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Post by adm on May 31, 2009 9:48:06 GMT -6
Just when I thought it'd be a damn tough one for you to win you tie it up...you and Harold is AMAZING...AMAZING!
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Post by Steve Awesome on Jul 9, 2009 22:16:51 GMT -6
Can I get a little feedback? Babies?
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Post by adm on Jul 9, 2009 22:20:38 GMT -6
I really don't know what to say about this one...cuz I really don't know where the Sampson/Awesome will be going...seriously. It was funny, the things Sampson did behind Awesome's back as he tried to promo, I just...am kinda confused...considering I thought typically these chars stay out of the other char's business(you know what I mean...and god I hope Falcon and you don't team up)
But it was funny, some of the things you said were cool, I just...really don't know where it was going so...it's kinda confusing me...
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Post by adm on Jul 24, 2009 23:26:04 GMT -6
First thing that got me on a bad way toward this rp...the first opening description got really heavy with unneccesary information. Do we REALLY need to know it's Yosimite Sam PJs?
Ok, but on to the goods...the intro to the Talking seg was a little long too...but after you got AJ and Awesome in...it was really good humor there. Yet, with the overabundance of descriptions right away...the middle to the end is really lacking for anything more detailed than the simple ones...and with how Carly talked, I wanted to see her...maybe like try and play with Steve's hair or Aj's hair or something, just...to be "close" to them and fawn over them just a bit more.
As you said to me in AIM, not your best, but it wasn't complete crap either, it just wasn't as good as the rp I judged for you earlier this week in my Essays lol.
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Post by Maniac on Jul 25, 2009 22:56:51 GMT -6
First thing that got me on a bad way toward this rp...the first opening description got really heavy with unneccesary information. Do we REALLY need to know it's Yosimite Sam PJs? Ok, but on to the goods...the intro to the Talking seg was a little long too...but after you got AJ and Awesome in...it was really good humor there. Yet, with the overabundance of descriptions right away...the middle to the end is really lacking for anything more detailed than the simple ones...and with how Carly talked, I wanted to see her...maybe like try and play with Steve's hair or Aj's hair or something, just...to be "close" to them and fawn over them just a bit more. As you said to me in AIM, not your best, but it wasn't complete crap either, it just wasn't as good as the rp I judged for you earlier this week in my Essays lol. Do you seriously expect everyone to crap lighting? Steve's rp was fine just the way it was. His opening decriptions were meant to describe how alone this guy is with all his fancy ****, as for in between descritpions, not everyone needs to know every single little movement all the time.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Aug 7, 2009 14:16:48 GMT -6
feedback?
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Post by Spike Kane on Aug 7, 2009 15:26:46 GMT -6
I liked your rp a lot, in-character I could see some things that would be picked out by Spike, but things are down to interpretation really.
Good retort sir.
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Brad Kane
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...::What I Get::...
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Post by Brad Kane on Aug 7, 2009 19:06:18 GMT -6
I forgot how much I hated Steve Awesome and yet loved him at the same time.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Oct 10, 2009 14:22:21 GMT -6
Looking for some feedback on my last rp.
WW1
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Post by Will Washington on Oct 10, 2009 21:53:20 GMT -6
Whoever said Steve Awesome is the gold standard is correct. You came hard on me.
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Post by Maniac on Oct 18, 2009 10:29:44 GMT -6
Damn that Trent... Guy and his advice making you all cool again and not mopey. Nice rps my man.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Jan 15, 2010 14:42:09 GMT -6
Just digging this up so people can use it......even though they wont
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Post by Will Washington on Jan 15, 2010 14:49:06 GMT -6
Here's my overall view of your RPs:
Your RPs are the most enjoyable to read out of everybody from the roster. They have legitimate comedy. You read one and you're like.... this guy has a talent for writing.
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The Ace
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2008 nCw Road To The Gold Champion
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Post by The Ace on Jan 27, 2010 8:06:54 GMT -6
I really enjoyed your rp against lance, it had the humour in the cd portion and the trash tslking was of your usual high quality...
