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Post by msjsn3 on Feb 2, 2008 4:47:06 GMT -6
I post the 2nd early cause my work schedule for the weekend is like from 5pm-4am Friday and Saturday[also same hours on Saturday]....that is the only reason why I posted it. Thanks for the comments
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Post by msjsn3 on Feb 5, 2008 16:28:07 GMT -6
Sexy Jason Made of: I did get Spike Kane permission for using him in this rp....any comments....as usually Thanks in advance
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Post by msjsn3 on Feb 6, 2008 22:17:23 GMT -6
Posted Got Balls? Any comments is welcome....as usually thanks in advance
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Post by msjsn3 on Feb 12, 2008 19:10:26 GMT -6
What a Fall: Any comments...Thanks in advance
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 12, 2008 19:19:00 GMT -6
Hey bud.
Another good roleplay from you, enjoyed reading it. Keep an eye on your spelling though because there were some typo's and stuff in there.
Also found it a bit strange that Kathy is calling him "Sexy Jason" and not just "Jason" lol. I didn't get that. Just sounded weird.
Other than that mate there's nothing I can crit you on. Keep it up.
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Post by Spike Kane on Feb 12, 2008 19:56:31 GMT -6
Yeah i find people calling him "Sexy Jason" at times inappropriate. Like friends or Kathy, but hey. I enjoyed the roleplay it showed a good bit of character in Sexy Jason and did what a roleplay should, summed up what happened, how you feel, and how you feel about whats going to happen Kudos, keep it up!
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Post by Adam on Feb 13, 2008 14:11:09 GMT -6
What's wrong with that, people walk around calling me Ugly Arse Adam all the time.
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Post by tylerjacobs on Feb 13, 2008 18:29:08 GMT -6
Well....I didn't wanna say anything dude but...
*hands Adam a mirror, which promplty cracks as he looks at it*
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Post by msjsn3 on Feb 21, 2008 23:03:29 GMT -6
Any comments on Still here…still the nCwXtreme Champion…. still have the sexiest body in professional wrestling
This one the title is longer....alot longer....I mean a lot longer they usually....tell me what you think about the title...should I keep them short or make them long
Thanks in advance
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Post by adm on Feb 22, 2008 12:26:11 GMT -6
The title don't matter, make it fit the rp. It was a great rp like you've been putting out there lately. I'm gonna have to work extra hard to battle this cold and get my 2nd up.
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Post by msjsn3 on Feb 26, 2008 18:40:15 GMT -6
Any comments about Excitement in the air! Thanks in advance
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Post by msjsn3 on Feb 29, 2008 15:27:08 GMT -6
I just thought I let you know....if you want to give me feedback please let me know which one it is about....this is open to anyone....so to make it easy I will not post when I finish a rp....if you have any feedback you know where to put it....As always Thanks in Advance!
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Post by msjsn3 on Mar 26, 2008 9:08:04 GMT -6
Comments on Student vs Teacher
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Christian Kane
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Post by Christian Kane on Mar 26, 2008 17:36:41 GMT -6
hey bud good rp as usual. see you have improveed over here isnce the last time i was here lmao. Keep Up The Good Work mate.
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Post by Dante Cross on Apr 6, 2008 0:26:56 GMT -6
Since we know I tend to be pretty honest with my judgement, I want to say, first off, You are one of the hardest working roleplayers in nCw, if not the hardest, You always seem to post, like you actually are really enjoying being in nCw, and I appeciate that, so do the other staff members I would think.
But overall, despite the hard work ethic, I feel your roleplays have dived off in recent weeks, and I haven't really been able to get into them very much, as I tend to think, I'm reading the same thing over and over with you, I'm not saying you're crap, because you're not, but I just haven't been able to enjoy the roleplays as much as I usually did, before I learnt that cancer sucks.
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Post by msjsn3 on Apr 6, 2008 5:48:20 GMT -6
thanks for giving me your honest opinion.
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Post by msjsn3 on Apr 24, 2008 13:59:07 GMT -6
Let me know what you think. I tried a different approach with A strange Interview
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Post by tylerjacobs on Jun 10, 2008 8:13:54 GMT -6
Dude, I hate to say this but I think that roleplay was rather rushed, and you REALLY need to proof read once you're done because there's some serious errors there.
