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Post by tylerjacobs on Dec 11, 2007 16:08:16 GMT -6
Post all your feedback for Steve Awesome roleplays here.
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liamb
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Post by liamb on Dec 12, 2007 13:21:17 GMT -6
hey great rp how did you get that big band of writing going across
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Jason Norton
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...Business is about to pick up!!!
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Post by Jason Norton on Dec 12, 2007 13:30:38 GMT -6
hey great rp how did you get that big band of writing going across on the menu where it says add tags, count 7 buttons over you should see a <--M button. Click that, and put your text between that. Steve, great roleplay. After round one, 50-50. Margin of error. +/-.01 percent. Round two, coming up.
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liamb
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Post by liamb on Dec 12, 2007 13:47:16 GMT -6
thanks
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Post by msjsn3 on Dec 12, 2007 15:57:38 GMT -6
Good rp. Liked it a lot. Keep up the good work
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Post by Steve Awesome on Dec 15, 2007 12:51:55 GMT -6
Catch the new one guys.
"For Paps."
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Jason Norton
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Post by Jason Norton on Dec 15, 2007 23:59:37 GMT -6
I liked it a lot. I wish I coulda got another one in, but I had christmas to do tonight with the family. You'll probably pull this one out. Either way, nice job.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Jan 1, 2008 18:33:14 GMT -6
new rp
"Man in The Mirror"
Check it out.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Jan 5, 2008 18:29:24 GMT -6
end of the week brings us "Turn up the Trouble"
Be there or be square.
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Jack Manson
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It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 5, 2008 18:44:39 GMT -6
Good roleplaying this week Steve, second one was especially a good read. KUTGW.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Jan 12, 2008 9:11:41 GMT -6
"Steve The Fisherman" For your viewing pleasure
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Jack Manson
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It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 12, 2008 9:42:20 GMT -6
Good job this week Steve. Both roleplays were great and it's looking to be a good match.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Jan 23, 2008 18:09:35 GMT -6
First pay per view role play is up.
"Waiting In Line"
Comments can be seen below this post.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Jan 26, 2008 21:08:01 GMT -6
Four Simple Reasons
Love or hate it? Let me know here.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Feb 2, 2008 16:28:37 GMT -6
Flight of Doom!
I tried something a little new I think. More of a long scene instead of a promo.
Like it? Hate it? Tell me how I can improve?
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Feb 2, 2008 19:31:09 GMT -6
First off.. like it. Good stuff and plenty to work with in the one I'm about to write.
Secondly... I think you broke the rp limit with it. It's 2 rp's that predominately feature each character... having already done 2 rp's (1 by you, 1 by Ace) featuring both characters that's the limit. Then again I can't really say anything on the matter. But still, great rp.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Feb 14, 2008 5:31:26 GMT -6
New one called "A Dark Knite"
Definately would like some feedback on this one. I feel like it turned out rather well and I'm wondering what you guys think.
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Jack Manson
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It's the one that kills, not me!
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 14, 2008 7:22:02 GMT -6
Hey dude, good roleplay this week.
I think I prefer your roleplays when they're being serious like this, and not jokey like the Smokin' Aces roleplays you've done recently.
No crits needed, a good roleplay, keep it up.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Mar 1, 2008 13:11:19 GMT -6
Feedback me pretty please?
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Post by recklessjack on Mar 1, 2008 13:17:53 GMT -6
I really liked your stuff this week. Had a pretty good flow to it and all. Been fun!
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Post by Steve Awesome on Apr 1, 2008 22:26:16 GMT -6
Okay so...new rp up.
Just want to know what you guys thought of it. Was it just too long or did it flow okay? Did it hold your attention at all?
I just sort of got into a vibe with that one and just wrote was coming out of my head. was that a good idea or should I never do it again.
Your thoughts?
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Post by defunctlies on Apr 2, 2008 13:47:21 GMT -6
Well written and not at all hard to follow, mate. Good use of using a third-person perspective and the flashback sequence.
I sense another awesome Awesome victory (work it out for yourself).
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Post by Spike Kane on Apr 3, 2008 9:29:30 GMT -6
Not bad at all my friend.
Little bits seemed unimportant or wahtever bu the main idea and such was there.
Nice read dude, keep it up.
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Post by Dante Cross on Apr 6, 2008 0:03:10 GMT -6
You Suck, I hope a fountain of Hot Pockets fall on your head, then you have to depend on me, to eat all of them, so you can live.
But seriously....Let's go get some Hot Pockets right now.
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Post by tylerjacobs on Apr 17, 2008 5:51:13 GMT -6
Man your latest roleplay was absolutley amazing. I really enjoyed reading it and you seem to be really in full flow with your character.
Nice work dude.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Apr 18, 2008 5:20:45 GMT -6
Thanks for the feedback dude. It means alot.
And I know that this latest rp is completely different then the stuff I've done before. But when your dealing with Trent Helms you sort of end up out of your element.
That said....
This latest rp (inspired by Trent Helms) I think is either the most genious thing Ive ever written or the most atrocious piece of garbage ever.
Please let me know lol.
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Post by tylerjacobs on Apr 19, 2008 10:13:03 GMT -6
*jaw drops*
Sweet jesus-****ing-h-christ, that was pure gold my friend. Pure ****ing gold!
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Post by Dante Cross on Apr 30, 2008 16:09:59 GMT -6
Why...I think someone is trying to be Randy Orton....
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Post by Justin Marsham on May 1, 2008 23:24:39 GMT -6
I've always been a fan of your roleplays, so if I never complimented you before -- then don't expect it now.
I mean, damn good job man. You've amazed me and impressed me time and time again with your roleplays. So, if I don't tell you good job then just assume that's what I'm thinking!
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Post by Steve Awesome on Jun 13, 2008 19:29:51 GMT -6
Hey guys...how am I doing so far?
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