually come across them like three days later when I'm randomly reading them. I didn't say you had anything major...it was more a comment on how there are a few of the new guys, like your opponent, who really could use spell check.
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Post by Seth Evans on Aug 12, 2009 19:10:26 GMT -6
Alright, sweet. That's good to know.
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Freakke
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The PunchLine
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Post by Freakke on Aug 15, 2009 14:57:05 GMT -6
They were good rp's. Can't wait for the next match we have.
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The Death Defying Daredevil!!!
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Post by Daredevil on Aug 21, 2009 16:23:36 GMT -6
Great RP's man and good luck in our match, have enjoyed RPing against you and may the best man or beast win. lol
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Post by Seth Evans on Aug 24, 2009 15:59:13 GMT -6
Just posted my first RP towards my match... let me know what you think.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 24, 2009 17:17:24 GMT -6
My only complaint is really a big one... WAAAAAAAAAAY toooo LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG! 4000+ words is more than 2 RPs... try to cut it down man. I would have cut the first part into another developmental
Then used the last half as the RP... Just me tho
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Post by Seth Evans on Sept 1, 2009 18:11:26 GMT -6
Just got my first RP up. Feedback?
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Post by Seth Evans on Sept 16, 2009 19:23:04 GMT -6
Any feedback would be respected from my latest RP, to all the PPV ones. Please specify which one you're giving feedback on.
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Post by Seth Evans on Sept 18, 2009 22:20:54 GMT -6
Feedback?
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Post by Maniac on Sept 19, 2009 19:57:52 GMT -6
Loved both rps this week, you and Glen played off each other well and made voting on the winner very hard for me. Great job.
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Post by Seth Evans on Sept 23, 2009 12:19:05 GMT -6
Feedback?
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Post by Xavier Williams on Sept 23, 2009 12:52:48 GMT -6
...****
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Post by Seth Evans on Oct 2, 2009 20:01:39 GMT -6
Feedback on both of mine through the week?
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Post by Seth Evans on Apr 23, 2010 19:39:26 GMT -6
I can has feedback?
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Post by Seth Evans on May 3, 2010 15:32:23 GMT -6
Feedback on the latest, please?
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Post by Tara Fenix on Jun 5, 2010 1:16:41 GMT -6
Feedback, please.
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Post by Seth Evans on Jun 10, 2010 2:05:17 GMT -6
feedback for this week.
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Post by Seth Evans on Jul 11, 2010 10:46:15 GMT -6
Feedback for this week, the week of Picture Perfect, please.
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Post by Nikki Michaels on Jul 25, 2011 0:43:23 GMT -6
Greast return graff..welcome back
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Post by Seth Evans on Jul 25, 2011 18:37:32 GMT -6
Thanks, I'm hoping to make an even better one tomorrow or something.
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Post by Seth Evans on Jul 28, 2011 19:01:59 GMT -6
Feedback?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2011 19:40:59 GMT -6
Good first RP Seth, I liked how you referenced your past it helps guys like me understand a bit more about you guys who return.
It was well paced, flowed in the right places and was a godd response to Jonas. You two are going to make this weekend very interesting.
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Post by Seth Evans on Jul 30, 2011 8:50:05 GMT -6
Thanks, Roberto. Could use feedback for my last one of the week.
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Post by Dr Jonas Potter on Jul 30, 2011 9:08:23 GMT -6
Your RPs this week have been fantastic! I think you and I will put on one hell of a show...as the opening act, but still.
Good job, brother.
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Post by Seth Evans on Jul 30, 2011 9:12:37 GMT -6
Always a pleasure RPing against you, dude. Thanks for the feedback, and looking forward to see the result and then the round two. Like my RP said, I'm sure we'll both go at it again with the World Championship on the line someday.
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Post by Seth Evans on Aug 12, 2011 22:11:39 GMT -6
Feedback, please?
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