But Jason, let me explain. Jack and AJ are hard working roleplayers, so being booked in this match with them, you should feel proud being acknowleged as a good and hard working roleplayer. Take your time, and proof read and you'll be fine amigo.
Other than that the content itself was pretty good, maybe a little fleshing out could make it more gripping but it's a decent start.
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Post by msjsn3 on Jun 21, 2008 11:54:06 GMT -6
Revenge is up...I was trying for a short one....tell me what you think
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Post by msjsn3 on Jun 27, 2008 12:03:55 GMT -6
Screw with being nice! is posted. I am trying a different angle. Let me know what you think
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Post by msjsn3 on Aug 4, 2008 18:06:13 GMT -6
Posted We Will Have Control over in the developmental page. Still trying to make rps heelish...Let me know what you think. Thanks in advance
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Post by msjsn3 on Aug 20, 2008 19:22:14 GMT -6
Care to comment on Georgia Dome Bound? Posted on the developmental page. As usually Thanks in advance
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Post by adm on Oct 8, 2008 11:17:25 GMT -6
I know you didn't put up an "update" about your latest rp, but I would like to make some comments on it.
Overall the idea was really good, and you've definitely shown you deserved that win over Hammer. The only thing I would really have to say about it would be that I don't really GET the "Try Harder Management" thing...but I may just not be understanding what you meant by that considering you won National Title matches two weeks in a row, won it at PPV and defended at Trauma.
It isn't that big a thing, just kinda wondering if it was an angle or just you trying to say "Give me tougher opponents next time"; cuz if it's an angle that's cool, just didn't know if it was something you wanted to say or if it had purpose. But that was it, good stuff. Funny ending, with the whole date thing, Sexy Jason is STILL Sexy.
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Post by Leonard Fox on Oct 8, 2008 11:22:28 GMT -6
I know you didn't put up an "update" about your latest rp, but I would like to make some comments on it. Overall the idea was really good, and you've definitely shown you deserved that win over Hammer. The only thing I would really have to say about it would be that I don't really GET the "Try Harder Management" thing...but I may just not be understanding what you meant by that considering you won National Title matches two weeks in a row, won it at PPV and defended at Trauma. It isn't that big a thing, just kinda wondering if it was an angle or just you trying to say "Give me tougher opponents next time"; cuz if it's an angle that's cool, just didn't know if it was something you wanted to say or if it had purpose. But that was it, good stuff. Funny ending, with the whole date thing, Sexy Jason is STILL Sexy. I set up an angle for him where Sexy Jason thinks the nCw management is doing everything they can to take the belt off of him. Like he had to defend the belt 6 days after winning it, then the next night there is a number 1 contenders match between two of the top nCw wrestlers. So the "try harder" bit is Jason saying that the nCw management will have to do a better job, because Jason is one step ahead.
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Post by adm on Oct 8, 2008 12:51:46 GMT -6
Gotcha, that's kinda cool actually, good job on the idea
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Post by msjsn3 on Oct 11, 2008 12:45:15 GMT -6
When I seen that in the match...I liked it....so I decided to use it as a rp....so who ever wrote that match...Thank you....it gave me a idea.
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Post by msjsn3 on Nov 3, 2008 20:29:34 GMT -6
Right Frame of Mind? Is posted. Would appreciate any comments on it. This is an idea I present to Adam with
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Post by Angel on Nov 3, 2008 20:55:44 GMT -6
I don't know where your heading with this, but I liked it. It was interesting to see Sexy Jason kind of doubt himself and break away from his usual thing. Keep it up.
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Lord Dominicus
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Nov 3, 2008 21:36:17 GMT -6
I love the Sexy Jason character, how his whole world revolves around whether or not he looks good. GENIUS. This is gonna be hard to rp against, nice stuff.
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Post by msjsn3 on Nov 7, 2008 15:13:12 GMT -6
Right Frame of Mind? (Part 2) is posted. I hope that I tied it in with the first one ok
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