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Atreyu
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Post by Atreyu on Jan 27, 2010 8:18:37 GMT -6
RP gold my friend. A truly enjoyable read, I love how you give Steve some realism whilst throwing in some comedy at the same time.
Great work.
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Post by Shane Hunt on Jan 27, 2010 10:15:15 GMT -6
Great RP, with some good comedy elements. I'm looking forward to seeing more of the road trip
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Jan 31, 2010 7:51:51 GMT -6
feed back would be appreciated on my second and third rp.
Did you laugh?
Did you hate it?
Did you "X" out in mid read?
WHATS THE WORD PEOPLE!
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Post by Steve Awesome on Feb 24, 2010 14:30:52 GMT -6
new rp is up!
"1,322"
Check it out.
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Post by Kelly Fox on Feb 24, 2010 14:40:45 GMT -6
It honestly may have been the best Steve Awesome RP I ever read.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Feb 24, 2010 15:27:34 GMT -6
I thought it was "Awesome".... could totally feel his anger and hatred towards Harry....
Easy read, bro. It flowed well, and I think it got a good point across.
Well Done, Holmes!
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Post by Steve Awesome on Apr 27, 2010 19:58:09 GMT -6
So uh...whats a guy gotta do to get some feedback around here?
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Post by Zelda Knite on Apr 27, 2010 20:26:38 GMT -6
Good work Steve-o. I thought it really added a lot to this, and worked off mine very well. Really brought out a depth of emotion in Steve, while still coming off a bit crazy but not so crazy that you don't feel for the guy.
Good job.
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Post by doc on Apr 30, 2010 18:30:23 GMT -6
Fantastic work as always. The feud as a whole was/is a great example of how to execute a great angle.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jul 30, 2010 13:44:46 GMT -6
You want feedback? YOU WANT FEEDBACK?! Well he's you're ****ing feedback!!!
...you did Will Washington better than Deez does. It's hard to give you real feedback because it wasn't your normal character(s). But on a purely RP stand point, it was very well done. It flowed like your Steve RPs, but it just felt different, which it was should have done anyway. And the ending was good too, one of those shiver up the spine types of moments. Emotional response from RPs is always a deal maker too. So, well done this week Steve.
...now go feed my back or I'll kill you.
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Post by Cliff Clinton on Dec 11, 2010 14:47:41 GMT -6
Yeah...I only ask for feedback every so often and now is the time.
What did you guys think about my last rp..."spicy" and the whole Awesome Love thing in general. I wanna know what you like and what you dont like. Constructive criticism helps you to get better. So any and all would be appreciated.
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Post by Steven Luke on Dec 11, 2010 18:39:02 GMT -6
All I can say is this, that last RP made ME want to punch Steve Awesome in the face.
You're doing a wonderful job man. This is working out into another great angle for you.
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Post by Clint Renner on Apr 15, 2011 13:49:27 GMT -6
Bukkake Man gives it 9 and a half loads
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Post by Trish Newborn on Apr 17, 2011 17:03:56 GMT -6
Like I said on AIM, I really like your character. Your first rp had me laughing, Steve poking Zelda was just pure golden from the start. The second one was just as great as the first, and continues Steve's quest to getting Crystal Hilton. What really was icing on the cake was the final role-play as it made me feel bad for him, because after all that work Steve was shoot down. Todd Williams should back off and let Steve Awesome work his magic, damn it. lol
All-in-All, I really enjoyed your rps and wish you luck tonight. You pulled out some high quality entertainment, and it'll be interesting where Steve Awesome goes from here.
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Post by Angel on Apr 18, 2011 0:26:42 GMT -6
Yo, like I promised, feedback time baby.
Dude, AMAZING. I loved every damn second of every rp. Don't change a thing about Steve because dammit, i love him as is.
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Post by Caleb Lockwood on May 19, 2011 23:03:25 GMT -6
You are the king of buttloving. You and Trent are my current pick for Match of the Night, because you two are just tearing the damn house down. Don't change a thing, baby. You're amazing.
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