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Post by Davey Ortega on Aug 5, 2007 16:56:51 GMT -6
I liked the show, but I have to agree with what I heard all my time in e feds. Color is a plus. Also you could title the matches before they start.
ie Davey Ortega v Chris Wilkins
*Start match*
Makes it a lot simpler to navigate.
Also you could put notes on all matche son said card.
Just suggestions, take them how ever you see fit.
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Post by Adam on Aug 5, 2007 17:10:23 GMT -6
No color was because I wanted to get the results up ASAP since I had a full day today. I'll be spicing them up along with some little mistakes here and there that I've noticed.
Some people label the matches and even different segments but that's just not how I do things, I think that just encourages people to read only their matches and not the whole show. Me and Shaun spent a lot of time writing matches and getting segments on there and I think it's only fair in return that the whole show gets read. I'm sorry but that's just my style, always has been.
I like the idea of writing "notes" on all the matches on the card page. If I can find time where I'm not being a lazy arse I'll try to put those in from now on.
I always appreciate suggestions, anything you guys see that you think would be cool I'm always open to new ideas. I've got some free time right now so I'll be adding the color to the results.
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Post by jjbiggs on Aug 5, 2007 17:43:38 GMT -6
I think the results were clustered. And honestly, I got tired of reading Boone's name every other line. It seemed like his character was involved in everything and that started to get annoying.
Also, this isn't exactly like Ortega's suggestion, but maybe you could put like one of those HR lines in between each match and segment? At the end of a match and before a segment starts, just put one of those lines to divide it and tidy it up a bit.
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Post by Banny McBannedpants on Aug 5, 2007 22:04:11 GMT -6
I was actually hoping to see a JJ Biggs or a Davey Ortega segment in the results myself...Adam told me he had 3 segments total..I didn't know that was including me. Show would have been a lot more interesting with more segments. I think we'll start asking for a segment included with the 2 rps per show and 1 segment plus 3 rps per pay per view...max...would make the shows more entertaining and prevents me from talking about myself in my results. lol
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Post by John Anthony on Aug 5, 2007 22:23:13 GMT -6
I thought they were good for the first show. Small things here and there. They are human and they are doing there best. Its not easy to write matches. But yeah and line in between matches would be good I think. Good job to everyone that wrote the results. It will be better when John Anthony is on the card. This is the week of The Machine!!!!!!!
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Post by Davey Ortega on Aug 5, 2007 22:39:22 GMT -6
Ofcourse it will be better next week. The Genius Macrobian main events it.  |
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Post by Jack Manson on Aug 6, 2007 13:28:07 GMT -6
I think for a first show it went well. The matches not being seperated didn't make me lose track of what was going on or who was facing who etc.
Obviously as time goes on and we all start contributing with segements and building up fueds we will have more of an input in how the results turn out, like attacks, call-outs, challenges, interviews etc
Im looking forward to next week.
Great job everyone that was involved this week, staff and roleplayers. Let's keep it going!
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