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Post by jlhfan69 on Jul 3, 2008 17:14:41 GMT -6
ROFLCOPPTER!!!!
Probably one of the funniest RPs I've seen from you although it should be obvious as to why. Promo was excellent, the dialog with Layla and Steve was flowing near perfectly.
One of the better RPs I've seen from you in quite some time.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Jul 15, 2008 4:55:13 GMT -6
"Maybies" has been posted.
I'd like to know what you thought. Let me know here and I'll get you back.
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Post by jlhfan69 on Jul 15, 2008 11:18:49 GMT -6
I really enjoyed it. I hate going against you sometimes because it means one of us might have to lose. This RP was classy stuff. Plus with this shoulder injury flaring back up, it gives Steve an excuse in case he happens to lose a certain match on Sunday regardless. Either way, fantastic stuff.
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Post by doc on Sept 26, 2008 2:14:04 GMT -6
Your latest rp was 100% solid from start to finish and overall top notch.
One thing that was obvious from the outset was that your novella-style writing has improved a lot since I last read an Awsome RP. You had a ****load of potential at XHF and VXW, which came out particularly when you beat Venom but I think now the potential's gone and you've got it mastered. At times it was like reading a Stephen King novel with your writing style, the aftermath of the girl in the hotel room was pulled off well to boost the character of Steve Awsome and the promo was top notch at digging at The Ace in particular.
Overall a really top RP.
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Post by Dante Cross on Sept 26, 2008 7:18:13 GMT -6
Totally glad to see, all that work we put in together to get you to your maximum Potential is really paying off
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Lord Dominicus
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Oct 25, 2008 2:48:48 GMT -6
When I started reading your latest rp, I thought "Oh dear god, this isn't the whole thing is it?" But no, it was just the intro. Not bad Steve. Oh, and a door getting kicked off it's hinges for no reason whatsover- classic XHF. Love it.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Oct 25, 2008 23:16:51 GMT -6
Yeah...its just a new promo style I'm trying out....
wich BTW...id like to know what people think about it.
Does it work? Should I keep it? Or should I switch back to the paragraph method?
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Oct 25, 2008 23:28:29 GMT -6
Although I already told you, just in case you forget: I think you should go back to the paragraph style, or at least do it half and half. Considering that rps are supposed to be televised promos, one should have something....well....happening.
Also, in terms of character, this seems more like something that John Morrison might do in one of his black and white movies, as crazy stuff happens he narrates. Wheras Steve Awesome is usually a little more entertainment-based, so it wouldn't be beyond him to set up a very elaborate situation that allows him to say these sorts of things while still looking....normal. Well, better than normal, Awesome.
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Post by Lord Dominicus on Oct 30, 2008 19:11:05 GMT -6
Hey Steve, glad to see you're trying that 1st person stuff I showed you, I think it works well for you.
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Falcon
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Post by Falcon on Nov 2, 2008 8:32:16 GMT -6
The road I walk is paved with gold
To glorify my platinum soul...
If there was a "perfect" Steve Awesome song.. that was it..
Excellente, mi amigo
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Post by Angel on Nov 2, 2008 20:15:51 GMT -6
Man, you didn't make it any easier for me. I had allot of fun this week, I hope we can do it again.
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Post by Maniac on Jan 23, 2009 22:48:19 GMT -6
Son of a... If one more person posts a video in their rp, I swear to god i'll cut myself... more than usual.
Steve, if you told me you were going face, I'd call you crazy, but seeing it in action, it just feel right, like Steve walked through fire, got burned, and now he knows to go around the fire.
Honestly, it was a REALLY good rp from you this week.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Jan 29, 2009 20:26:46 GMT -6
I has fedbeck plz?
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Post by Maniac on Jan 29, 2009 21:32:54 GMT -6
Face Awesome is taking shape and I like it and am enjoying the ride and evolution of this character. Good work.
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Falcon
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Post by Falcon on Feb 1, 2009 12:27:06 GMT -6
I bow down to your *Majesty*
Because I's lovez me some Steve Awesome..
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Post by Falcon on Feb 12, 2009 23:35:34 GMT -6
Very few times have I ever hated my own character, but reading the latest in Steve Awesome goodness, I started thinking..
"Gee.. maybe I am that much of a dick."
Only you dude, only you...
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Post by Maniac on Feb 12, 2009 23:59:36 GMT -6
Way to pwn Falcon. I love watching him get pwned.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Feb 24, 2009 15:31:48 GMT -6
Posted a new rp.
Gloves.....
Tell me what you think. Tried something a little different. Let me know what you think please?
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Post by Cyrus Daniels on Feb 24, 2009 16:19:07 GMT -6
nice rp...dunno who jayde is but she seemed fun...
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Post by adm on Feb 24, 2009 16:37:19 GMT -6
This rp just screams Awesome. It is funny and quirky...and lots of...cum jokes about "Load" of popcorn... Good stuff, hope to see Frosty come and give you something more to work with, and don't forget your gloves...you might get Frost Bite if you don't
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Falcon
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Post by Falcon on Feb 24, 2009 23:01:27 GMT -6
/sniffle
They grow up so fast!
lol, seriously loved it.. I love face Steve Awesome as much as I love heel Steve Awesome..
And I don't care who knows it..
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Post by Maniac on Mar 1, 2009 14:01:25 GMT -6
Who da man?
Steve da man!
Now give me my pants back.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Mar 19, 2009 1:11:35 GMT -6
New rp posted...."Dork" Tell me what you thought plz....
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Post by adm on Mar 19, 2009 11:43:51 GMT -6
Good...you dork. Seriously...you should have expected SOMEONE to call you a dork with that rp It was great, I just had to make fun of the name...just...once.
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Post by adm on Apr 11, 2009 9:40:50 GMT -6
Before I tell you how good it was...I gotta correct your humor(I know it is humor cuz that's how Awesome rolls): Bates isn't a raging drunk except immediately after title defenses, and he's only 30 years old.
On to the rp...the ONLY thing I didn't like, was the beginning. I don't think Steve was anywhere in that hotel room and it really didn't fit too much into what was going on. Other than that, it was standard...AWESOME. ANd that's why he's called STEVE AWESOME!
A- rp if you ignore the beginning, it's a solid B if you keep it in there.
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Post by Maniac on May 1, 2009 4:31:29 GMT -6
Best Devo Rp Ever.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on May 2, 2009 23:31:09 GMT -6
hey guys.....just wanted to hear your thoughts on the Awesome/Falcon feud.
Post it here.
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Post by Steve Awesome on May 29, 2009 20:41:16 GMT -6
feedback?
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Post by adm on May 29, 2009 21:19:02 GMT -6
I said it in the cbox but I'll say it for the permanent record...wow.
You made me cry with the scene of Hope talking bout daddy being gone then go full-on psycho with the pulling out of your hair, etc etc. Harold has got to have pulled the best out of you like he's pulled some of the best out of me. Good stuff...very good.
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Post by Steve Awesome on May 31, 2009 3:11:55 GMT -6
....more feedback....?
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